ArHi OS: Singin' In The Rain

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esha85

@esha85

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Love all your one shots. .really beautiful!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Oh dear. You are putting in all these romantic ideas in my head which if not fulfilled wont be good for future partner! :p

This was just...bliss. 9 years have passed since their marriage and it shows in every word they speak to each other and every thought they have about one another. It was just a perfect amalgation of love, sass, companionship, reflection...everything!

After reading it, one feels one emotion the strongest - contentment.

Great job! :)

PS - Thank You for scrapping me about this new OS :)

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sonal

@srain10

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Beautiful os...

Keep writing such lovely shots...

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Archana M H

@archana.mh17

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
Oh dear. You are putting in all these romantic ideas in my head which if not fulfilled wont be good for future partner! :p

This was just...bliss. 9 years have passed since their marriage and it shows in every word they speak to each other and every thought they have about one another. It was just a perfect amalgation of love, sass, companionship, reflection...everything!

After reading it, one feels one emotion the strongest - contentment.

Great job! :)

PS - Thank You for scrapping me about this new OS :)

This has got to be the biggest complement I have got for writing fanfiction. I am glad you liked it. Thank you for those kind words.

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Archana M H

@archana.mh17

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: kclovearshi
Beautiful!!
You know what I like most in your stories, the dialogues between Arnav & Khushi.. they are just exemplary!!!

Please write a SS or a FF soon.. I can't have enough in a OS although they are one of a kind and give me a glimpse into your potential :)

That's very sweet. I am glad you like my OSs enough to want me to write a short story. Thank you.

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Archana M H

@archana.mh17

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: SS88
Oh such a sweet one, Archana. I love it! Well done.

Thank you. I am glad you liked it.

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Archana M H

@archana.mh17

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b
What a wonderfully romantic OS! Perfect for the Monsoon and exactly how you would expect a much married Arnav and Khushi to be.

There is a wonderful word in Hindi "thehrav" which a couple's relationship attains when they have been married for a while and are yet in love. A kind of maturity to the relationship where love, respect, a desire to be in each other's company, longing, a comfort and familiarity with each other takes precedence over passion.. and that is a wonderful thing! Each relationship has to grow and can still be so touchingly romantic.

And you captured that beautifully!

That's wonderful, what you have said about a maturity that comes with time in a relationship. I am glad you liked that element in this OS. Frankly, sometimes when I think about Arnav-Khushi, I feel, their middle-aged version would be wonderfully interesting as a couple.

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Bookmarked 😊

Edited by IPK007 - 10 years ago

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Aww these two are just adorable... they make me crave for IPK extension once again, because this Arnav and Khushi are just the way I imagined them to grow up some day. Love their conversations, easy teasing, the immense love and care bursting forth from them. This Arnav is to die for, and I so wish he had become this sensitive after their remarriage. Despite his smugness and arrogance, there is an acceptance on his part... the acceptance of loving Khushi immensely and the fact of not being able to live without her. Sigh! Monsoons are blissful sometimes... 😳