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Rose

@stranger2rose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Hey hammie I think Shakespeare has said what's in the name? Lol so from dutta to dutta bhau to jogi datta to now rishi bhau are we finally done? I hope. Have to say in this ff not only his name but also his get up changes quickly and then he expects everyone to recognize him. Duh. But I am glad that his cattle and friend didn't take time to know that he is dutta. Special mention the bullocks recognizing him was a heart touching scene. Not just the people of PV but also the animals look upto him as their savior. Very nicely written. One request please don't disguise him as chamiya as pointed out by baaji. My weak heart won't be able to take it. Now coming to the bestest part. My part. Hammie I am impressed by your romantic scene. What a mind blowing jhuppi you deserve a pappi for this. Yes this is my dutta hot and aggressive when it comes to romance. For once he let his guard down and expressed his love. Great. I thought it would end here but no you surprised me and needless to say that I love these kind of surprises. The morning sequence was cute. Why does my innocent mind think that he badly wanted a good morning kiss??? Lol yes you have made me happy!

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mirage123

@mirage123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

hi hamletfab ud dutta changed his name & helping poor villagers & sametime rescue naku ..their meeting & convo was nice very nice..write soon

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afi7861

@afi7861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

hi hammie awesome update 👏 dutta change his look uff jana choti us jogi wale roop se.

dutta naku ki mulaqat waah waah.aur us pe hammie tera romance ka tadka waah waah...you are great hammie .love you so much tujhe pata hota hai mujhe happy kise karna hai like the song thanks 😃

waiting for next UD soon

HAMMIE 🤗

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: jedy25
hi hamletsuperb ud! dutta is working as farm hand at nana's place & sweet meeting of dutta & naku ..ud soon😊

hi tweetie pie... good to see you are number one reader😛..and even more glad to see that you enjoyed the ud.. and the gradual movement in it.. keep reading ,aiming to ud on Friday.. jedy .many thanks and much love.. yours,hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: Nakusha
hi hammiee helooo naku.. tu ah gaye..
loved the ud ...buhat garmi hai yahan har baar ke tarha bechara dutta bhi garmi mein maara maara phir raha hai
oyeee edhur bhi garme hai.. 25c.. now that is sizzling.. tempers rise when driving, honking and beeping! ..
dutta had a namkaran ceremony the poll among his follower rishi ...mujhe rishi bhau kehte hai kya ...samzla
😆 loved this remark.. humm ,naam karen indeed.. kya kare .. in disguises ,he beats nakusha of LTL1, yaad haina kitne roop the uske
baji & roops are keeping good track of dutta's household ...heera aur sona ko bech diya ..the money from nana wasn't enough 😡
you know greed knows no limits.. kuch aisa he haal hai dutta ke bros
dutta on time rescued them & found a job for himself
well he had to act fast to make use of his plans
the best part he met naku & brought colour back in her life ..thats what laagi dil se lagan 😳
now this is such a beautifully romantic line .. naku.. wont disagree
aage dekho hota hai kya ...chup chupkar milne ka maaza kuch aur he hai
yeah and you and a few others love the clandestine meetings!😛
as always u r amazinggg hammiee ..by the way r u allowed to reveal bharti's vacation location ..kahin hume bena batai shaadi toh nahin karle 😲
hainnn? bart.. laagan? you gone krazy naku?..bart shaadi kare tu humien na invite kare? no she would never do that! our bart is more of a bhage hoi dulhan! samhje naku??.. i can hear you say," ab main, kya bole?...😆.. waise why shaadi? is it shaadi season there too?.. here it is? and no i know what you are thinking... hammie is not that dumb!😆
wht dutta has hammiee gets the same serving roti & dal ...murga musalman has to wait ..ud soon😉
oyeee hosh mein tu hai tu.. dutta is vegetarian.. he perhaps dreams of murgh biryani.. whilst I CAN eat both.. thanks for the dal and rokli... bhaut lazeez.. tune ju buniye hai..😉..
sun thanks for a lovely comment ,plus kahana.. yeshh will ud on friday.. much love hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: uwith
hi hamlet
awesome ud ..dutta & naku's meeting too good ..as rishi bahu what is dutta's next course of action waiting to read ..regards uvi😊

hi uvi, great to see you ,pleased to see you enjoyed the ud.. well Rishi bhau's next moves will be outlined tomm.. in the Friday update.. thanks for your appreciative image ,uvi.. its my pleasure to write for you... much love hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: CUTE_SAPNA
@hammie: sorry 4 late reply,l deary. read it today.
hi cute.. read your feedback.. cracked me up with laughs.. so.. seems you were moved by the ud...

a titillating u/d.👏
hottt😳😳
last time only in 'out of my hands' got this feeling.
here i can say cute. that your comprehension of OOMH... is very impressive..👏... mujhe khud yaad nehin tha😆... but readers like yourself do catch me out..😛..
1) when naku got slipped in front of dsp & landed in his arms ; in ch 3, i guess.😊
2) there was much less proximity in the workshop of dsp, but still felt the hotness because of dsp's constant looking into her being.😊
3) when naku started living in pn with dsp, the could have kiss situation & dsp avoided it. as it was happening in the absence of the family members.😉😉😆
kisss??? erhhh,ummmhh.. yaar dutta shy hai😉.. he would think twice probably.. now if i recall correctly.. my SS Wedded Bliss mein kiss shish hain.. MAY BE because they are married..
but this u/d surpassed the above mentioned.
must say, u r getting hotter day-by-day.😆
hotter??? ohhh soweeeie was not good for your health.. at that time.. you sure the ud.. didn't give you a FEVER??

it's been 3 days i got hospitalized & today back at home, got my lappy.😃
so wasn't able to post even the 2nd part of my os.
glad, to know now you are fit as a fiddle now, cute😛
welll done and today .I CAN see it posted.. will for sure read it , after I finish
spl note: 'phaddu' means = out of the world, beyond all the boundaries of control. luv uuu hammie.😊
Thanku, for, translating the word so clearly..😃..
cute dream. thanks for a lovely comment.. and for reading my work.. much love hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi hamlet
wonderful ud
dutta as rishi bahu the saviour
baji & roops 👍🏼
the best was last part dutta & naku meeting😳👍🏼
ud soon

hi dilse , great to see you,😃.. so pleased you enjoyed the ud.. i know most readers loved the last section of the ud... check out the next ud.. will be posted tomorrow.. much love hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv
Awesome hammie...

Dutta now rishi bhau...

Rops baji like always fab...

Brothers meet nice...

Thnx for pm

hi ranju, great to see you, Iam pleased that you are liking how the story progresses on.. catch the next update on Friday.. thanks for reading and commenting.. much love hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: sona89
Hi Hamlet
Thanxs for good wishes for me & GANG😊..aWESOME ud DUTTA & naku getting chance to share light moments ..UD soon

hi sonaaa😃.. good to see and the gang.. hope the assignments are done and dusted.. read on the next update.. whenever you find the time.. thanks for the summery tulips, very pretty.. much love to you and the clan!😛.. hammie