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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Hersh

You mention some great points. I am totally stunned at how you interpreted it, very intelligent I must say, not that I ever doubted any of my readers, but kamaal ke observations

Yes the company is saddled with a aging weak man who even his family doesnt trust. The closest alternative is a crook!!

Wow!!

Nisha!!! I know you have clearly said that II will never be part of excelsior...but for all the reasons that I meantioned in my other post, I want II to become that unwilling caretaker of the Excelsior operations... It will make for a great reading how she employs her IIM skills... Has some guidance from Ranjan, has quite a few failures, but at the same time big wins too! N I know of several real life examples of women who became unwilling successors and then finally found their calling! This would trully make II an awesome protAgonist..a story of sacrifices as a buisness caretaker that she will have to make in future coz what she had envisioned as her life of a normal professional working a 9 to 5 job n getting paid n reviewed annually will now be a job that pays her well but gives her soo much more responsibility.. She will have to sacrifice things like maybe a cultural day at her kid's school that Akka would never miss, for a meeting that is held for firefighting some huge business crisis. I know you possibly have thought on a rough scale how you would progress this story and culminate it... But a hero( I will call II a hero if she finally rises to the challenge her hubby refused in a hurry) in the story makes it soo much more cherishable!!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shru

Tension na le kudiye, u can post whatever font size you like
Doesnt bother me ONE BIT. Nor does it bother any one else

Off to write the next chapter...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nisha ...not fair you are having me tear up in the morning second day in a row...Thank you so much...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
We have seen II talking about her childhood, school, college and her relation with amma-appa. But we have not seen of these for RnB. We know dude will never share like II, we saw Ranjan blurting out infront of II about dude but not to the fullest.

Can we see Ranjan going to the room where Savvy captured many things about dude and think of his son's childhood and other things?


May be I look little dramatic.
Edited by putti77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
so its almost clear that i am going to have a 'lost everything' look in my entire travel!!!!

jo bhi ho jaldi ranjan ko safely ghar pahunchne do...paavam he needs to be at home(house).i want to see him...

and rnb II convo...

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Posted: 10 years ago
"Oh! Why?"

Lasya rubbed her eyes, stiffened, and gave longing looks to Sam
"Reh wahin, woh ek nalaayk aur tu bhi" Sam smiled faintly

R&B smiled too

Lasya gave them both a "Are we talking about food?" look

She sucked on R&B's chin because her food wasnt offered

"Is she hungry?" R&B asked

Sam didnt answer him

"Dono sign language mein baat karogey kya?" he teased

"Aapse to bilqul nahi" Sam warned

He bent down and kissed her... "that works" he said

She pushed him

R&B wandered not looking at his sister's intimate moments

Manya knew he sold, she hadnt said a word afterwards as if the fight had left her body completely at her brother's action
Or she wondered why she didnt do the same?


"Chal neeche crab cakes and spicy asian sauce" Tan invited his wife

"Usko khilayen aap, qile ka fatah jo karke aaye hain"

Lasya cooed, as R&B walked the hallway showing her pictures of Nandu and her and Sam AND R&B from when he was lil... teenager wearing the Modern uniform
Lounging against the jacaranda tree in Malcha Marg, wearing an expensive watch, his blue shorts and the speckly shirt too losse and baggy on his thin frame

"Must be new" he thought, he hadnt seen that in the hallway

He took her drroly hand and placed it on his picture, she tapped it furiously, and shrieked... still hungry

"Peanut" he whispered

She half cried and laughed

"Peanut" "Peanut" he whispered softly... crushing her cheeks between his fingers, inhaling her scent

Sam walked by, passing him

Lasya stiffened and cooed

"Bola na tujhe" Sam moaned

R&B followed her downstairs

"Khaakar jaayega?" she asking gruffly

He shook his head...

"Jerk!!" she cursed

Tam smiled as he stepped down

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Ranjan showered changed into blue jeans and white Polo tee and wandered unaware his DIl was upstairs, not noticing her car parked outside, on the street, mistaking it for a Zambian visitor

His daughter in law was in the mandir, practising? praying? both?

She sang a beautiful Tamil song "Irakkam Varaamal"

Pallavi



Irakkam varamal ponadu yenna karanam, Swami



Anupallavi



Karunal kadal endru unnai ,

Kadai kettu Nambi vandan



Charanam



Alam arundi , aadar uyirai adaritha unadu keerthi,

Balakrishnan padi dinamum Nataraja murthy,

Vazhi atthanai disaai yilum palichidum Shiva Chidambaram,

Vazhi athanaiyilum palichidum shiva paramenum,

Mozhi katravar vazhi thunai ,

Muppozhudum marangane.



