ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #3 : Thread 4 added on Pg 1 (28.10.15) - Page 27

take my breath away...

It ll be a bike ride I guess

Finally u updated
After the teaser I was dying to read it

And the wait was worth it
I so loved it
So beautifully written

Very entertaining

Love u
Keep smiling

Awesome ... At last Arnav told her ... Let's take one step at a time ... The man need to mend , his trust on women has to be restored... And Khushi doing the damn good job of it ...

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Fabulously written :) candy taras khao hum sab par.. Itne ache update dekar kya jaan logi hamari 😆 har baar tumari tareef ke liye naye words kaha se lau.. Haha, just kidding, haan.. !! Great update yaar, the various display of emotion in ur update seriosly left me with no words.. let me reming you once again that you amazing 👏

I am in love with arnav's childlike excitement for harley davidson bike, his overspeeding ride with our cute khushi, khushi love towards arnav and m speechless dnt know how to convey all these things through words.. 😊

Arnav's confession made my heart flutter... But you finished the update at the exact moment candyyy!!!! You left us at cliffhanger, i want read khushi's reaction cz for these words she was waiting like eternity... Plz next update jaldi dena yaar... I will be waiting for it 😃

On the whole, beautiful update yaar, its so warm to see arnav slowly opening up to khushi 😳 thanks for pm n sorry for late editing, was busy with some guests at home 😊

it was great...i cant wait to see the reaction of khushi...please try to update soon...

awesome update

awsome
wonderfully written
loved it
cont soon

Awesome...

Hhyy y sch a short one !!!!
Nenu chala wait chesa ee ff updt gurinchi :-(

Though my guess was wrong...
I lloovveeeddd d ''Hold Tight baby'' part...
Omg he confessed !!!! Wowwwoowww
Oohhh khushi... Nenu neeku epudaina cheppana how much I love u !?
I love u my arnav s saviour...

Amzng updt but I WANT MOREEE
Loved it..

Plz updt Next one soon pretty plzzz