FF RACE.part 7 updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Going Crazy now.Felt similar before .First time RAM came in my mind.RAM is created and perfected.Now comes New guy VIKRAM.Concept on few story in mind.
Story Name :RACE..
Story goes along a reality show with name RACE.A big company organizes very big Reality show with name RACE.With prize money of 50 crores for winner.And budget of 1000 crores.

Many come forward to participate.Celebrities,common people.
The show will last for 365 days complete India is venue.They have to reach checkpoints in given time and no checkpoint is indicated clearly.200 checkpoints to reach 365 days.

Teams are formed randomly with 10 people in each.Main battle would be among emotions.Total 81 teams in total.

When ten random people join together to win something .Their will never be truce so its always a battle of who is right and who is wrong.
then comes health issue.365 days journey with limited breaks .
compatibility.

our story will be based on one of the team formed.Team NO 64.

None of the members know each other.
Different charecters and different backgrounds.

Hero belongs to this team and son is heroin obvio.

Team 64:

Vikram(27)

Sakshi(25)doctor

Abhay - 16 years kid

Poonam(23)- Miss India contestent (joins for publicity only)

Amith -Self proclaimed leader of team.(27)

Viral - 24-chef

Tyagi-24-adventure lover.

Miss K - reporter

Swathi - 21 student

Mishti - 31 Home maker.


Story will be started if any one is interested.
Vikram is her his charecter would be mostly a mystery and revealed while story goes.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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iam very much interested in reading it bro
waiting for the update...
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PART 1.THE RACE




"Sakshi utho jaldee tumhey jaana hain ya nahen." came the calls thundering disturbing her sound sleep.

Sakshi "Soney dey yaaar.Itnaa kyaaa jaldee hain aaj Sunday hee tho hain?"

"What?Sakshi tum bhool kaisey gayee ?Aaj kitnaa important din hain?"

Realization struck Sakshi.She now rememberd what day is today.She woke up instantly.

"Madem abh uthee hain?Jaldee ready ho jaon humey dass bhajey wahan hona hain?Result announcement key waqt."

Sakshi "Lucky tumhey patha hain hum select nahen hongey fir bhee zidd karkey bhaithee hon?"

Lucky "Kissko patha mem saab luck kissey key pass bhe hosaktha hain."

Sakshi "Lucky tumhey yaad nahen hon tho dilaadoo 3 laakh logon ney apply kiyya .3 laakh.Teen key saamney naa paanch aur zeroes hongey."

Sakshi "Unmey sey around 800 select hongey.So don't think about it?"

Sakshi very well remember the day Lucky challenged her and registered her name for the biggest Reality show ever in India The Race'.She was never interested in it as she know she will not get into the list.That was the confidence with which she was able to register.

Lucky "Sakshi patha hain but kissko patha.Abh baathey bandh karon aur jaldee ready ho jaon?"

Sakshi could see Lucky was so much excited and dressed her best.No one will believe if some one say she is a doctor.Adventure minded and always ready for thrill.She knew her well it is not the prize money of 10 crore that made her part of THE RACE' but the contest itself.

That huge prize money gained lot of attraction.Half the country said it as bluff,many rushed to be part.She just registered her name for her crazy friend.

She finally reached the studio she dressed herself in chudidaar.She don't know what is awaiting her.

The place is fully crowded and has full of survilance.She reached the place she was told(texted to report).

Lucky s expressions are slowly changing it is no where near what she expected it is far beyond.She is scared now.They waited for another half and hour.Sakshi's name was called out.Sakshi was shocked she never expected to be part of it she don't want to be part of it but sje is left with no other choice now.Lucky was shouting out loud as Sakshi got selected .Few more names were called out.Finally they were taken to another hall.

It was huge seminar hall it can hold around 2000 people at a time.It was filled partly.Sakshi was not interested in that numbers.

She knew only one thing her life is going to be changed after this meeting.She looked around many are thrilled by what is happening few are like her for them it came as shock and many faces laughing out loud as if they have won it already.But it takes really a lot atleast to be in the list of name whole India is going to take for next one year.

Her thoughts were broken by the announcement.She checked for the source it is coming from stage.

Whole India knows him one of the top Bollywood actor.They called him for the launce.Whole place is filled with camaras and reporters.

"Aapko bathaaney kee jaroori nahen hain kee aap yahan kyon hain.Fir bhee main bathaatha hun."

"You were the luck contestants of the Opening season of India's best Reality Show THE RACE'."

"Poora teen laakh choubees hazaar chaar saun nabbey logon ney apney naam diyan.But hummarey pass sirf hain Aaath saun dasss contestants."

"Main yahan aapko briefing deney aaya hun."

"Humney sabko alag alag team mey divide kiyya hain.There are total 81 teams with ten members in each team."

"Yeh arrangement computer ney kee hain yahan koin doosrey ko jaantha nahen.So your first challenge is making friends."

"Actual race kal subaha suru hogee.Har team ko kuch cheezey dee gayen hongey.Yeh mandatory hain.Resources mey Regular clothings,do mobiles aur paanch wire less diyen gayen hongey ."

"Race key starting mey aapkey team ko gadiyan leney hongey .Gadiyan tho limited nahen hain but choice tho limited hain."

"Gaadey mey camaras aur GPS fit hain aur pane aur food key storage bhee."

"Gaadey selct karney key baad aap resources mey sey resources ley sakthey hon,wahan aapko jho chanhey ley sakthey hon jitna chahey.But yet it's a race gadee mey tho fit hona padega."

He continued further but she just concluded to herself as rules were out before only.There were total 200 checkpoints from where they have to collect flags.

