Arshi/SS:TH#2: Inciting Desires 2/ COMPLETED :CH 4-7 - Page 91

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Faiqa!
I know it has been so long since we spoke and I really feel bad for not being able to comment any sooner but believe me when I say I was neck deep in work and was having a sleepless week. Anyway, now I should stop my babbling and start with the updates.
So, to make up for how late I am, I will comment separately on each chapter...

Chapter 5:
Woah, it was an amazing chapter. It really captured my interest.
I feel bad for Arnav, and I like the way you described his remorse and then his pain. I see, Khushi has become very important to him. No?
But also, he deserves a smack for behaving so irrationally when angered. But I am sure he'll make up for it very soon when Khushi will officially forgive the poor guy😉
And our Khushi ji is fantastic! Thank god she isn't putting up with his crap and is ignoring him. Will make him realize his mistakes faster than an airplane😆
I hope they are able to share their pain and rise above it, together!
Eeh, the trip! Will read further and find out about it!!! #excited😳

Chapter 6:
Okay, so I read chapter six too! Omg, I was dancing when I read the chapter, it was so wonderful!
Finally, the much awaited ArShi kiss☺️
I absolutely loved it, turns out Mumbai did do wonders for Raizada-Gupta!
I am glad that Arnav actually realised his mistake and apologized to her. Raizada's way of asking for apology was also so unique. Thankfully, Khushi told him everything about her past, but I feel so bad for her.
I am really looking forward to dates and loads of romance for the two!😃
Woah, the Shyam and Dr. Vikrant mystery has really intrigued me. Very curious to know what is going to happen.
Also, the Aadi-Payal scene was incredibly cute and I adore Mojo.
Really like the way you have paid attention to the details of the characters. Will tell you more once I read the next update!
About the precap: So good to see Khushi Gupta back in form😆

Chapter 7:
Wohoo, I did it! Finally!
This chapter is my favourite out of all, with all the ArShi romance that it gave to the readers.❤️
The little things you incorporated in the whole update were awesome. Just fabulous!
I really like how Khushi is so nice to everyone, but at the same time I like how Arnav cares for her amidst the workload.
The flashbacks gave just the right amount of glimpse into Arnav and Anjali's troubled and difficult childhood, feel bad for the two though.
So, Raizada asked her out for dinner? Oh-ho! *whistles*😉
And our Shaatir Anjali is no less when it comes to 'jasoosi' on her brother.😆
What I loved the most here were the sneaky romances and finally, how Aman reacted when O'Connor pinched him, poor guys! 🤣
Great updates Faiqa! Really like your work, waiting eagerly for more! Update soon...!
Looking forward to 'the dinner with the Raizadas'.
P.S. - Will read the teaser now!😃
Edited by 8520NK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 6
Superb update
Arnav and Khushi's first kiss was hot😳
And Arnav apologize...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 7
Amazing update
Flash back was so touchy
Wow Arnav and khushi going for dinner


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.


Hey Tia,😊as I said before, u r one of those ppl who really have understood the characters and teh concept behind their positions and the depth of their emotions along with the angle of this story.Very smoothly you can transit yourself through all these frames.Brilliant.👏Thnx for making my tiring day so happy.muahhh😊


aww thank you
i'm telling you i'm growing smarter by reading ur story 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Am trying for the last time for this comment to get posted.. thang aa chuki hoon


Di..am.so mad at IF... I read the update the day you posted..and tab se roz am trying it isn't allowing me to post comment.. I tried so many days.. ab am getting so angry on it.. har baar I type big one and it goes waste.. It gives me an error saying double posting is prohibited..kudh ek baar post nahi kar paaya..isme double post..baaw...

At least yahin pe comment bolungi.. I just wanted it to reach you...

This update was beyond awesome di.. it was so new.. and unique.. like you really write stuff that are different.. but this chapter alone made me like your updates more and more.. Oh did I say I love your writing? I didn't.. lol ab sunlijiye hazaar baar.. so good you write.. I fell in love with how you have so captivatingly crafted this update.. so poetical and magical.. past collides with present.. Oh and awesome super duper update...

Please don't get mad at me.. I really tried.. sorry! :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello dear I m kinda busy for a few days but will continue to read n comment on ur work
Pls don't remove me from ur pm list
Love u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing updates...thanks for the PMs
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting update. Khushi and arnav getting closer to each other. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update was just so awesome😆 i love it.
but i love your edits too😊

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