T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148

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Posted: 10 years ago

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really awesome story i enjoyed reading it 👏

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wonderful chapter and very beautifully written Mira.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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what a wonderful and passionate update...

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I really feel for Khushi and her dilemma but she needs to decide if she really want to be with Arnav or not

She can't keep going back and forth

It is not fair to herself and certainly not to Arnav

He wants and loves her but she needs to decide If she wants a second chance or live in the past with her dead husband

I know she feels guilty that she wants Arnav as NK is no more but NK is not going to come back

Either be with Arnav or make a clean break

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hi Mira. This story is shaping up so beautifully, it brings tears to my eyes. You have captured their emotions and turmoil so well. Their predicament felt so real as if I was going through the same emotions. Manoramas grief was heart rending as was khushis sense of guilt and Arnavs frustration. But they are all mature adults in this story and you have kept all of them sane and believable. That shows how wonderful a storyteller you are. Did you call this chapter cringeworthy? It was beautiful and just the way it was meant to be. Loved it and waiting to read more.