List of ten check posts would be given in start and after that a new list of ten would be given.They can get resources from there and resources will be open only then.They are bound by bond of ten lakhs if any one deviated and abandons it in middle.

Finally the meeting got over some attender took Sakshi to reception and brought her signature on bond.She was then taken to her team.She was allotted to TEAM no 64.At entrance she noticed a red and white stripped flag.She realized it might be their team flag.Which they have to collect.

As she entered her room she found it empty there were seperat cabins for ten people and she went to hers.It has few baggage she recogozized it as hers.Lucky might have brought them from room.Her mobile was taken before meeting .

She waited there for few minutes checking her baggage and she was sure everything needed was there.

She then heard door opening and a person coming inside.He is well built and looks like a body builder.He looked around in same way Sakshi did and went to his cabin and checked his things.She understood he is as scared as her.She read the name plate on his cabin VIRAL DESHMUKH'.

Then she saw few more coming and all of them settled in their cabins

She then saw some lady coming towards her .She looks middle aged early thirties .

"Hi ! Sakshi "

Sakshi know how she knew her name "Hi!Aap?"

"Mishti .Mishti Varma.I am a home maker"

Sakshi was surprised why would be a decent home maker interested in reality show.She thought may be same like her random.

Sakshi "Doctor,RMP."

Mishti "Doctor.Acchan huan ek doctor hain hummarey beech .Hummara tabyath ka khyaal rakhegee."

Sakshi "Just gave a brief smile." She noticed some one coming inside.He is the last member of this team.

He is around 5 feet 10" and looks with good physique but his face have no expression blank as if he don't care about anything.But his eyes were sharp he went looking at everyone trying to analyze them.

Mishti "Sakshi kyaa dekh rahen hon?"

Sakshi "Kuch nahen?"

She looked around and then she heard a huge voice calling everyone.She is sure he is one of the team mate.

"Hello Everyone.Its time to gather around."

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2.THE LIST


All eyes were on him now and slowly everyone started moving towards him and now she could see everyone in the hall.

"I am Amith main Pune sey hun.In recession right now." He said introducing himself.He looks well built but is shorter and avg Indian fair.

A girl behind Sakshi reacted "I am P.Kanaka Lakshmi from Hyderabad .I am a apprentice in Discovery Channel."

Everyone are looking little puzzled and laughing at her name "I know thoda uncommon name hain but sabh mujhey Miss KK bulaathey hain."

Miss K continued she decided to make them introduce everyone she moved towards the last person in row he is surprisingly a kid around 16.

Miss K "Tumhaara naam kyaa hain?" he was little startled but good.

"Abhay."

Miss K "THo kyaa karthey ho tum Abhay.What a stupid I am obvio student hogey."

Miss K then moved to next girl beside him "Hey!Tumhaara naam?"

"Swathi,graduation ,Delhi "

Miss K "Bura math mano but main tum logon ko khaaney walee nahen hun."

Miss K "I don't know but mera tho yahen hain main nahen jaanthe kee main select honey waaley hun yaa nahen but I just love journeys."

Miss K"Luck ya bad luck we are a team now .Hum iss poorey show key liyen bandhey hain.So why can't we be just friends."

"Waisey bhee aap logon ko mera bura shakal tho dekhnaa he padega ek saal thak.I am not leaving"

She stopped by the lady in middle beside Amith "Mainey aapko kaheen dekha hain kyaa?"

Sakshi was looking at all their faces ut she din't find the person who came in end he was sitting behind observing them .

"POONAM SHAH."

Miss K"What?Poonam Shah.Tum hee hon na who Miss India contestant.I din't know that you are in our team.Ek Selfie."

All are supprised now to find a celebrity between them.

Miss K took a selfie with her.

Miss K next came to Sakshi "Sakshi hon na thum?"

Skahsi is surprised how she know her name .

Miss K "Itna shock math hon main tumhaarey peechey hee bhaithee the introduction mey waheen naam suna thaa.Waisey tum karthe kyaan hon?"

Sakshi "Doctor,RMP"

Mishti started herself "Mishti Home maker."

This came as surprise for everyone but no one want to embrasse her so were silent.

She moved to Viral "Hi Handsome."

Viral just smiled at her and "VIRAL .CHEF"

Miss K "Khaatey bhee tume hee hon kyaa?Main bass majaak kar rahen hun."

Miss K"Lagtha hain din mey aadha time GYM mey rehthey hon?Yeh Body kyaa hain boss."

She moved to next person he is skinny and looks like from eastern side "Anoop Tyaagi."

"Trecker.Adventure lover."

Miss K"Sach mey.Mujhey tho tumhaara interview lena padega.But camara nahen hain."

Mishti "Abhee ek saal bakee hain kabhee bhee lelena."

Miss K"Han"

Then she saw the last person in ground sitting aside with no interest at all.

All are looking at him and then he finally started.

"VIKRAM ."

Miss K."Then abh introductions ho chukee hain tho Amith tum continue karon." She sat on the armchair saying that.

Viral silently went towards Vikram and Amith was standing.Abhay and Swathi were reading instructions book carefully.

Sakshi sat beside Mishti and Miss K.

Amith "Hum ek lambee race jaaney waaley hain.Yeh baath aapko bhee patha hain."

Amith "I know its stupid question.Kitney logon ko driving aathee hain."

All are looking at each other,Amith,Vikram,Sakshi,Viral,Tyaagi ,Miss K.

"paanch loog.Not bad."

"Humey do gaadiyan dee jayengey."

Vikram "They are not giving us.We have to race to choose between available."

All looked at him.

Vikram "Who log almost sabh de rahen hain but competition wahan nahen hain."

Vikram "Its all on planning as a team.."

