Arhi FF 'Sandcastle' #4 Last Chapter (1) 01/07/2015 COMPLETE

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

awesome story

i really love this story

it just touched my heart

i started to again read it from start

khushi dies..i was not expecting this

but then, not all stories have a happy ending

i want to read your story <"arhi in love with you"

did you posted all the parts again??

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mim15

@mim15

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

lovely ending...nd this is the truth of life...
one day late or sooner u hv to go bk where u came frm...n others r move on...hope veronika will help arnav to move on..

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

thank you for the pm .

Dear Vanhi,

I have been through this whole journey of sandcastle except the ones when you came back after thre break.

I had waited for the updates and even read till Arnav figures Khushi is Shona and Megha too.

But somehow due to my own personal issues I couldn't read it further.

I am an emotional person and I really loved this story very heart wrenching but I didnt had it in me to read further.

Somehow I can't read or watch something tragic thats why I didnt read further because I couldn't see the 2 souls being separated.

Yet somehow today i tried reading the Epilogue hoping for some miracle but didn't know there wasn't goin to be any. But fair enough a miracle seemed inprobable in this scenario.

However I read through it and I had tears in my eyes. Thats how beautifully you have written this story that I felt so connected to Arnav and Khushi , Megha and Suriya

I don't know what happened and how it happened but I am pretty emotional even right now just imagining Khushi struggling to hold on to 1 Thread of happiness and Arnav having to let her go and also his chance at happiness.

You gave an end where he asks Khushi's help to move on and he met Veronica but is it really a Second Chance does one really move on I don't think it happens.

But as Arnav said only someone who would be understanding and secure enough to not get affected by the importance of Khushi and her place in life will be able to be around Arnav.

He can only be ok if he can live with the memories of Khushi letting go og her memories to build new ones with someone is not an option.

But as much as I feel for Khushi Arnav too has a life to live and he too deserves to be happy and hopefully he finds his happiness along with Khushi being in his heart forever.

Thank you for such beautiful touching story though the end wasn't a happy one.

Please bring some new Arshi story. I haven't read the original In Love With You so please tell me are you rewriting it or its a sequel .

Please do reply.

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

As sad as the ending is, I would not have wanted it any other way, you kept it so real.. Their love for each other was intense even from the time they had not met they both knew it was something so deep..

Viswa is a very honest guy and he could not lie to Lavany a true gem for each other ...

Wether Arnv moves on upon meeting Veronika can remain open in our minds ...

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anarshi

@anarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Sad but beautifully written Vanhi, the show must go on... I was hoping for miracles and their happy ending, still loved it.. Talking on her grave was so touchy!!! Outstanding work dear

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

it was really awesome reading it..

I have been glued to the story from the time I started reading it..

Sandcastle, a name which in itself brings a lot of memories just when the name clicks...

Though I would have loved if shona aka Khushi aka megha lived but I do agree that to keep it realistic it was required... It was truly an awesome journey u loved to be a part of..

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Wow nice story dear!!! Just finished reading all the parts. Very emotional and heart warming. Beautifully written.. Super:-))

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Very emotional but beautiful ending
Life ends but memories live on... And people with the memories have to move on in life as well...

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kprathiba

@kprathiba

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

this is the best ending for this story vanhi I'm glad you didnt make the story like khuhsi is alive.sometimes these kind of endings make the story beautiful.

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jeetega

@jeetega

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

I have already read till Chapter 30. Had been planning to comment after I finish the story, but had to comment becoz you made me do it with your writing.

Words fall short to explain how much your story affects me. It touched my heart and soul from the very start. The way you have portrayed each character is really beautiful.

When I started reading, I wanted to comment about the middle name 'Suriya', it felt like forced into the story just because Khushi worships sun. I was thinking you could have brought many other common factors other than this. But, since I've read your Addicted to You ff, I thought there will be a strong reason why you included such a 'fact'. With the rest of the chapters you didn't prove me wrong. There is no way that name and connection can't be included.

The way each emotion unravels is so fascinating and mind blowing with the kind of twists and turns it takes. And the twists are not like the out of the world kind, it's the kind what life throws at us when you least expect.

Waiting to read more.

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