Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III - Page 27

Read it when you posted but could only comment now.

I think I love this story so much because your characters are so real. Or maybe because im from Delhi and this brings back so many memories..

The first step has finally been taken.. Like khushi said dosti is the first step towards rabba ves;-)

Anand raizada in hospital, is Poonam with him ? Why would they hide from their kids? What's with the wheel chair ?

Bloody shekhawat needs to be taught a lesson !

Abhimanyu .. Ek aur.. Sigh.. Will khushi be pressurized to say yes..
Love preeto and NK !!

Waiting for the next one :-)

WOW What an update! The universe did speak to Khushi and boy through so many people!

And finally the beginnings of a proper conversation between Arnav and Khushi! Hopefully the first of a lifetime.


This story is like a very long heavy articulated truck speeding along ona long road negotiating various bends and gradients smoothly and surely despite its weight and size 😃

Lovely lovely update, Radhika!

I have to tell you.. There is something in your writing that is very unique. Your story telling technique is complex but yet somehow you make it look so simple. Girl, you rock!

Love the way all the pieces ( past and present) are coming together in this story...

just checking my luck ;-)

Originally posted by: sman

just checking my luck ;-)

Originally posted by: YellowBoots

You are optimistic. This is me we are talking about 😛

I am having a bit of a 'the dog ate my homework' situation. Last evening I had scribbled and doodled the outline of chapter 14 on one of the many restaurant menus lying around the house. And I am not making this up, but I can't find it now. I am inclined to think that my son has either converted this into some origami creation or he has actually eaten it. Given the stage he is at when it comes to his motor skills the latter seems more possible. But he seems cheerful and active, so clearly the menu was nutritious.

But outline or not, I am going to write tomorrow. And hopefully it will be something coherent so that I can post on Sunday. Or Monday 😆

Radhika , I don't mind you delaying the update as long as you leave such notes..am LOL..

Originally posted by: YellowBoots

You are optimistic. This is me we are talking about😛

I am having a bit of a 'the dog ate my homework' situation. Last evening I had scribbled and doodled the outline of chapter 14 on one of the many restaurant menus lying around the house. And I am not making this up, but I can't find it now. I am inclined to think that my son has either converted this into some origami creation or he has actually eaten it. Given the stage he is at when it comes to his motor skills the latter seems more possible. But he seems cheerful and active, so clearly the menu was nutritious.

But outline or not, I am going to write tomorrow. And hopefully it will be something coherent so that I can post on Sunday. Or Monday😆

😆 😆

Radhika, I have to agree with Shailaja(sman), you leave the best notes ever. 😆

Wonderful story read it in one gooo... cant wait to read the next update