Amith "Tumhey koi idea hain kounsey gaadiyan hain kall."

Abhay "Manual says all types of vehicles available in Indian roads."

Swathi "Sabh mathlab sabh hongey kyaa."

Sakshi "Everything is not possible.may be bulk used."

Miss K"Like suv's few cars.Regularly used ones not that branded like ford,Ferrari and etc."

Vikram "TATA,MAHENDRA,Maruthi may be.scorpios,xenons,few more."

Amith "We need speed then."

Vikram just smiled at him like he is laughing at his foolishness.

Same time there was a knock in door.Abhay opened it and some one gave him a envelope.

Miss K "Kyaa hain yeh?"

Amith snatched it from him and opened.

Amith "Hummara first slot aaya hain."

Looking at names in list

Anoop "Kahan kahan jaana hain."

Amith "Shimla,Shilong,Yaanam,Goa,Jaipur,Belgaum,Haridwaar,Srinagar,KanyaKumari,Vellore."

All are analyzing the list.

Anoop "Main shillong sey hun so no prob,Bakee sabh naam suna hain.Belgaum?"

Miss K"Karnataka mey hain?"

Sakshi "Sabh alag alag jagaha par hain.north south east and west almost har jagaha par hain."

Amith "Humey ek plan mey jaana hoga.Nahen tho jaldhee nahen pahunchengey."

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Bro i just love the way u write..nice update ..
looking forward how will the race starts.. and what will be the plan..
btw need to ask wheather any villan group is there???😊
first meeting of team mates were narrated good loving to read more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So Buddy finally i read both the parts.. As i said it is going to be an amazing journey. Good that all have teamed up.. Not fully but they eventually will become a strong team.. It seems from their character and their aim to win the race...
Why dont you pm all from your buddy list to read this one.. I am sure everyone is going to enjoy the ride umm The Race actually..

You chose haridwar as a destination.. Wow..

So here we have
Vikram
Sakshi
Amit
Tyagi
Viral
Swathi
Mishti
Miss K
Anoop and
Abhay ...

All set to go

Hope all their lives change for good.. Waiting for next part..
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Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh

So Buddy finally i read both the parts.. As i said it is going to be an amazing journey. Good that all have teamed up.. Not fully but they eventually will become a strong team.. It seems from their character and their aim to win the race...

Why dont you pm all from your buddy list to read this one.. I am sure everyone is going to enjoy the ride umm The Race actually..

You chose haridwar as a destination.. Wow..

So here we have
Vikram
Sakshi
Amit
Tyagi
Viral
Swathi
Mishti
Miss K
Anoop and
Abhay ...

All set to go

Hope all their lives change for good.. Waiting for next part..

will pm .lets see what happens am sure there won't be any reaction though
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PART 3



All were thinking over the puzzle before them.

Vikram instead was seeing others reaction as if answer is with them.But all this was disturbed by knock at the door.

Abhay opened the door and some one was standing there he is is well in formals and looks like a person from organizers.

"Vikram sir aapkey liye ek call hain?"

VIkram signed asking whome.

"Patil sir."

Vikram leaves from there.

Then the person stops "Event kall subaha suru hogee.Exact at 6'O clock.There won''t be any reminding for you."

"Chey bhajey gates khulengey.Garage aur parking mey sabh gaadiyan hain.Aapko apney gadee choose kar sakthey hon."

"But reminding you choices are limited aapko aapkee pasand ka gaadi shayad nahen miley.So first race is for vehicles."

"There are total 200 cars all are SUV styles remaining 50 random cars hain."

"Garage sey nikalney key baad Eastern gate mey resources hongey wahan sey aapko lena hoga."

"Uss bag mey kuch cheezey hongey aapkey liye madad ho sakthey hain."showing at a red luggage bag beside door.

"Abh aap apney family sey baath kar sakthey hain wahan phone hain."

"Lights will be off by 11 pm.Jho bhee karna hain ussey pehley keejiyen.Aur paanch bhajey on hongey."

He was about to leave.

Sakshi "Vikram kahan gayan hain?"

"Vikram sir kissey sey milney gayen hain."

Amith "Patil?"

"Han,editor hain."

He leaves from there.

Amith "Patil who naam kabhee suna hain."

Miss K"Bahuth common name hain."

Amith "Nahen iss show mey?"

Sakshi "He is in organizers team who hee iss show ka editor hain."

Sakshi "Bahuth shows kiyye usney."

Poonam "Vikram kaisey jaantha hain ussey?"

Amith "Kissko patha?"

Amith "Then coming to point.We should remember try best o take among fast cars."

Abhay is listening carefully.And same way are other they can't understand this terminology much.

Amith "Safari,XUV ,scorpio's main who cars iss roads mey fast hain."

Amith "hum clockwise jaayengey."

Amith "I mean" pointing towards map.

Amith "South India first cover karengey YANAM,VELLORE,KANYAKUMARI,BELGAUM,GOA,JAIPUR,SRINAGAR,SIMLA,HARIDWAAR AND Shillong."

All agreed with the plan as it was suitable.

Amith "Driving hum turns mey karengey.Main ek gaadi loonga."

Amith "Distribution hum gadee milney key baad decide karengey."

Mishti silently went the phone there and was standing hesitantly.

Sakshi noticed it .

Sakshi "Kyaa huan?"

Mishti "Kuch nahen?Tum phone use karlo."

Sakshi "Tum baath karon naa mera jyaada nahen lagega.Waisey bhee ek tho hain mera dost."

Misthi "Tumhaara family nahen hain?"

Sakshi "Orphan."

Mishti "I am sorry."

Sakshi "Yeh sabh chodo aur tum kissey baath karna chahthee hon?"