English Translation



Pallavi



Oh what is the reason why you did not get pity on me?



Anupallavi



Hearing the stories, I was thinking,

That you were an ocean of mercy.



Charanam



I have heard your fame of saving every one by drinking poison,

Because Balakrishnan daily sang about it,Oh! Nataraja

Oh Shiva Chidambaram which shines in all directions all the way,

Oh Divine Shiva who shines every where all the way,

As told by those learned in language all the time.


It smelled like dhoop, and some agar bathi his DIL liked

The scroll lay at Krishna's feet...

She turned and paused, cleared her throat multiple times... bent her head losing the verses... struggling to regain her composure and her voice
smiled... he nodded, and sat quietly as she shut her eyes and continued😭

"U gave him 4 sons (Chachu), and they all compete to give him love, u gave me one, and he doesnt" he thought looking at the Lord's
smiling eyes😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: putti77

We have seen II talking about her childhood, school, college and her relation with amma-appa. But we have not seen of these for RnB. We know dude will never share like II, we saw Ranjan blurting out infront of II about dude but not to the fullest.

Can we see Ranjan going to the room where Savvy captured many things about dude and think of his son's childhood and other things?


May be I look little dramatic.

This is a perfect juncture where Ranjan could rewind n think as to how did his son grow up to be so selfish n totally unemotional towards him..even if he is guilty of infidelity and the fact that R&B loved his mother the most, couldnt the son once come n ask ki dad did u really do it? N now more than ever couldnt R&B have prepared Ranjan better about his decision to quit n sell... The father doesnt know son's grudges. So he can interpret it as R&B's judgement for what happened to Savvy!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harshita27

Nisha!!! I know you have clearly said that II will never be part of excelsior...but for all the reasons that I meantioned in my other post, I want II to become that unwilling caretaker of the Excelsior operations... It will make for a great reading how she employs her IIM skills... Has some guidance from Ranjan, has quite a few failures, but at the same time big wins too! N I know of several real life examples of women who became unwilling successors and then finally found their calling! This would trully make II an awesome protAgonist..a story of sacrifices as a buisness caretaker that she will have to make in future coz what she had envisioned as her life of a normal professional working a 9 to 5 job n getting paid n reviewed annually will now be a job that pays her well but gives her soo much more responsibility.. She will have to sacrifice things like maybe a cultural day at her kid's school that Akka would never miss, for a meeting that is held for firefighting some huge business crisis. I know you possibly have thought on a rough scale how you would progress this story and culminate it... But a hero( I will call II a hero if she finally rises to the challenge her hubby refused in a hurry) in the story makes it soo much more cherishable!!😳


Really well said !!
And funnily, one of my dear friends here in Pune fits these shoes to the T
Her father had a humungous business, thriving and doing extremely well. He died at 60 due to a heart attack and her brother died in an accident ( both within a year ) . My friend was in London managing the smaller branch of the business.
Her mother took over to keep it going and was unable to cope...My friend returned to Pune and took over...is doing brilliantly well 😊
Read up on Thermax ..Meher Pudumjee ( we sing in the same choir!!! ) and Anu Aga ( her mother who is an MP now )

It would be just fantastic if II does that and proves a point...Nisha pleassse 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Also Nisha any plans to celebrate Vandu's Seemantham as she is due in August?

I want RnB & Ranjan to dream about II' Seemantham.

Morning Morning mind has become over dramatic😉
Edited by putti77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harshita27

This is a perfect juncture where Ranjan could rewind n think as to how did his son grow up to be so selfish n totally unemotional towards him..even if he is guilty of infidelity and the fact that R&B loved his mother the most, couldnt the son once come n ask ki dad did u really do it? N now more than ever couldnt R&B have prepared Ranjan better about his decision to quit n sell... The father doesnt know son's grudges. So he can interpret it as R&B's judgement for what happened to Savvy!


Reading into what is going on in Ranjan's mind would be an eyeopener for us too...All that we have seen is his unhapiness with his equation with R&B and a little window in the update Marigold on his dream for the future.
We know he is a good natured man, but his thoughts on the past events would be just great

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