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arshi_sarun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#901

Awesome update thanks for the pm

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#902

Beautiful and emotional chapter.

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cocoamob

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Posted: 10 years ago

#903

What an emotional chapter! It is heartening to see these two people, who love each other so much are finally reaching out to each other in ways that they have never done before.

Loss of a child is probably the worst loss for the parents. Grieving that loss is so important and could leave a lot of misery and pain if it is not done. But since no one else can understand that loss as the parents, they are also the best people to heal each other. They are finally there now - and what an incredible journey you have taken us through to get here! It is by no means an easy topic but you make the reader feel for both of them.

I have always loved the name Arnav and what it means. As his namesake, Arnav's personality is a deep one too. Who else but Khushi can know this? And she knows him well. As does he - he is now realizing what she has been going thru'.

What a caring sister Anjali is! I hope she will continue to be there for them and help them learn to live with the loss.

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Arunima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#904

Wonderful update. Loved it.😊

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suji5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#905

nice update
when will they both get rid of their nightmares?

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afsha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#906

Its so painful

Loved the update

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sheen.sk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#907

sorry for being late..
loved the update very much..
Arnav's nightmare was very painful.. & he is right that their Pari didnt even get the chance to cry.. you know that heart wrenching moment & when he was there with Bella & trying full hreatedly to intract with that was just very hard to see when he didnt get that chance to do with his daughter..

& the scene where Khushi watching both the ocean blend together was superb..&glad that the way Anjali play that trick & make her get along & over come her fear in the past..
waiting for nxt..
ps: i dont know what i writing, pls ignore any mistakes..hope you understand what i m trying to say...

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Anu567

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Posted: 10 years ago

#908

Jigs,

Superlative chapter...no words to describe the beautiful sun, sea, surf and Arnav episode...whether consciously or unconsciously done, the ebb and flow of the waves and Arnav's own sadness and uncertainty all meandered so beautiful... Khushi's grief has been something tangible all the way through since the beginning of the beautiful story...but Arnav - has always kept a lid on his sorrow. Always projecting only his happy, flirty, lovable, passionate persona...and ah, your Arnav can surf too...this is a bit like saying he can play the sax! So much gorgeousness...hmm...

Love the fact that they do seem to communicate more than so many couples do even at their lowest point. Their natural passion and chemistry as well as the deep feelings they habour for each other will eventually take them ashore...uff...I seem to be getting more verbose and maudlin than usual with this one...the surf, harbor, shore metaphor...I swear I do not normally speak like this...your Arnav and the beautiful storyline just do this to me...make me wax lyrical...

Let's hope this is indeed a new morning in their lives...the harbinger of good days...loved the bonding of the whole family, Arnav and Khushi's individual challenge with bonding with Bella...the whole Anjali, Khushi and Sid scene...all so lovely...waiting to see where we go next with Revealed...actually Jigs, scratch that...cannot wait...so please jaldee karogee meri jaan?!

Best,

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snoopy84

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Posted: 10 years ago

#909

Awesome update love that they are really talking hopefully it continues and they are able to get closer

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@addicted25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#910

Jigs, what a tear jerking chapter, for a father who didn't hear his baby cry, nor watch her smile, for a mother who needs to hold her baby , but knows she cant. Anjali is seriously a very canny woman, must have picked up alot from her own mother. We heal in stages, but at some point a couple who have lost their child need to talk to their love, share the loss with them, hold them until their tears subside, and they begin to heal together. It must be hard for a man to open up that way, but he loves Khushi, trusts her with his whole self, but doesnt want to upset her anymore, but by doing that he would allow her love for him to heal his broken heart, and vice versa.

Jigs thank you for putting in the translation of the Italian. My Hindhi is bad being a punjabi myself so italian whoa over my head.
They ned to take this break together with thd help of the children and their mum, they are on their way

Edited by addicted25 - 10 years ago

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