Mishti "Sanju.I mean my husband."

Sakshi "Tho phone kyon nahen kar rahen hon?"

Mishti "Darr lag rahan hain?Mainey unhey kabhee bathaaya bhee nahen kee main issmey register kiyya hain."

Mishti "Uss samay hummara jhagada huan thaa.Unhoney kahan main unkey bina kuch nahen kar paaongee bahaar pair bhee nahen hilapaaongee."

Mishti "Mainey gussey mey aakar naam register karlee."

Sakshi was listening patiently.

Mishti "Abh main select hogayee.Means kamsey kam ek saal thak mujhey bahaar rehna hoga."

Mishti "Main Sanju sey baath bhee nahe kar sakthee.Hummarey shaadi key baad Sanju hummesha merey saath thaa.I have never been without him.Ussney gussey mey kahan aur main ney serios lekar yeh kardiyya"

Sakshi "Tum phone tho karo unhey aur baath karo."

Mishti "I mean sabh theek hoga naa?"

Sakshi "You have to try.Sanju bhee yehi chahtha hoga."

Mishti dials the number .

Mishti is as nervous was before.

Mishti "Sanju main hun."

Mishti "I am sorry.Mainey bass gussye mey kardiya thaa.Mujhye nahen patha tha aisey hoga."

Mishti "I am sorry."

Mishti "Han .Poora kooshish karoongi."

Mishti "Nahen yahan aur ek cook hain.Main nahen banaaongee."

Mishti "Kisse ko nahen patha hain naa."

Mishti "Tumney mujhey kabhee sikhaaya nahen.Tumhaara galthee."

Mishti "Tum bhee.Apna khyaal rakhnaa."

Mishti "Main aaney key baad sabh hissab baraabar karoongi."

Mishti "Aur ghar ko bhee saaf rakhnaa main aaney baad dekhloongi."

Mishti "Be careful.Raath ko jyaada kaam math karnaa.Jaldee so jaana.han."

Mishti "Kaisey."

Mishti "Tum mujhey roj dekh paaogey.Sach mey."

Mishti "Main nahen dekh sakthee na."

Mishti "Sab log acchey hain.Mera abhee ek dost bhee hain baath karoo ussey."

Mishti giving phone to SAKSHI.

Mishti "Sanju ."

Sakshi took it hesitantly.

Sakshi "Hello."

Sanju "Sorry .Mishti kee aadath hain sabh kuch apney uupar lelthee hain.BTW I am Sanju."

Sakshi "glad to meet you I am Sakshi."

Sanju "Bura math maaniye.Bass Mishti ka khyaal rakhnaa."

Sanju "She is very innocent.She has never been outside.Bahuth emotional hain."

Sanju "saath saal huen hummarey shaadi hokar.Uss time pehlee baar city aayen hain."

Sanju "she is over protective.Bass apnon key liyen kuch bhee karthee hain."

Sanju "Plz unkaa khyaal rakhnaa."

Sakshi "I will.Aap tension math lejiyen.Hum sabh rakhengey."

Sanju "She is just like a baby she is of pure soul daantna bhee theek sey nahen aatha."

Sakshi is sure he had tears in his eyes.

Sanju "Aap ussey phone deejiyen naa."

Sakshi gave phone to Mishti.

Mishti "Han bye." She give a peck on phone and got it disconnected.

Mishti is happy now but still the thought of staying away from her husband is there but she is trying to be brave infront of othere.

Sakshi "ABh khush?"

Mishti "Bahuth."

Mishti "Sanju ney kahan kee who mujhey har waqt dekh saktha hain kaisey."

Miss K comming there same time "Mishti hum hummesha observation mey hongey."

"Gaadiyan mey camara's fit hain."

"Aur chanel website mey sabh log dekh saktey hain."

Sakshi "Tum kehrahen hon kee koi kissey ek team ko poora follow kar saktha hain."

Miss K"Han."

Abhay "Humey jyaada follow up nahen hongey.Humey tho koi nahen jaantha."

Miss k"Nahen hum observation mey hee rahengey." Looking at Poonam.

Poonam "Merey itney fans nahen hain."

Miss K "But tum tho ho celebrity naa."

Abhay "So its good na hummey bhee koi dekh rahan hoga."

Amith "Not completely."

Amith "Poonam hummarey taraha nahen hain.Yeh event hummarey liyen bhee mushkil hain."

Amith "Yeh dekho ek saal poora gaadi mey hummesha driving karthey and no proper maintainance."

Amith "She may even loose her carrer."

Poonam is little shocked.

Miss K"Poonam tum ney enter kiyya kyon pehley yeh tumney socha nahen kyaa."

Poonam "Mainey bass news key liyen regiser kiyya tha publicity key liye."

Poonam "Mainey socha nahen kee main select hongee.."

Mishti "Poonam kuch nahen hoga."

Mishti "Tum tho natural hon .Tumhey maitnainace kee jaroori hee nahen hain."

Mishti "But ek baath kahoon jabh race poora hoga.Jitna experience tumhaara pss hoga.Utnaa koi aur contestant key pass anehn hoga."

Miss K"Mishti sahen keh rahen hain .This trip will be very useful.Tum aslee hindusthan ko dekhogee."

Poonam is happy that there are few encouraging her.

Sakshi "Tum kissey sey baath karogee."

Poonam "Nahen.Abh sabh log hass rahen hongey .Iss haalath mey.All are about my carrer."

Miss K "Good be strong my girl." Giving her a small hug.

Sakshi "Abhay tum phone karogey."

Abhay is hesitant but Miss K took the phone and called the number in Abhay's locker.

Miss K"Hello."

