AR TS On Armaan Riddhima By Megs ;) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Sweet start I can't wait to read the rest
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Very veru nic part...
ar relation is so understanding...
continue soonnn...
Thanks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
hey megs!!!
finally ur back with an update i m glad ur
but u take too long this time bohot wait karati h tu ab i m angry with u *pout*
ok now story pe ati hun yeh sab baad mein dekhungi
story arranged marriage concept with different turn
ar ki love story like a movie vivah but little different too
actually i loved nd adore the movie so i loved the story nd concept too
first of all the title is beautifu "meri duniya h tujhme kahin" its beautiful
starting is also nice each nd everything is described perfectly
their character sketch abt 3 girls is interesting
so ridhz ko ladke wale dekhne araha h that too sineone known may be family friends lets see loved how padma is supervising everything nd pancing also like a typical mother
actually their is slightly mistake their somewhere u call ridhz elder sister taani nd her husband anurag mallik that is in starting but then after it turned in anjali or phir song its taani
bohot confusion thi
anyways ridhz or armaan dono ki feeling perfectly describe ki thi song ne nd tune obviously *wink*
u know i loved these type of scenes how ridhz is blushing,nervous yet happy nd armaan how he is desperately seeing the stairs waiting for ridhz aww soo cute
i m imagining kajen
then character sketch of both clear the story but one thing is also their armaan anurag taani nd atul anjy whatever ki shaadi mein ridhz se nah mila ????
loved armaan nature how cute he is nd ridhz so sweet
so he fall for ridhz seeing her photograph its so romantic
loved how armaan is staring at ridhz all the time ns admiring her
loved how he compliment her abt her dress nd looks nd she blushes
tyen cafeteria scene is also cute how he ask her for date nd kiss her on her hand nd left with a wink with a shocked blushing ridhz bd same with the locker room moment too
their date is simple yet cute
loved how their freinds tease ar on the engagement day
loved how armaan always got mesmerized seeing ridhz nd her beauty
their moment in the trial room is also hot nd romantic
loved the wedding ceremony nd all the ar moments till end
happy that they r married nd confessed their love on that day itself loved the part
loved how understanding armaan is nd loved all the ar moments armaan gift too
that's a really lovely cute nd beautiful story loved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Hiyyaaa Megsss...
Here I come with my comment hehehe...
Padte padte sojana mat... Kyunki yeh comment baaki comments se long hone wali hai jo main usually teri har part pe karti hoon...
Issiliyeh maine socha , kyun na shuru karne se pehle warning de dun...
So Siggie se shuru karte hai...
Awesome Siggie megs... Kya baat hai, tu bohot acche acche siggie bana rahi ho aajkal...
Cool keep up the good work...

Now about the part...
Usse pehle TS ke naam ke baare mein kuch kahun...
Bohot accha naam hai, naam se hi aur zyada excited ho rahi hai TS padne ki hehe...
But as it is a TS, two ya three parts pe khatam hojaenge na...

Anyways now about the part...
Love introduction of Gupta house...
Wow, I just love the house description...

As u mention something was going inside the house, mein soch rahi ti kya...
Kahin kissi ki shaadi ki tayyari toh nehi...
Phir Lady telling Ramu to put phool away as koi aane wala hai aur dekho sab tayyar ho gayi ya nehi kitchen mein toh samajh aaya shaadi nehi balki kissi ke aane ke liyeh tayyari ho rahi hai...
Room description was again superb...
Oh toh Padma and Shashank hai...
Toh Koi jaani pehjaan aa raha hai aur woh bhi in dono ke beti koh dekhne...
Means ladke wala aa raha hai ladke ke saat...

Introduction of Shashank and Padma was cool...
So they are Doctors as professional... Pure family toh doctor hai hehee...
their two daughters are also doctors... Accha hai, ek bimar hojaenge toh dusri hogi na ilaaj karne ke liyeh hehehe...

now introdcution of another room which belongs to their daughter...
Wow blue and white, its cool but not really like girlish hehe...
Awesome description of room...
Mujhe laga doh hai but yaha toh teen hai hehhe...
Oh toh Muski is friend of Riddhima and Tani is sister of Riddhima who is 3yrs elder to her...
Wow, Tani is already married to one of the Mallik's and behen bhi same family mein jaa rahi hai hehehe... Cool...

