arjun-shaleen ss bhai bhai ka pyar

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey dears
ek naya idea aayi hai mere dimaag mein

isme purani etf team by purani I mean(when riya was there)

aur arjun ka bhai jo shaleen hai

with no past

shaleen etf join karta hai aur sab shock hajata

kafi confusion bhi hota hai

par isme ek twist hai

woh main update mein pata chalegi

to kya khayal hai

update karu

if yes then will update on saturday or sunday

btw don't worry

isme dono bhai ki love story bhi hai😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting concept, plzz continue dear... eagerly waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wht are you waiting for yaar ...??????
Shuru kar jaldi jaldi...
Waiting for arjun shaleen...
Since Riya hai
So
There will be ariya naa???!!!!!!
Awsum
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sounds interesting
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wah kya bat he Arjun n Shaleen ak sath 😊
maza ayega
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey dears
as I told you I'll update

so here it goes

sameer" team"

everyone looks at him, sameer continues" commissioner sir ka phone tha, kal se ek naya member join karne wala, as third or second in command ya dono..."

arjun: "dono matlab"

sameer :" ye to mujhe bhi nahi pata rawte, com sir ne kaha hai, to koi matlab to hogi aur woh ye bhi keh raha tha ke hummese koi ek bohut kuch hone wala hai usse dekh kar, "

shree" par sir, ye sab to thik hai, lekin uska naam to bataye na"

sameer" mujhe nahi pata shree, com sir ne uska naam nahi bataya hai , ab kal hi sab kuch pata chalega, anyways, bohut der hogayi hai, kal milte hai, good night everyone"

saying this he goes away, while arjun goes to his cabin and choree and riya looks at each other

shree:"yaar riya, kaun ho sakta hai yaar"

riya:" pata nahi yaar, kal pata chalega"

chotu" yaar jo bhi ho, I just hope woh woh iss khadus ki tarah na ho, warna pata nahi hamara kya hoga"

shree " waise chotu, woh khadus ho ya na ho, par usse hamari ri par lattu na ho, warna uska pata lapa hojaega"

riya glares at them and throws a file on them

riya " tum dono ko to main nahi chodungi, abhi dikhata houn"

riya runs behind them and they all had some fun before heading home, all this while there was someone who was not happy, he was sitting silently in his cabin looking at someone photo, it was the pic of his brother, shaleen, he was missing him so much today, he does not know why, he close his eyes and remember all the time they have spent together, they lived for each other, they were each others life, arjun (yes its our hero ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte) rest his head on the head rest of his chair and smile, they were both crazy, sometimes he wonder how their parents has ever handle them, his thought was broken by the thrill ring of his phone, he looks ta the caller id and sigh, it was his mom, he picked it up and say

arjun:" yes mom, i'm coming"

then he cuts the call and grab his things and head towards his place still thinking about his lovely bro.



the next morning, all comes to the office very early, they wanted to know who is the knew recruit and also they had a lot of paperwork to do, which they hate the most, everyone makes a face to complete the paper work except our hero arjun. he was still thinking about his bro.

after sometimes everyone was working silently when all of a sudden, the conference door opens and someone gets in, they all looks at the person and was shock, no-one could move, sab toh behosh hone ke liye tayar hai except one person, who has a big smile on his face, and that was arjun, everyone turn around to look at arjun, they kept looking at arjun and at the new recruit alternately, they thought they were dreaming, their eyes was seriously deceiving them.

arjun looks at his team and understand their dilemna but he ignores them and runs towrds the new member, arjun just hugs him and cries "shaaa"( yes its shaleen. ACP Shaleen Suryakant rawte, arjun's sha)

shaleen hugs arjun back, they both were very happy, they felt they were meeting each other after decades, soon they parted away and looks at the others, they chuckle, arjun looks at his bro and then again at his team, he cleared his voice to get their attention, everyone looks at him

arjun" team this is my TWIN brother ACP Shaleen Suryakant rawte, and the new recruit of etf, am I right sha"

shaleen winked at arjun and nodded, arjun now understand the meaning of com sir, truly third in command, ya second in command ya dono, kya pharak parta hai, arjn aur shaleen ek hai, dono bilkul ek jaise hai, ek dousere ke carbon copy hai dono.