Abhay's father (Mr Malhotra.) "Hello aap kaun hain."

Abhay is little scared.

Miss K"Mr Malhotra aap Abhay sey baath karengey."

Mr Malhotra "Aap usskey team sey hon kya?"

Miss K"Han aap ussey baath keejiyen."

Miss k gives phone to Abhay.But kept it in speaker.

Mr Malhotra "Congracts beta."

Abhay was puzzled he din't expect this.

Abhay "Thanks."

Mr Malhotra "Tum apnaa khyaal rakhna."

Abhay was puzzled he thought he might be angry.

Abhay "Aap gussa nahen hon?"

"Gussa tho hun.Lekin abbb kyaa dumhey daanthey rahoo."

"Tum ney kiyya aur ho gayaa."

"Abh race complete karoo aur baadh mey fir padhaai."

Abhay "Hmm."

Mr Malhotra "Tumney sabsey mila.Tumhaara team."

Abhay "Han."

Mr Malhotra "kissiko phone do."

Miss K"Hum sabh tho sun rahen hain.Speaker mey rakhkar."

Miss k"Uncle aap tension math leejiyen hum hain naa Abhay ka khyaal rahkney."

Mr Malhotra "Thanks. "

Then Abhay had little conversation with his dad.

Miss K "Sakshi tumney phone kee?"

Sakshi "Main karloongi.Tum karloo."

Miss K"Sakshi don't be formal.Mera koi call nahen.."

Viral had phone next his convo was simple .

Miss K "Viral ek doubt hain.Poonchu?"

Viral "Poocho?"

Miss K"Tum sach mey chef hon kyaa?"

Viral smiles "Han hun.Hummara family profession hain.bachpan sey yahen huan .Ghar mey hummesha cooking key classes hothey they."

Viral "Mujhey body building mey interest thee.Main secretly gym jaatha rahan."

Miss k"How cute.Sach kahoon tho tumhaara jaisa body kabhee nahen dekha.Tum tho national level hon yaar."

Viral just smiles.

Miss K "Swathi tum kyaa kar rahen hon wahan?" Swathi was checking equipment bag in corner.

Swathi "Kuch nahen bass dekh rahen thee."

Miss K "kya kyaa hain?"

Swathi "Don basic mobiles,Nokia 2730,Do Tabs hain.Ek handycam,blankets,jackets,water bottles,."

Miss K"Handy cam mera department hain.bakee sab aap log decide karlo."

Amith "Abhay tum tabs sab handle kar sakthey hon na?"

Abhay "han."

Amith "Swathi tum?"

Swathi "Han."

Amith "Tum dono navigators rehna."

Amith "Maps aur communication tum rakhnaa."

Suddenly all the lights went off.

Amith "Kyaa huan?"

Miss K "Time is 11.Lights off."

Anoop "Vikram bhai abhee thak aaya nahen"

Amith "Who aajayega.Phone kisskey pass hain."

Swathi "Merey pass hain main phone karkey deydoongi."

Amith "Anoop tumhey koi call hain?"

Anoop "No I am good."

Sakshi "Mainey subaha baath kardiyan hain so no prob."

Amith "Thanks."

Everyone went to their compartments and slept Vikram came late night he din't bothered any and directly went to his compartment and slept.

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It was early morning 5 and lights were switched on automatically.Mishti was first to wake up followed by Viral,Poonam,Anoop,Amith,Swathi,Miss K,Sakshi,Abhay and Vikram .

They got ready by 5:45 AM and were waiting for gates to open.

Amith "Swathi aur Abhay tum donon luggage key saath aana.We will try our best to find a suitable one."

Vikram "Koi jaroori nahen hain."

Vikram "Amith,Viral aur Anoop hum jaayengey car key liyen."

Vikram "Tum log gate key pass rehna."

Vikram "Eastern gate key liyen hum steps sey left lena hoga.Paanch minute mey pahunch jaayeegy by walk."

Vikram "Garage sey who ek kilometer hain humey ."

Everyone agreed with it.

Amith "Theek hain."

Sakshi "Ek doubt?"

Vikram "Kyaa?"

Sakshi "Yeh saara luggage hum ladkiyan uthaayen kyaa?"

Miss K"11 bags hain."

Vikram "VIRAL tum jaaogey kyaa."

Viral smiling "Yehi kaam bach hain kyaa?"

It was 6 Am exact and all doors opened instantly.

As per plan Anoop,Amith and Vikram raced to garage.

Vikram was ahead of them he was dressed in tracks and white tee shirt.Counter to Amith jeans costume with jacket.Anoop was in simple way he was light .

As expected everyone were racing for the garage.They could estimate it around 900 pairs of legs unning along them.

Vikram took a huge leap on the enclosure and was able to reach garage before others.


Vikram grabbed the beast in middle.A blue colored XUV.Vikram started and took to the garage gate where Anoop just reached while othere were ahead him.

Vikram "Anoop tum issey lekar jaon gate key pass rukho.Amith ko bhee saath ley jaana main aajaoonga."

Anoop did as instructed "Amith got in the car neat the parking lot."

Vikram waited in the other end near GETAWAY vehicle .Vikram looked around and was checking for something.


He then took the silver beast out and raced to the EASTERNGATE.

Everyone were puzzled by Vikram's second chice.

Amith was annoyed "Yeh tumney kyaa kiyya?"

Amith "Iss gaadi sey hum race nahen jeeth saktey?"

Vikram "Shut up."He got down the car .

Vikram "Resources check kiya?"

Amith "Pehley hummara sawaal ka jawaab do?"

Vikram "Kyaa?'

Amith "Humney decide kiya na?Phit tum truck ko kyon laaya."