Introduction of Tani, Riddhima and Muskaan was awesome...
So Riddhima is a shy one and Muskaan is as usually same as in DMG hehehe...
Rahul and Abhi is also friends of Riddhima and RM is in relation but fight like tom and jerry... If they both don't fight, it wouldn't be really like RM hehehe...

Now, Riddhima ki entry hogayi...
Looking simply beautifulll... Love her description...
Love the way u describe everything in song...
Groom family meeting with bride family...
How Groom mother asking for to be bride after introducing groom and his sister to bride family...
Groom eagerly waiting to meet bride and see her in real...
How his eyes was fixed on the stairs were bride came with her sister and friend...
Groom sister seeing him staring at the stair and nudge him to bring back to the world...
as soon as groom see the bride to be, lost in her beauty...
how bride to be feeling someone intense gaze and both secretly stealing gazes...
Everyone was just superbbb...
How groom try to concentrate in the conversation with others but was not able to as bride to be sitting front of him...
Bride to be feeling nervous whenever groom look towards her...

Song was superbbb...
Finally groom and bride father's ask them to talk and bride father ask her to take her groom to be to show him around and get to know each other...
Malliks family introduction was cool, so Armaan Mallik''s love his family specially his mother...
He is being a good boy and never had a gf in his life as he wanted to show his romantic side only to his wife , wohooo...
Riddhima is very lucky then Armaan had take a like to her...
Ahaan Armaan is a mamma's boy and every girl dream life partner...

Now back to AR, yaha Riddhima ne pura house dikha diya aur kaha kiski room mein woh bhi bata diya...
But seems like Armaan has found her most interest then anything else around the house...
Poor Riddhima, feeling nervous and shy but still she manage to show him around alone...
Aur yaha Armaan Sir toh bas usko admire karne mein busy hai hehehe...

Finally, they make up to Riddhima room...
Thank god Armaan ne apne nazar Riddhima ke face se toh hatayi hehehe...
Arey wah, Armaan koh room mein nehi, jo fragrance hai us mein kho gayi...
Kya baat hai, when the smell touch his nose, usko damn sure ta woh Riddhima ne use ki issiliyeh room mein bhi spread hai...
Abhi se Riddhima ke likes koh pehchaan ne laga hai Armaan Mallik...

Then their conversation, it was awesome...
Awww, Armaan tell his secret to Riddhima after hearing Riddhima likes, which no one else no other then his brother...
Thank god Armaan leave the bad habbits thinking about his family...
Truly Armaan is a nice guy, he tell Riddhima about his past before she asking him, he has started to Riddhima... thats nice...

Yeyyy, dono shaadi ke liyeh maangaye...
Aur sagai ki aur Shaadi ki date bhi fixed hogayi wohooo...
Everyone is happy and abhi se tayyari shuru kardi hehee...

Now Next day...
Riddhima entry in locker room, Muski and Tani teasing her...
Gang moment was superb...
Then Tani telling they have a surprise for Riddhima in nurse station...
Wow, hero entry in hospital as a senior doctor...
Yeh Riddhima kitni sharmati hai hehehe... baap ke saamne bhi aise sharma rahi hai jaise baap ne poocha shaadi karlo Armaan se...
Then after Tani giving duty, Riddhima went to show Armaan around the hospital...

Jab hero heroine saat hai toh aisa ho hi nehi sakte haina romance na ho hehehe...
Aur jab heroine ho toh hero koh koi aur hospital dikhae yeh bhi nehi ho sakte right...
Armaan toh sirf Riddhima koh dekh raha ta... Usse toh kuch aur dikhai nehi dete...
Aur Riddhima, bus blush karti rehti hai harwaqt tomato banjati hai...

