Virika OS: Midnight Mischief

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

absolutely brilliant

totally loved it

superb

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wal43

@wal43

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

😃Thanks a lot for the wonderful update

you totally did justice to it

I really loved it

it was awesome

amazing

superb

fabulous

their romance and manvi virat's sleep talk

really It made my day

I kept on reading it

and the last scene their cute talk with manvi's disturbance

just adored it

I really was imaging it

thanks you so much

lots of love

please keep us this lovely updates😊

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sushmakryan

@sushmakryan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

awesome update

loved it

loved the whole update

virika conversation was very nice

they were thinking about the future

in between that virat manvi disturbed

and in last manvi told sleep and that was nice

totally

amazing

superb

fantastic

thanks for the pm

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Mansi

@MyKryan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Gosh! What an OS!

Loved it so much

Actually a beautiful "Midnight Mischief"

Brilliant piece of writing!

Keep writing more!

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vidhichaudhury

@vidhichaudhury

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Superb os.loved it
thanks for pm.sorry for late

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kryanlavish

@kryanlavish

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

beautifully written.. just loved it
how I wish this would have happened in the show...
every moment of os was amazing
superb work

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Nishtha Relan

@Nishtha.Relan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

awee!
This was indeed a very
Cute
Loving
Sweet
Caring
Awesome
Mindblowing
Outstanding
Marvellous
Phenomenal
Splendid
OS!!!
Fall in love all over again with virika,
The way you have potrait the scne, was so amazing! Each and every lines of the Os was pure and lovely, love how virika was romantic on the terrace and talking about thier ending, how lovely viren explained jeevika about they would not have an endinh! And the fun part when virman was awake haha omg! Tooo goood! How scared was virika!!!! And at last the virika baby talks !!!
It was a phenomenal OS!!
Cant wait to read more of ur OS!!!
Thank u serah for the OS and pm!!
Love yaa

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