Vikram "Decide timney kiyya humney nahen?"

Vikram "Abh tumhey race hee jeethna hain tho jaon yahan time waster kyon kar rahen hon."

All are shocked by Vikram's words.

Vikram rushed inside the gate and saw the things available in resources.

Vikram "Main sabh bathaoonga.Tum log pehley yahan sey nikalo."

Amith "tum kyaa karney waaley hon."

Vikram "Main resources collect karkey aaonga.Tum jaon abh ."

Amith "Sab gaade mey hee hain."

Vikram "Just leave."

Vikram "Viral tum rukho mujhey ek navigator chahiyen."

Viral stopped .

Amith "Abhay tum Vikram key saath aon."

Vikram "Koi doctor thee naa?"

Miss K "Sakshi kyon."

Vikram "Ussko bhee rukhnaa padega?"

Amith left with others.While Sakshi,Viral and Abhay waited with Vikram.

Vikram "Sakshi wahan medical equipments hain.You have to carry all the basic things needed."

Vikram "Journey is gonna be long ,cold key liyen kuch jyaada lena,aur fevers and things,bandages bhee jyaada chahiyen."

Vikram "You know what I say."

Sakshi understood the situation.

Sakshi left to finish her part.

Vikram "Abhay tum gadee key pass rukho ."

Vikram "Viral merey saath aon."

Vikram took Viral to other place.

Vikram "Viral wheels aur fule storage."

Viral "Tum paagal hon kyaa?Iss drum ko saath lejaana?"

Viral "Vikram tum bass der kar rahen hon."

Viral "Fuel key liyen bunks hain naa."

Vikram "Han Sigma Petrol bunks mey humey fuelling millega free mey.But poorey India mey sirf 100 petrol bunks hain.Humey hummarey raasthey mey nahen milega."

Viral understood the matter.

Vikram helped him to carry that huge drum.

Vikram the moves tires..

Vikram "Viral khaana key liyen jho use hodakey who lejaana padega?"

Vikram "Gaade mey sirk dass sin key liyen khaana packed hain.Sabkey liyen kafee nahen hoga."

Vikram "Paanee bhee ."

Sakshi came back by then"Mainey sabh medicines pack kiyan hain."

Vikram "Udhar trecking equipments hain."

Vikram "Ropes,helmets nahen main hee aatha hun."

Vikram "Viral tum sabh lesakthey hon na."

Vkram and sakshi went to other side.

Vikram grabbed ropes,and surfboards.Sakshi was confused on what they might be useful for.

Vikram "Sakshi aap yeh sabh ley jaon main aur kuch dekhkar aatha hun."

Sakshi went to vehicle.

Vikram returned after few minutes.He brought few mountain cycles and tent equipment along. along and tied them to vehicle.

The beast is completely filled.

Vikram got into vehicle.

Sakshi "Abh kuch bologey ya nahen."

Sakshi "What is all this itnaa saara equipment kee kyaa jaroori thee."

Vikram just signed them to be silent.

Vikram waited for all other cars to leave.

Vikram "37 "And then started the monster

Viral "Kyaa 37?

Vikram "Main baad mey bathaatha hun?"

Vikram "Humey kahan jaana hain ?"

Sakshi "Amith ney YAANAM decide kiyya?"

Vikram "What?Yaanam?"

Vikram "Abhay jaldee phone karo aur kaho rukhjaaney key liyen aur location poncho?"

Abhay called the group and did what he was asked.

Vikram "South east monsoon time hain.Whan bearish jyaada hogee iss time par?"

Vikram "Gaadeyan chal nahen paayengey."

Sakshi and Viral realized the matter now.

Vikram "Abhay who log kahan hain?"

Abhay "Chaurastha mey hain.Abh wait kar rahen hain."

Sakshi "kitna waqt lagega pahunchney."

Vikram "15 minuts."saying that he raised the accelerator to full speed.

Vikram reached them finally.It was around 7:15 AM.

Amith was as annoyed as before.

Amith "Yeh kyaa hain hum race mey hain koi family trip nahen itnaa luggage ley aaya tumney."

Vikram "Just shutup.Merey baath sunongey pehley."

Vikram "Tumhey kyaa lag rahan hain pagal hun."

Vikram "Yeh race jeethna merey liye bhee utnaa important hain jitna tumhey."

Vikram "Yeh koi aam race nahen hain.kee tum jaldee chalo aur jeethjaon."

Vikram "Iss race jeethney gaadi nahen dimmaak kee jyaada jaroori hain."

Vikram "Kyaa lagrahan hain tumhey.sab kuch saaf hain."

Vikram "Kuch saaf nahen hain."

Vikram "Iss race mey tez doudney sey jyaada race mey rehna important hain."

Vikram "Tume iss race ko jeethna hain tho pehley race mey rahon jeethogey."

Vikram "Tumney decide kiyya na Yaanam jaaney key liyen?"

Vikram "Tumhey patha bhee hain kyaa wahan kyaa chal rahan hain?"

Vikram "It is one of the cloudiest place in India .next to sea.Whan bearish jyaada hothee hain.Aur iss season mey sabsey jyaada."

Vikram "Hum pehley wahan jaayengey tho sureu sey pehley hee rukjaayengey."

Miss K"Vikram sahee keh rahan hain.Wahan situation bahuth kharaab hogee."

Miss K"Floods ka continuous thread hain wahan?Iss saal bahuth jyaada hain who bhee.Rainsa re more worse this time?"

Amith "Tho bathon kyaa karnaa hain?"

Vikram "Humey Yaanam ko last lena chahiyen."

