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Posted: 18 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: coolgirl249

awsome fic 👏 👏 👏
like u said in first part it seems 2 b really different frm all other fics.i would love to read it 😃 😃 😃
cont soon wid queens intro 😊 😊 😊

thanks😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: del_geo

nice part 😛 it reminds of me sum movie which i cant think of now do continue soon 😊

yep one of the scene is copied u tell em which 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Divjot_10

OK let me guess..... the drama queen is Kripa and the beauty queen is u ofcourse 😉 and the money queen for some strange reason i think is Unum 😕 .... makes sense to me and i hope it does to u too. K... Awesome intro of the guys and i can't wait for the girls intro... it'll fun i think with the punishment and all. good luck and continue the next part soon. K... Bye!!
Divjot

im just continuing and thanks for ur super comment like always and i hope theyve stopped giving u so much work anyways next part cuming soon take care luv ya😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: fizzypop

grt part
i really like the 1st part plz continue soon

yep just continuing😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: amneetkaur_24

wow I love it! It's amazing! Funny part with Angad, Lakshya, and Rishi. Cont. soon!

thanks there more to cum😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: brainychild92

yaar this is an amazing fanfic.. cant wait for the SCARY parts.. and the handling of the girls.. what did they tell sir and wat is the secret..

continue sooooooonn

thanks im just continuing 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: kripa_angad=luv

great part guys 😳 Continue soon

thanks

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Posted: 18 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: kriti_6teen

want 2 bet on it????

i can bet my life on it.

btw nice part.

will b waiting 4 the net part

plz plzs make it fast.

continue soon

ok uve bettted ur life next part cumin soon😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#70

Part 2

Angad,Rishi,lakshya make there way to the teacher.they knock on the door,the teacher lets them in ,heres the teacher

Sir-yes kids

Angad-sir the gals are smoking in the buildings

Sir-what

Lakshya-yes sir

Rishi-cum well show u

Meanwhile we see 3 girls one doing her nails,one chatting on her latest phone and one reading a book.

The girl reading her book-shaz will u pls stop doing ur nails its irritating me

We now see the girl doing her nails,the fashion queen, its shaz

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Shaz-hey Kripa,if ur nails rent done properly do you know that can be a big insult to fashion

We now see the other girl reading,its kripa the drama queen

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kRipa-shaz u and ur fashion I neva understand

the girl on the phone-hey guys u no that pink Mercedes I ordered

kripa-yes

galonthepone-its cum its outside

shaz-omg anum that's brilliant

we now see the gal who was on the phone its anum add a pic the money queen

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anum-I know but im thinking that I should by anotha one

kripa-wat

anum-ea I mean its Mercedes I wanted a Ferrari

shaz-comeon anum kitna paisa karch karogi

kripa-ha and even I fu do buy a new one wat u gonna do this one

shaz-give it to me

anum-ya

kripa-cool

a boy came passed to them and threw ciggarate packets at them,thye all picked one up

kripa-oi u dropped

it was to late there were gone and the teache had just come

teacher-gal u been smoking

kripa-no sir

teacher-then why r u holding ciggareye packets in ur hands

kripa-sir vo ladke

that's when they see the boys laughing

anum-sir lakshya gave me mine,he goes its good for health

shaz-and sir Rishi gave mine,he said it help me with my energy

kripa-and angad gave m saying that it has less calories

laksh-angad-rishi-no we didn't sir theyre lying

teacher-that's it ive had enuf now the trip u lot were supposed to go to the waterworld u r not going there anymore

angad-wat

teacher-u will be going to the history trip

lakshya-na man ure kidding

Rishi-sir u cant do this

Shaz-yeah sir well be goo

Teacher-shut up first u 3 queens come up to me telling me that theye doing drugs

Kripa-but they were

Teacher-I said shut up and then these 3 boys cum to me saying u smoked

Kripa-but we didn't

Teacher-miss sharma do u wanna get excluded or go on a history trip

Kripa-(whispers)excluded

Teacher-wat was thtat

Kripa-history trip

Teacher-good now my other naughty group are inside to go with.ull be leaving tomorrow morning

Angad-wateva

The teacher goes

Rishi-u lot happy now

Shaz-excuse me ts ur fault

Angad-no it was urs

Kripa-shut ur mouth it was urs

Laksh-don't tell ma mate to shut his mouth u shut urs

Anum-oi tell her that again ill slap u on the face and then ill even py for ur funeral

Laksh-why don't u pay for a brain

Angad-forget these lot laksh lets go

Anum-its not like we wanna stand with u lot anyways

They all go there separate ways.

Meanwhile in the house the principal secretary is gone there to check it out,he opens the creaky door and puts the boards and pens out everything the students will need,he set the printer up there,he put sum paper in it to see if it works but the paper gets jammed then he puts his finger in to get it out but his finger gets jammed and his hand starts printing in chopped pieces.then from behind that same guy came and places his head and smashed it into the computer screen,he then wrapped him in the blanket and put him also in to the wall.he then saw a document he opened it to find that he will be having a group of preys for tomorrow.

Man-yeh sab ayege mere gar mein koi nahin asakta mein uske khoon piloonga yeh log kyun nahin samajte mughe idar par koi nahin chahiye yeh sirf mera aur mere parivar ka ghar hai.to kya hua agar vo aj nahin hai lekin uske ehsaas abhi tak mere saat hai and I have to find my love and bring her here and noone will dare enter m y house and if they do the wall is waiting for them.

Preview-new group intro

-group head to the history trip

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