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Hello everyone This is the so awaited Os written by Prishnee which she is dedicating it to Sameeha as a belated happy birthday gift and also to Nishtha. I hope you all like it and give a good response so prishnee gives us more of it.😊😊

Viren and Jeevika was returning from a birthday party. It was their first night out after their wedding together and alone. Jeevika wore a blue saree and Viren had a white shirt and jeans. They were talking happily in the car when suddenly it started raining heavily. Viren could not see properly due to the heavy rainfall. He stopped the car and informed Virat that he is stucked on the way due to the rains. He stared at Jeevika whose eyes were glued to the window watching the rains.

J - You know virenji,i love the rains. I feel like dancing in the rains.

V- Jeevika even i love the rains..shall we go out and make memories?

Jeevika blushed and she opened the door.Viren followed her and they started playing in the rain

Suddenly Jeevika noticed that Viren's white shirt is completely stuck on his body and she could see his chest. She turned back covering her cleavage. " if Virenji's shirt is so transparent then even my clothes are" Jeevika said in her mind. Viren could sense her uncomfortable.

V- Jeevika i am sorry i did not want to make you feel uncomfortable.

J - No no virenji you did not make me feel uncomfortable.

Viren knew Jeevika was shy and he saw a little wooden hut few steps away.

V- Lets go Jeevika.

He held her hand and took her to the hut. It was filled with stacks of straws and there was a fireplace. Jeevika found some sheets and Viren make a sort of curtain to let Jeevika dry herself.He went to try to lite the fire and he succeeded. He could see Jeevika's shadow reflecting on the sheet and he stood up walking towards her.

Her back was facing Viren and she was trying to open her pallu. Viren slowly came towards her and brushes his fingertips near her waist.He touched the exposed skin of her stomach with gentle brushes of his fingers evoking goosebumps along her body. Viren turned Jeevika towards him and she blushed. He cupped her face and moved his lips down to her jaw, down her neck, whispering love against her galloping pulse. Jeevika was shivering due to the cold and Viren wrapped her tightly in his arms. She gently leaned her head on his chest. Viren slowly moved his hands to the laces of the damp fabric of her blouse from her shoulders.He spent the last few minutes struggling to unfasten the lace and he succeeded.Jeevika was awestruck and a bit scared but Viren assured her with a kiss. Viren removed her pallu and her blouse. Jeevika stood still holding her cleavage and tried to turn away but Viren caught her and turned her towards him.

V- We have waited for this night since so many days. Will u allow me to make you mine?

J -Virenji..i was yours since the day i fell at your feet.

Viren pulled her closer and removed his shirt exposing his bare chest. He pressed his chest against Jeevika's cleavage. Viren trailed his tongue on her collarbone with streaming kisses

down the ridges of her clavicle to the hollow of her throat, dipping his tongue to her smooth skin,sipping the remnants of rain and sweat pooling there, making her body quiver with anticipation. His mouth travels lower between her breasts, but rather than a simple kiss, his tongue gently lick her breasts and she had to bury her fingers in his hair to hold on, to stay afloat through the wave of arousal and affection crashing over her.

"Virenji..Virenji.."The whispered breath of his name is all that is

required for his lips to drift to the slope of her breast. Her eyes are fluttering, her mind flickering back and forth between the sensation of his tongue swirling over the taut peak of her nipple and the silk field of hair her fingers are gliding through, the way he shudders when her nails graze his scalp.

J - No..Virenji..am shy

She said as Viren moved down.

V- Jeevika..trust me..

Jeevika had no choice. She closed her eyes as Viren was removing her saree. Viren lifted her in his arms and laid her down on a bed sheet spread on the stack of straws. He pulled another sheet on them.

All Jeevika had to do was to nod and Viren slipped inside

her, a slow, torturous push that stole her breath. They're still for a moment, adjusting and Jeevika combs the tangled locks of her hair from her face, touches his fingers to her temple, circling his thumb there.

"Okay?" Viren murmured softly and Jeevika opened her eyes slowly that she had allowed herself to close them for even a second, and brings her other hand up to Viren's jaw, splaying her fingers there.

"Yeah," Jeevika assured him, stroking her thumb

along the shell of his ear.

Jeevika gasped when Viren moved, clutched at his neck

with both hands as his lips descend on hers. She

opens for him, offers everything and takes all

he gives. In the back of her mind, underneath the swell

of sensation, Jeevika thinks of dancing, it feels

like dancing with Viren. They move together, bodies swaying,coming together and breaking apart, but only for a moment. The cove of his body never goes far from her, always brushing, pressing, covering some part always touching her and caressing her. It makes Jeevika feel safe, makes her forget everything else, because this, this is all she really wanted. Just Viren,only her Virenji.


The flash of lightening illuminates the dimness

of the hut as she circles her hips into his,laces her legs around his waist and tugs him closer, deeper. The vivid heat of Viren's tongue makes Jeevika moan, gasp for air and he breaks his lips away from hers, sharing the breath between them. His eyes are like the storm clouds that hang over the city, coming alight with every stroke, every thrust he was giving her and quiet whimper that escapes from her throat.

"I love you." Jeevika whispered. The confession falls to her cheek, spreading downwards in a rush of warmth that flows from her chest to her limbs, only adding to the bubbling heat consuming every part of her. Her arms cling tighter to him, encircling his torso, palms spreading over the wings of his shoulder blades, nails digging into his skin. Viren thrusts into her for that and Jeevika arches at the sparks of pleasure intensifying, the fire burning brighter and brighter deep in her stomach.

"Let go," Viren whispered in her ear, his hand slipping beneath her once more, pressing against her tailbone to seal her closer, holding her flush against him tighter. Their synchronized rhythm slowly falls apart with them, breaking as the sizzling friction becomes too much, as every part of Jeevika turns to flames. She clenches around Viren, bursting apart and feeling him shudder inside her, holding her tightly as they continue making love over the edge together.

They're a tangle of sated limbs moments later, arms and legs twined and twisted around one

another, and she turns her face into his neck, retracts one of the arms curled at his back to

sift her fingers through his hair, listening to him humming against her shoulder.

"Jeevika...Jeevika.."

Viren whispered her name over the pattering noise of rain against the

hut and inches closer, nudges her nose against his and push harder inside her. Jeevika feels the gentle sigh of contentment as Viren releases into her.

"God, Jeevika.. That was sexy. " Viren whispered in her ears. Jeevika cradles his face as she kisses him, indulging in the languid waltz of tongues, and coaxes

him to his back as she slides over him, rests her forehead to his and breathes, gives them both just a second to breathe.

" I love You Jeevika" he continued kissing her and whispering between the kisses

"Love you, love you, love you," he chants until his mouth covered hers, worships hers, and her words turn to moans.


Their second time is not so quiet and gentle as Viren is determine to make Jeevika moans his name again and again all night marking her as his forever and they finally become " VIRIKA "


I hope you all liked the update
please do hit like and comment
Credit - Prishnee
this Os is specially for Sameeha and Nishtha😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ressy!!!
Will update my comment soonishhh
Oh bale bale me firsttt
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Oh. My.
😳
Well talk about a hot update
This was one was steaming 😉
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awesome update
romantic and hot update
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Prish di...
That was amazing😳
Though I've read it earlier but reading it again is perfect
The steaming update drives me crazy😉
Love all your writings
Keep writing more and more

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