ArShi FF: Kidnap My Heart (upd Part 5, Pg 18 on 9 Jan)

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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

interesting. ...looking forward to read more...

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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Nice start. Sounds like they'll have fun together taming Khushi. Or at least trying to.

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Pooja Patel

@ARiya100

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Please updated soon
Love it
Updated !!!!!!

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Part 1

The feisty khushi 🤣 every one is going to have tough time😆

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xBabyAngelx

@xBabyAngelx

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Chapter one was really interesting

well written

Simply loved it

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CrazyChatterbox

@CrazyChatterbox

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: fffan123
Interesting concept and CS. Please update next part soon and please pm me.

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Nice CS n Summary
Plz add me to ur PM list

Originally posted by: phillips_2909
wow. New concept. ..
all leads are working under one snake. ..
interesting
waiting eagerly to start
thanks for pm

you have been added to my PM-list.. Hope you liked the first part :)

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CrazyChatterbox

@CrazyChatterbox

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: brishti84
Nice start. Sounds like they'll have fun together taming Khushi. Or at least trying to.

Originally posted by: Faria.
interesting story. do cont.

you both have been added to my pm-list as well.. please accept the buddy request so that it's much quicker to search for your names when I'm sending the PM's for the updates..

@brishti84, they'll sure have fun taming Khushi.. it's gna be a roller-coaster ride for the 5 guys with lots of ups and downs :)

@Faria. you used to write fan-fics as well didn't you? or was it some other user with a similar name? coz your userid looks very familiar..

Edited by Nanya91 - 10 years ago

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CrazyChatterbox

@CrazyChatterbox

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: BarunsBalwantK
Mindblowinggg n sooo interesting

Originally posted by: Shafoo
That is very nice update

Originally posted by: ARiya100
Please updated soon
Love it
Updated !!!!!!

thank you all so much :) i'm glad you liked the first part.. I am crossing my fingers and hoping to update this fan-fic regularly unlike my previous ones..

would you like me to add you to my pm-list so that you'll be notified whenever i update?

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CrazyChatterbox

@CrazyChatterbox

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: xBabyAngelx
Nice prologue

Originally posted by: xBabyAngelx
Chapter one was really interesting
well written
Simply loved it

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
Sounds interesting

Originally posted by: pixi_nightingal
Nice concept

thank you so much :) i'm glad you liked the first part..

would you like me to add you to my pm-list so that you'll be notified of future updates??

Edited by Nanya91 - 10 years ago

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CrazyChatterbox

@CrazyChatterbox

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: pixi_nightingal
Part 1
The feisty khushi 🤣 every one is going to have tough time😆

lol :) khushi certainly is very notorious here.. and it sure is gna be helluva tiring trying to handle that bunch of energy.. but everyone is gna have fun..

to tell you the truth, even i had to control myself while typing this (and the next few chapters) out.. some scenes seem ridiculous, but then again.. this is fiction - so anything can happen 🤣🤣