ArShi ~You are amazing~ updated 10/07(part6(b)- Page 25) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks niya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Linsie


khushi well written...

and khushi just gave cake for ASR...

nice update

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sticker is wonderful thank u
Glad u like khushi's part
Yep cake to mil jaega ASR ko lekin he will liked it or not let's see...
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Originally posted by: dhanyac

nice start...
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Originally posted by: jeb1

Nice start

cont soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update ...
loved FM combination for khushi's intro ...
hehehhe..khushi got sweet parents !!!
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Originally posted by: Teddybear_doll

lovely update ...
loved FM combination for khushi's intro ...
hehehhe..khushi got sweet parents !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

A lady came out of cake shop, taxi was waiting for her.

"anjali mila uska favorite cake?" lady in her mid 50s asked her.

"ha maa mil gaya" anjali smiled.

"bhaiya chalo" anjali told taxi driver.

"tera bhai gharpe to hoga na?" a man asked her.

"papa aap aise kyun keh rahe hain. maine usase poocha tha he said I am in home only" anjali answered.

"bday ke din ghar pe? sudhar ne walome se to nahi hain wo" her dad said.

"aap mere beteko kuch na kahiye ji." her mom said.

"ma papa hum usko bday surprise dene aaye hain delhi se to aap dono thoda chill kijiye aur is sheher ka luft uthaiye" anjali smiled.

"ha bhai ab to chill hi karna padega" her dad taunted.

Taxi reached outside the multistory tower. Anjali and mom dad got down. When they entered through main gate guard saw them.

"namaste uncle ji aunty ji. kaise hain aap log?" guard asked them.

"hum ache hain. yaha pe sab kaisa hain ?" dad asked him.

"acha hain uncle. main sahab ko phone karta hoon aap log aaye hain" guard said.

"nahi nahi bhaiya hum use surprise dene aaye hain" anjali told.

"to thik hain didi aap log jaiye uper" guard smiled.




Ting Tong...

A guy in his late 20's was lying on sofa playing his psp. He was wearing shorts and tee. His tshirt were printed with quote"I am too hot to handle". He thought 'abhi kaun aya?' He checked out time 'sirf 7 baje hain. sab log 9 baje aane wale hain'. He sipped a coke from bottle. 'are ha maine ghar saaf karne ke liye cleaner ko bhejne ke liye bola tha wahi hoga' he got up from couch. Living room was messy drawing sheets, pencils, coke bottles , cloths.. khair chodo ab kya kya likhu aap log samajh lo kya kya hoga. He walked up to door. His hair were more messed up than room.

He opened the door without looking who is outside.

"Surpriseee" anjali shouted.

He stood still there for a second. He didn't know whats that. Mom dad anji, ohhh woww but why without intimation he thought.

"Happy birthday chote" anjali hugged him.

"thanks anji " he smiled but his dad shot him a glare "I mean di thank you".

"janamdin ki bohot sari shubh kamanaye beta" his mom greeted him.

"thank u so much mumma" he hugged his mom.

"jiunda rahe beta" his mom smiled.

"Humare yaha pair chooteh hain badonke" his dad said sternly.

"Rehne bhi do abhi naya jamana hain" his mom tried to covered.

"naya jamana sirf hum purane. Happy birthday Arnav" his dad said sternly.

"thank you dad" he replied and touched his feet.

"abhi andar bhi chalo yahi pe thodi na khade rehna hain" anjali said before anymore fireworks at door.


All entered inside the home. Arnav in thought 'ohh god dad to ghar dekhake mera kya karenge Anji ek call nahi kar sakti thi. ab kya karoon. vicky aur gang bhi ane wala hain. mere bday pe hi yeh sab hona tha.'

Arnav's thoughts got disturbed by his dad's voice.

"hum kaha baithe?" his dad asked him.

"ji?" he asked.

"yaha itni sari cheejone already apna ghar bana liya hain " his dad taunted him looking around.

"ummm ha wo main kuch kaam me busy tha isliye" arnav tried to pick as many things he can at a time.

"koi gal nahi puttar tu itna busy rehta hain kaam me" his mom said.

"kab sudharega yeh ladka" his dad said.

Arnav made couch clean so they can sit there. He text his friends not to come until he text him back.

"kaam kaise chal raha hain?" his dad asked him.

"It's good" arnav replied.

"wahi poorana wala hain ya firse change kiya hain?" his dad asked.

"abhi to old job hi hain lekin I am leaving it now. I am opening my own" arnav smiled.

"hmmm. usme kitna invest karna hota hain. mehanat karni padti hain pata bhi hain tujhe?" his dad asked him.

"Dad I am working from 3 years so I know" arnav tried not to get out of way.

"yaha puri jindagi nikal jati logonki samajhne me . tujhe 3 saal me pata chal gaya?" his dad said.

"I want to open my own so.." arnav replied.

Before his dad could asked further..

"beta tu kuch khata pita hain bhi yah nahi? kitna dubla ho gaya hain mera bacha" his mom said dramatically and his dad gave disgusting look.

"maa main khata hoon na aap chinta na karo" arnav said.

