Arshi FF: Like Never Before #4 - Thread 5 Added (26.08.15) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
so they are really missing each other...
its sweeet...sooo sweeet...
another adorable update...
u have left me craving for more...
😊

congrrrtttsss on new thread...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Wow thread 4 that's amzng yr
U truly deserves

U r such an awsme writer
The wag u expresses everything I can envision it easily
Which adds more beauty to the update




Really hatts of to u dear
U r really a gifted writer


Now coming to the update do I need to tell u it was perfect
Really mi toh fan ac cooler sab ho gyi

The way u portray their feelings n emtns hatts off to u girl


This is really getting very intrstng


Excited for update
Do update soon


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
nice update
looks like the distance is bringing them close..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
First of all congratulations for new thread yaar... :) full of high emotions pact update.. Kya baat kya baat kya baat !!! Loving the whole update how they longing for each other... 😳

Its really painful to spend time without your loved one... But you've created the magic with your words candy... The whole update shows how much they miss each other.. 😊 its really brave deed on their part to stay apart for seven days .. 😆 their flashbacks are damn hot :) specially the pool encounter

Loved the way how arnav imagines her everywhere... Dats really adorable.. Love you for giving such cute arnav 😳 lol

The conversation between lavanya n arnav is lovely like how they share their misery .. I like a piece advice that lavanya gives to arnav :- "Distance does make hearts grow fonder, Arnie, but that comes with a price. Pain, longing and patience." Smiling back as he seemed lost in deciphering her words, "It might sound silly, but just a call. One call would lift away all these dark clouds. Talk. Anything, everything. Silly, stupid, doesn't matter, she's your wife. Don't play martyr saying she'd be tired, she'd be busy, let her rest, let her enjoy, she needs space and all that cr*p. Coz you know when she needs space and when she needs you. So call. Keep talking. See how you'd get back. It wont be as good as being with her, but it wont be this sh*tty!"

Thank god.. Arnav ne finally call kia khushi ko.. Love their phone conversations, their miss you, miss you part.. 😳 hehe.. Khushi is being naughty while video chat... Amazing piece of writing ..! 😃 thanks for pm..!!

Take care!
Edited by Dhrenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Very beautiful update dear... They both r so lucky to have each other... A soul mate who can take all of ua pain away...!!!!!
Very beautifully written... Waiting to read more and more of this amazing journey
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Arnav and la👍🏼
And "Ek phone call ki keemat tum kya jaano?!"😆 The way you have described it👏 and also "what am I earning crore per hour for"
But somewhere I feel that the story is bit slow-paced some parts are dragged a bit and there are some parts where I actually read only the Bold part i.e conversations(sry for not going through that some parts on which u have worked so hard and if it has hurt you in anyway)
Having said this..I completely respect your thoughts your way of writing and the way you shape the story
And I love the way you describe every bond every gesture and every damn thing so beautiful I am literally awestruck sometimes😉

Edited by sillykudi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
beautiful update😃everyone needs a friend like lav.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
aww lovely update
loved it how dey coped wid separation
w8ng 4 more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
hey congrats on new thread :)
coming to update ...beautifully written... missing ...the away feeling at both ends...that craving...all written very well...loved the gifts arnav gave to her...his missing her while seeing bedroom pool and all...and the lil advice which lavanya gave him...which changed the day for them ...:)...khushi on the other end also just thinking about it...their video talk...and his idea to be with her through calls ...awesome awesome...loved it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Mindblowing update
Loved it
Congrats for the new thread
Thanks for the pm

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