Vikram "Yeh bad choice hain lekin pehley East complete karengey.Shillong"

Vikram "Anoop wahan situation kaisey hoga abhee?"

Anoop "There is no considerable barrier raastha patha hain tho not a sweat."

Vikram "Hum Shillong jaayengey fir north ,Haridwaar ussside jaayengey."

Koi doubt hain tho bahee pooch."

They all agreed to plan.

Amith "Fir yeh sabh luggage kyon laaya tumney?"

Vikram "Yeh jaroori padegee."

Amith was about to get into vehicle.

Vikram "Sabh breakfast karleejiyen.Hum baadh mey chalengey."

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 10 years ago
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Vikram "Kissey ney subaha kuch nahen khaaya."

Vikram "Hum abh waisey hee rukhey hain tho correct time hoga fir sey rukhna nahen padega."

Viral "Vikram ashen keh rahan hain."

Amith "Theek hain."

Viral "Main khaana nikaaltha hun."

Vikram "Mishtiji aap estimate kar paogey kyaa khaana kitney din aasakthee hain."

Mishti was confused at first as she heard her name from Vikram.

Mishti "Main?"

Vikram "Han Aap?Kyon?"

Mishti "Theek hain."

Vikram was searching vehicles for something.

Miss K "Vikram kyaa dekh rahen hon?"

Vikram "Kuch paper yaa book.I need something."

Swathi "Peechey hain uss bag mey."

"Resources bag mey."

Vikram took out two scribble pads from bag and started distributing the stuff.

Amith "Itnaa jaldhee jyaa hain."

Vikram "Kuch nahenhumey kaheen bhee jyaada time waste nahen karna hain."

Vikram "All vehicles are rigged to stop working after 7 PM."

Amith "Mathlab ?"

Vikram "Hum sirf raat saath bhajey thak chal saktey hain.Usskey baad gaadi automaticllly stop hogee.kahan hain wahee."

Miss K "Yeh baath tumhey kaisey patha."

Vikram "Patil ney bathaaaya.Actually uss manual mey bhee hain but conveniently they made it their last point so no one reads."

Vikram "Mishtijee ek help chahiyen."

Mishti was totally confused she thought she is of no use to team as she never had any experience outside world.

But it is second time in five minutes Vikram is calling her name.

Sabh saaman ka list banana padega sabh mathlab sabh pane ka bhee hissab hona chahiyen.Sakshi and Swathi were helping her.

Anoop "Vikram.Iss taraha tho humey ten din laggega pahunchney.who bhee hum bahuth speed chalaaye tho?"

Poonam "Kitnaa door hain?"

Anoop "around 3000 KM."

Miss K"Hum din mey sirf baara ghantey chal saktey hain."

Vikram "Technically 10." Counting breaks.

Poonam "Aisey total 365 days."

Vikram just gave a smile.

Vikram "Tumlog gate key pass wait kar rahenthey naa.Kitney gaadiyan gayen."

Amith "pehley main hee pahuncha thaa.Jab thak main gayan around 60 they."

Vikram "Kissey aur ney is taraha kee gadiyan lee hain."

Anoop "Han I think 6 ."

Vikram "Resources?"

Anoop "Sabh ney khaana extra liyen hain.Jitnaa mainey dekha."

Vikram "Tum logon ney kuch nahen liyya?"

Anoop "I told him to consider about food packages ."

Vikram "Wahan ek red suitcase thee tumney ussey notice kiyya."

Amith "Han kyun?"

Vikram "Tumney ussey khola?"

Amith "Nahen tho .Kyaa tha ussmey?"

Vikram "Toll coupons."

Vikram "India mey harr toll cross karney key liyen .We missed it."

Anoop "What do you mean?Oh Shit."

Everyone shifted their attention to it.

Amith "Hum abh tolls clear nahen kar payengey kyaa?"

Vikram "Han.We have to max avoid highways ."

Viral "Breakfast set hain."

Vikram "Jyaada math socho its not a big deal.Hum manage karlengey."

Vikram "Mishti tumhaara kaam kahan thak aaya?"

Mishti "Completed."giving the pad to Vikram.

Vikram checked everything .

Mishti "Packed khaana pandraha din tak aayega.Dono gadiyon sey milaakar."

Mishti "Tumney laaya naa ussko pakaana padega who bees din thak hain."

Mishti "Paani dass din key liyen hain."

All are mostly surprised by caluculation of Mishti.

Misthi "Mujhey diesel key baarey mey nahen patha par poora drum hain"

Amith "200 Liters."

Mishti "Aur chaar cans bhee hain."

Amith "40 liters"

Vikram "Abhay tumehy koi idea hain refilling station kahan kahan hain."

Abhay "Iss raasthey mey chaar hain."

Vikram "Theek hain."

Vikram"Pehley khaana khaa letey hain."

They all sat for dinner Sakshi could see all are tensed even her.Vikram was doing some mental calculation.

Mishti was composed and not tensed but it is just a mask she is missing her house.

Viral was showing smiling but she could sence he is having some problem.

Miss K was as usual in jovial mood she has learnt to enjoy even hell.

Miss K"Vikram ek interview chahiyen." Holding the camara in her hand.

Vikram "Kyaa?"

Miss K"smile karon na."

Vikram just smiled .

Miss K"Tumhaare poora naam?"

Vikram "Abh nahengaadi mein."

Miss K "Theek hain.Ok mera reservation jiss bhee gaadi mey tum hon."

Vikram"Theek hain."

Miss K "Waisey Vicky?"

Vikram fave an angry glare at her.

Miss K"Tum log itney jaldee kaisey pahunchey.pandraha minute mey."

Vikram "Main jyaada speed chalaatha hun."

