T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 10 years ago

#611

Beautiful MB. More than the kiss, more than the progress in ArShi relationship, more than their apprehensions, what stood out to me in this update was Manorama's thoughts.

We come alone, we go alone and all that we gain in between are just sojourns, which to my spiritual mind is only Maya, that which is not ours. How very true. The realization of this single most truth is the solution to all the problems - mental, physical, religious, emotional.

Such rich thoughts. You amaze me. Take a bow girl.

👏👏

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Shereen_J

@Shereen_J

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Posted: 10 years ago

#612

Beautiful chapter Mira.. Emotions were unmasked, and they were all out in the open. There was love, acceptance and doubt. I hope Arnav's patience and love will help Khushi overcome her doubts. She will learn that NK is not between them, but will be with them. And she is not going to lose him again.

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

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Posted: 10 years ago

#613

How do I start commenting on this sensitive and intimate chapter?

You started the chapter with such a sweet and caring bond. Two souls founding solace form each other and bonding like sisters. Manoraman'a concern for losing Khushi is so touching and the concern and assurance receive from Madhu is amazing.

You moved from sisterhood bond to lovers. The transition was beautiful. The intimate scene was beautifully pen down.

Will Khushi be able to move on with Arnav, while she is still holding too much on NK. Is she feeling that she is still married to NK? Was it the reason for her holding back? Or is she in fear of losing him, like every one she loves leaves her like, she lost her parents and NK? How can one overcome this kind of insecurity? Insecurity which is within oneself is very hard thing to fight? To overcome such insecurities, one had to fight from the core. I hope Khushi would realize how special Arnav is and how Lucky to get the second chance in life is. I wish Manarama and Lav will help to overcome this insecurity.

You have respected the Muslims in this chapter and I respect you for that.

Wish you a blessed Ramadhan to all the Muslims, in this forum.

Until next time, keep penning down amazing words. You left us craving more?

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#614

Wow, the way you bring out the emotions

those raw, plain, simple emotions

just amazing!!

Brings out those years from deep somewhere inside me!!!

also your sensuous scenes were just enough!!

What they should be, atleast according to me!!!!

Great job!!!

Take Care!!😊

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#615

You r a writer par excellence my dear friend,I am not only thankful to u but also to deepthi who had suggested ur ff.
I fell blessed to read ur work
A heartfelt THANK u that is what I can give back
Thank u

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#616

That was one Hot scene with emotion.. All the built up desire 4 each other finally loose.. I just Admire Arnav character here. Hope khushi will let go of Nk soon.. seriously that was a hell of the update. Brilliant writing on this tough concept... I can't imagine this to be ur first writing... U R a SUPERB writer...

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#617

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Shamz

@Shamz94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#618

Loved loved it job well done

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shubhanjli

@shubhanjli

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#619

Awesome update..

Both are struggling with their emotions. I guess its more difficult for Khushi to accept her feelings than Arnav. It ll take time and lot of strength for her to move forward. In fact she ll be needing a little push by someone to accept Arnav's hand.

Loved the update.. Loved it..

Thanks for pm..

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#620

Hi Mira, your ability to voice out the thoughts of each character is commendable. The tug of war between our heart and mind is forever ..for many reasons - each character has his or her demons to conquer..be it Manorama, Arnav or Kushi.

Manorama realizes and understands Kushi needs to move on. It tears her heart to part with Kushi and Meera. But she letting her go to help her stand on her own feet.

For once Arnav succumbed to his emotions. He was impatient and wanted all of it. But when he realized her predicament, he understood Kushi and was even patient with her..I am eager to know under what circumstances did they previously part ways..Was Kushi feeling guilty whenever they were intimate?

It is so endearing as well as distraughtful to know that Kushi wants NK and his memories with her. She fears that if she embrace a life with Arnav, she yet again lose NK. Hopefully, Arnav can banish her fears..

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