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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#231

Read it.
The first part brought tears in my eyes - I just didn't know until I saw the ink on the paper in my lap getting spread - that was simply superb

The second one brought a huge grin on my face - do I have to say why - oh Iam so so in love with this story
Will be commenting once again after re reading it

bTW, 1chilly is my favourite too - I love to read charu's comments

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sweety421

@sweety421

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Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Very beautiful update... the chatter on breakfast table... meera's persistent to stay... It was very heart warming to read...
Khushi is in a big mental fight I guess... She is scared... may be coz she knows she doesn't have the power of resistance towards Arnav...
Manorama... She is wonderful... The way she cares fo Khushi. ..but why do I think she is not hapie to see the way Arnav gives attention to Khushi. .?? (I hope m wrong)
Lastly I loved Arnav in this part... The way he talked about NK... The way he loves Meera... The way he understands khushi. ...It was beautiful...
I hope these four will have a gala time at river soon... Waiting to read about that eagerly...
Very beautifully written dear... ausmmm. ...

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Armela

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

A lovely update. The connection between the children is beautiful.

Edited by Armela - 10 years ago

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#234

I love how you are taking the story forward...its like you are slowly but surely peeling away the layers of each character and the place in life that they find themselves in.

What I specially appreciate is how this is not just about Arnav and/or Khushi but rather about all involved - Nani, Manorama, Mohan, Meera...its beautifully heartwrenching to see Manorama finally accept what she needs to do even though she still feels the twinge of having to see Khushi with someone else and to see her ie Khushi let go of NK to some extent...she has always seen Khushi as her daughter but NK was her son and it would be difficult for any relation (let alone a mother) to see her son being 'left behind' as the living move on but she understands that thats how life must be...and of course she can see how confused and conflicted Khushi is and I think she realizes that Khushi will not take the step forward with all her heart unless she has her Paati's blessings and support.

I loved how gradual this change was...very well done!

And the way Khushi is trying to fight what she and Arnav share but she cannot deny the solace she finds in his arms...it was so sadly beautiful yet euphoric in a way because as a reader you are invested in the story not just as an ArHi shipper but as a well-wisher for these two characters whose name could have been anything but the effect would have been the same.

Coming to Arnav...his resilience of making sure that Khushi does not run away in no way comes in between his humanity in understanding that she needs space, time and a friend...the latter being the most important - one with whom she can share all her thoughts, fears, pain and though Lavanya is that friend to her, if Khushi can ever hope to find love again it has to be with a person who does not wish for her to forget the past but rather move on with the past being an integral part of her and Arnav is proving that he can be that person.

All characters in this story are on a journey which criss-crosses each other but is distinct in its own right and you are penning it down beautifully.

PS - I specially liked the 'move on' piece in this chapter...Khushi's words ring true for everyone. One cant just move on like its a book you have finished reading. One has to spend time with the past, dwell on it and heal oneself and then move forward with that past deep inside their heart but not paining as much as it does at the moment...

PPS - Thank You for mentioning me as an author to check out in one of the chapters :)

Edited by AngelTeen - 10 years ago

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rainyday3000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#235

Such a BEAUTIFUL n SWEET update...loved it!!! :)

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jisa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#236

This chapter was so lovely...!!!
This shows the bond manorama n khush share...
how vulnerable khushi is withoout her..
Her inner insecurities...
w8ng for next..!

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Onlooker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#237

Kushi's reticence and the need for her to take NK and his memories with her, even though she is content in Arnav's arms ..i really felt for Kushi.

Manorama and Sumitra are intuitive and understanding..they feel that change is essential and is all for the good.

Mohan and Meera are becoming very close ...And your writing never tires me and always leaves with wanting me more..:)

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Barunz4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#238

Yet again a beautiful update !!.Loving the meera mohan bond already. .cute little munchkins !

Equally loving Arnavs efforts to bring khushi out of her sorrow and being patient enough towards her hesistancy to start a new chapter in her life..

I would wish you would have completed the talk between Patti n her Chellam. .Was wondering does even Manorama wish the same that devyani dreams off and can she too see the happy change it wl bring in khushi and meera'a life. What made khushi break down so much?..Was it because even Manorama told her to give a new beginning to her life or because khushi is feeling guilty to forget her past to make way for a better future..

Thanks for pm

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manusmithcl

@manusmithcl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#239

Thank you for the update.., was waiting eagerly.. Worth the wait..excellent chapter.. The final paragraph is a beautiful painting of happy family

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

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Posted: 10 years ago

#240

Thank u for gmail...😃

The update is beautiful...👏

Arnav is one fabulous guy in Khushi's life. Just totally in love with Arnav.🤗He wants Khushi to open up so that he can become a true friend & a soul mate for Khushi. He wants to fill Khushi's life with all the love & happiness once again...

Khushi's behaviour is justified. She is scared to move on in life. She feels that if she feels for Arnav, then like her parents & NK, he will also go away from her life. So she is not willing to move on in life.

But Arnav is like a pillar, he will give assurance to Khushi that he is here to stay... Slowly Khushi will accept NK's loss & due to Arnav's constant love, will think of her future with of Arnav.

Please update quickly...

Totally waiting for Arnav-Khushi romance to begin.❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️