||Captive In The Dark|Teasers Page-16||D3, DMG, Sadda Haq - Page 10

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan

wow

interesting prologue

looking forward to read this one

the concept is unique

update soon

thnx 4 d pm

and do pm me the updates

waiting

Originally posted by: --Ecstasy--

Interesting concept.

Do continue.

Thanks for PM.

Originally posted by: ssna

Is dis some kind of supernatural story .
Were magic whiches evil siprit etc r der

Originally posted by: NidaJavidTaaRey

Fab concept update soon

Originally posted by: chand91

nice start

intrstng

Originally posted by: CrazyForAmar

Awesome prologue. Loved the way you have written it. You have describe everything beautifully. So...its a crossover of 5 couple but i know only 3 of them. But m happy that i will get to know the rest 2 couples. Best part of this ff is that it is dark. Haye i love dark FFs. CONTINUE SOON

Originally posted by: yoga123

Interesting...

Originally posted by: aneesha93

A cross over... Really brilliant concept. How on earth do you manage to come up with such amazing concepts?? Kudos to your creativity girl👏. Go ahead with this ff. Would love to read more.

Originally posted by: sandhir_rd

hey awesome start dear.

love d concept.

so sandhir ll b there love to b part of this ff.

do update soon dear.

n do pm me whenever update plzzz.

Originally posted by: ...Shrisha...

Amazing concept
Plz update soon
And is possible pm me
I love dark mysterious stories which are like almost rare on IF
Thankd for writing one
Amazing prologue and all 5 couples are my fav Taarey my all time favorite Swaron current passion Sandhir umm...I love their hate hate relationship and Sidma snd Arsh nostalgic
Plz keep the essence of the characters in your story with the darkness because i guess that's what is the most missed
Anyways all the best for your story
Once again outstanding concept