"mom dad aap log kya boring baate leke baith gaye. use uska bday cake to dete hain anjali interrupted.

"humari bate boring hi lagegi tumhe" his dad taunted.

Anjali opened cake box and put it in front of arnav.

"wowww blueberry chesecake" arnav smiled brightly.

"dekha mom maine kaha tha na ye iska favourite hain" anjali said.

"ofcoure you know me my dear sis" arnav gave her side hug.

"ispe ASR kyun likha hain?" his mom asked.

"are ma arnav jo apna khudka collection launch karega na first, uska naam ASR hoga,
ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA" anjali smiled.

"kitna hoshiyar hain mera bacha" his mom smiled.

"wo to hain ma lekin mujhse kaam" anjali winked at him.

"chal chal jyada hoshiyari maat dikha , abhi mujhe cake khana hain warna tujhe dekh leta" arnav replied.


'happy birthday to you happy birthday to dear arnav happy birthday to you'

Arnav cut the cake while anjali and his parents sang for him. He fade his parents, anjali, they fed him cake. They chatted for a while. It's been around 8.30pm or so. Arnav was looking at his watch 'ab kya karu? ma papa se poochunga to that will be odd anji ko maska marna padega hmm'
"di jara andar aao mere sath" arnav smiled.

"ha chalo" both entered in kitchen.

"kya hua?" anjali asked with plain expressions though she was knowing reason.

"anji tujhe surprises itnehi pasand hain to apne honewale pati ko diya kar na" arnav said.

"use to me deti hoon lekin socha ampne chote bhai ko bhi thoda surprise kar doon" anjali smiled

"ab haas mat yar. Maine party throw ki hain friends ke liye 9 baje" arnav said.

"to ane de na unhe mom DAAD bhi mil lenge unse" anjali giggled.

"Anjiii. Mom to firbhi thik hain. lekin dad no wayyy. mujhe agle bday tak sunana padega" arnav made a puppy face.

"chill mere not so smart bhai. maine uska intejam kiya hain. Aman ke parents ne hume khane pe bulaya hain and I have told them tu busy hain aaj so you are not coming. hum log abhi nikalne hi wale hain. aur we have our flight back to delhi late night coz dad and I have office tomorrow so chill We are leaving now" anajli smiled.

"thank god" arnav relieved.

"thank god kya? tere bday pe tujhe surprise diya humne aur humare jane pe tujhe khushi ho rahi hain?" anjali frowned.

"anji samjha kar na mom dad and friends party combination ... sirf isliye...warna I am really happy u know that" arnav smiled sweetly.

"pata hain mujhe chote" anjali smiled back.

"anji I am not chote now I am ASR" arnav said.

"lekin mujhse to chota hi rahega" anjali said.

"sirf 2 saal anji, not a big deal" he replied.

"not a big deal? dad ko bolu kya anji kaha tuna mujhe?" anjali raised her eyebrow.

"kyun marwana chahti ho meri maa? " he folded his hand.

anjali giggled looking at her bro.

"bechara aman tu kya haal karegi uska shadike baad I can imagine" arnav giggled this time.

"aman bhi kuch kam nahi hain" she said.

"firbhi I am from his side. btw when he is coming india?" arnav asked.

"It's depends on his assignment and uspe humari shadi ki tarikh bhi final hogi" she smiled.

"I know this time nani pakka tuze bida karegi. hows she?" arnav asked.

"nani good. tujse naraj hain tu nahi aata na delhi isliye" anjali smiled.

"hmmm I'll try to come asap. Lekin abhi to jyada busy ho jaoonga" arnav said.

"I can understand. dont worry I'll handle her. Work hard and all the best" anjali smiled.

"Thank u anji. waise anji cake kahase layi ho? it's ultra delicious" arnav smiled.

"'cake & happiness' shop se. Raste me hi dikha and I am lucky enough to get your favorite cake" she smiled.

"thats marvelous..." arnav smiled.

"It is. Shop is also really nice you should visit sometime. Lots of variety is there" anjali smiled back.




"anjali chalo der ho rahi hain" their mom called her.

"ha maa abhi aayi" anjali shouted.

Anjali and arnav came out.

"beta ab hum chalte hain. tum apna khayal rakhna" his mom smiled at him.

"yes ma I'll take care. aur aaoonga jaldi delhi nani se kehna" arnav smiled.

"ho sake to ghar saaf rakhna aur dhang ke kapde pehanana" his dad said.

"ji" arnav nodded.

"bye bro once again happy birthday. have a great time" anjali winked at him.

"bye sis and thanks" arnav smiled.


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NOTE: Anjali is not married. She will get marry soon with her fiance Aman who is in US. Anjali and Aman were together in company and Aman has got transfered in US. It's love marriage. Their parents hadn't made much issue about this. So All is Well

Hi friends,
Here you go with part 2
Hope you will like it.
Waiting for your response.
Thank you so much.

With Love,
mishti_forever


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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved anji and arnav's bonding !!!!!
lagtha hai papaji thodi strict hai...!!!!

lovely update ..

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