Miss K"Tum gaadiyon key baarey mey jyaada jaanthey hon?"

Vikram "Utnaa nahen but kuch jaroori padee thee issliyen kuch info."

Vikram "Pehley tum khaana khaalo hum baad mey decide karnegey."

Vikram "sham ko gaadi rukhjaaney key baad waisey hee baaraha ghanta kuch kar nahen paayengey."

Vikram "Uss time tum apnaa research complete karnaa."

Miss K agreed but has confused look in her mind.

Everyone were finished and about to go then.

Sakshi "Vikram mujhey kuch kehnaa hain."

Vikram "Bolo."

Sakshi "AMith tum bhee?"

Amith "Han bolo."

Sakshi "Vikram tum uss XUV chalaon waisey tum speed chalaatey hon."

Vikram signed as if no prob.

Amith "Kyon?"

Sakshi "Kuch logon key liyen yeh pehla lambhee journey hain.Unko adjust karna padega."

Sakshi "Issliyen observation kee jaroori padegee."

Sakshi "Issliyen Mishti,Abhay,Poonam ko check karna padega."

Amith understood the matter .

Sakshi "Swathi tumhey koi problem hain kyaa?"

Swathi "I am good.Tume tension math lo."

Amith "Theek hain."

Amith then went to red bag. And started distributing them.

Amith "Yeh paanch waalki talkies hain."

Amith "Hum do ley rahen hain tum log teen leey lena."

Amith "Contact mey rehnaa."

Vikram "Amith be careful.Samahaalkey jaana."

Vikram silently in his ears "We will win.Tum pressure math lo.We will."

Vikram "Kuch bhee problem lagee tho phone kardena .We are just behind."

Amith was surprised why he said that to him.

Amith leaves bidding them all he has to lead.

Amith "Miss K tum aogee."

Miss K "Tumhaara interview baad mey .Just kidding."

Miss K"I will join you later."

Amith leaves from there along with Anoop and Swathi.

Sakshi immediately started her work.

Sakshi "Abhay tum theek hon naa.Kyaa huan?"

Abhay "Main theek hun.Aap aisey kyun pooch rahen hon?"

Sakshi doing few regular checks randomly.

Sakshi "Abhay kuch bhee problem lagey mujhey jaldee batadena.Abh gadee mey math bhaithon paacnh minute bahar walking karo."

Mishti "Kyaa haun Sakshi."

Sakshi "Lagrahan hain ussko time lagega adjust karney.Indigestion I guess."

Sakshi "Long journies mey yeh problem cmmon hothee hain.Slowly week ho jaathey hain."

Sakshi "Tum theek hon na."

Mishti "Tum jyaada serious math lo yaar."

Sakshi "Main doctor hun.I can see it."

Vikram was just seeing her from distance while Miss K beside him was filming everything in the camara.

Sakshi "Viral.?"

Vikram "Ussey mujhko chodo I know it.Tum poonam ko dekho."

Vikram "Bhaisaab din mey kitney ghantey Gym jaathey hon?"

Viral "Chaar ghantey .Kyon?"

Vikram "Abh achaanak band karogey tho pains nahen hongey kyaa?"

Viral "Patha hain par yahan kyaa karoo."

Vikram "Solution hoga yaar dekho.Weigths hain yaa pull-ups,pushups."

Viral "pull ups."

Vikram "Whan pedh hain naa.Tr karoo."

Vikram and Viral went that side and experimenting on how to do

Sakshi was here enquiring Poonam who is looking fresh but Skahsi want he rin observation.

Miss K"Sakshi tumhaara interview kabh dogee."

Sakshi "Main celebrity nahen hun .Poonam sey ley lo pehley usskey fans wait kar rahen hongey."

Poonam "Abh tum bhee hon naa.Iss even mey tho tum bhee bane na?"

It took another half an hour for them to gather .

Miss K"Vikram pehalwaan ney tumsey bhee paseena bahaaya."

Vikram "Han kyaa karey gym jaatha who hain sikhaana mujhey pad rahan hain."

Vikram "Yahan kyaa situation hain."

Sakshi "Theek he lag rahan hain.Mainey kissey ko tablents nahen diyya.Mishti is OK.Abhay ko problem hain.Poonam is good for now."

Vikram "Abhay ko kyaa?"

Abhay "Main theek hun mujhey kuch nahen huan?"

Sakshi "Hum abh chal sakthey hain?"

Vikram grabbed the wheel.Viral sat behind with Abhay.

Mishti,Poonam and Sakshi were in middle.Miss K was in front beside Vikram.

Vikram raced the car on road driving fast.

Vikram "Abhay unko poocho who log kahan hain?"

Abhay called them.

Abhay "Amith bhayya aapsye baath karna chahtha hain."

Vikram "Speaker mey rakho."

Amith "Vikram ek problem hain.GPS kaam nahen kar rahan hain."

Vikram "What?"

Amith "Hummra position map mey nahen dikha rahan hain."

Vikram "Abhay hummara check karon."

Abhay "yahan bhee?"

Vikram "HMM.Tho yeh hai situation."

Amith "Kyaa huan?"

Vikram "Yeh bass ek map hain positioning nahen hoga."

Vikram "Humey pooraaney tareeqwy sey jaana padega.paahaado ka position dekhkar humey khudh identify karna padega..Like old NCC ways."

Vikram "Anoop hain na.Ussey raastha patha hain tum tension math lo."

Vikram "Hum haighways nahen ley sakthey so stay of side roads don't go far."

Vikram "Hum abh nikal gayen hain."

Amith "Theek hain."

Vikram was thinking something.Others are confused on the new problem that came before them.

Edited by Mr.PsychoTech - 10 years ago

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