shaleen looks at the team amd smile, "don't worry bilkul jun ki tarah hi houn, akhir judwa bhai jo hai hum,"

everyone smile silently, they were still not out of the shock completely.

after sometimes sameer succeeded in composing himself, he looks at his team and then at arjun and shaleen, he clears his throat, everyone looks at him, even shaleen and arjun who were in their own world since shaleen enter

sameer:" eerrr, shaleen, welcome to the team, main tumhe sabse introduce karta houn, this is shree, our tech expert, this chotu, our commando, and this riya our reshearch specialist aur tumhare bhai ke bareme batane ki zarurat nahi hai.''

shaleen chuckle and said hi to everyone, and then

" waise mujhe istarah mat dekho, manta houn mujhe yahan dekar kafi shock ho kyunki tum logon ko pata nahi tha kr jun ka ek judwa bhai bhi hai, but i'm sure, we'll be comfortable wiz each other, waise, ek aur baat, jun ki tarah kaam mein bohut serious houn lekin out of work, i'm another person just like jun, so don't worry"

shree" another person?"

shaleen" I mean, masti karta houn, I enjoy myself"

shree" arjun sir bhi?"

shaleen"ha jun bhi"

everyone eyes widen, seeing their reaction shaleen understand" er tum log jun ko nahi jante, but don't worry ab main aagya houn na, tum log ek alag hi arjun ko dekhoge, trust me"

everyone looks at arjun and arjun smile, they were shocked, riya was lost in his smile, while others were ready to faint.

suddenly arjun remember something and asked" sha tere samaan(luggage) kaha hai"

" woh niche hai, waiting area mein"

"are wahan kya kar raha hai"

"are yaar, airport se sidha yahan aya tha, sammaan niche hi chodiya, ghar jane ka socha but tumse milne ka bohut mann kar raha tha isiliye sidha yahan agaya"

arjun smile and ruffle sha's hair
sha groan and says"juuunnn"

arjun starts laughing and push a hand in his hair to put it back in place, both brother looks at each other and smile. they were finally back together.


after sometimes, it was finally lunch time, everyone move to the canteen, arjun and shaleen were side by side, they sat at a table of six, sha and arjun were chatting freely, unaware of the dilemna of their team.

shree whisper to chotu"yaar ek baat bata, humne koi paap ki hai kya, joh itni bari saza mlli hai"

chotu" pata nahi yaar, shayad bhagwan ko hum taras nahi hai"

riya" sahi keh rahe ho yaar, ek arjun rawte ko sambhalna kam tha kya joh ek dousera agaya"

all the three looks at the brothers and then at their chief, he was in the same situation.

at night everyone head to their place, arjun and shaleen goes together, they were happy suddenly, an idea click in arjun's mind

"waise sha, maa aur papa, ko pata nahi hai na ke tu yahan hai"

"nahi jun, batane ka mouka hi nahi milla"

"toh kyun na hum undono ko pagal banaye"

"matlab"

" ek prank khelte hai maa aur papa ke saath"

shaleen looks at arjun, arjun tells him his plan and both grin of getting the chance to fool their parents

precap

shaleen a,d arjun fools their parents
some nok-jok
case

uff finally
khatam kardi part1 ko
ab like aur comment zarour karna, warna ache se samjhaoungi

character sketch on next page
Edited by shahlaa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so here is the character sketch
ACP Arjun suryakant rawte, no-nonsence cop, etf ki second in comand,no past( shaleen's jun)



ACP Shaleen Suryakant rawte, just like arjun or I shouls say arjun ki carbaon copy, twin brother of arjun(arjun's sha)


ACP Sameer rathod, same as show


riya mukherjee, same as show



choree same as show



their are others that will be introduce later
Edited by shahlaa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Are wa ye to kamal hai yaar...

Ab to double maza aayega...awesome

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting love it waiting for nxt part thnx for pm cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
interesting update
wow shaleen & arjun r twins 😃
poor ETF get shocked another shocked 😆
arjun & shaleen got emotional to see each other
uff riya lost in arjun smile 😉
oh god arjun start planning his prank on their parent 🤣
continue soon

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