Love AR little moment but before they get losing themeselves, Armaan remind Riddhima that they had to go to duty...
Phir lunch time mein Anurag also joins them, how Tani admiring AR together and Anurag telling they are perfect together like them , making Tani go red...
Their little lunch time, Rahul and Abhi introducing to Armaan...
Armaan holding Riddhima hand under the table making Riddhima surprised seeing Armaan this side...
When everyone left, Armaan asking to go out dinner with him and Riddhima agreeing but telling to take permission from her parents...
Wah, Armaan toh bohot smart nikla... Pehlse hi sasurjee se permission le liya hehehe...
Then telling her to be ready and kiss her hand before leaving making again Riddhima blush like a tomato heheh...

AR date was simple but really sweet...
Their moment in locker room first when Riddhima was going to get ready...
Armaan asking not to make him wait so much and he would wait outside for her...
When Riddhima come out after getting ready, Armaan was again lost in her simple beauty...
All AR small moment was a treat to read :)

I just love the way Armaan talk her about the place they could go hahhaa...
Armaan is so much free around Riddhima as if he don't need to be tense or worried about whatever he say around her...
Then Riddhima also talking him without any hesitate seeing Armaan was trying to get to know each other more...
Wow dinner in beach restaurant was a super idea...

Days past , so soon hehehe...
Cool AR is getting to know each other more, with more dates...
Finally engagement day has come...
Beautiful decoration...
Wohooo, both has started to have feelings and slowly realizing their feelings towards each other...
Even I wish they get to realized their feelings before marriage ehehehe...

Riddhima dress description was superb, as well as Armaan...
Both admiring and checking each other losing themselves in each other...
Abhi, Rahul and Anurag teasing Armaan was fun where else girls didn't leave a chance to tease Riddhima hehehe...
Gang always complete AR by standing their side in every situation :)

Finally, they are engaged... Rings were beautiful...
Now AR dance sequence was superb...
Both lost in each other trying to find answer to their questions...
Everyone enjoy their dance, as well as I enjoy, it was superbbb *Clap clap*

Then here comes the day they all go for AR shoppinggg...
Wohooo... hahahaha...
Girls busy doing their shopping whie Boys was busy in their...
AR moment was hottt...
Both losing their sense being so closed...
How Armaan control his desire and ask Riddhima to get that lehenga for the wedding as it was looking perfect for her...
Riddhima agree as she like the dress too, cool ... abhi se Armaan ke har pasand koh pasand karne lagi hai Riddhima hehehe good good...
Finallyyy, they realized sharing that close moment and feeling so right that they are in love with each other...
Ab toh bas confess hona baaki hai :D

Now marriage day also came... wah wah badi fast hai tu megs...
But u know what, I m loving this...
Sab kuch itna fast fast hote hai toh mujhe padne mein bohottt maza aati hai...
Aise hi likhte rahooo :D

So Armaan and Riddhima has realized they love each other, thats good...
U describe mandap perfect and beautifullyyy...
Armaan sherwani and Riddhima lehenga was sooo nice...
Again u show whole marriage in song it was superbbb...
Perfect song selection for the situation...
Love the way u describe everything from starting to end...
From where Riddhima was brought to the mandap, how Armaan hold her hand helping her to climb and not leaving her hand as they continue with their wedding...
When Riddhima got emotional in Kanya daan ritual, how Armaan tell her through eyes, everything will be fine...
Then Riddhima living the moment when Armaan put sindoor and Mangalsutra...
Both complete rounds holding each other hands while taking vows...

Finallyyy, shaadi hogayiii...
Phir aayi jhoote churane ki rasam and as usual ladki waali ne baazi maardi heheh...
Awww, Tani was asking to keep Riddhima happy in return of their sagun was so sweet...
Then comes bidaai time and how Riddhima cry bidding bye to her family...

After rona dona, Riddhima reach her new house with Armaan...
Everyone welcome and Riddhima follow Tani and Armaan mom instruction about the ritual...
Then ring searching ritual was funnn...
hahaha both holding each other hand, actually Armaan was holding Riddhima hand and Nikki ne sabke saamne boldiya kyun itna time laga rahi hai hahaha...
that was really hilarious but ambrass to AR when Armaan parents were there...

Rituals was completed finally and Armaan mom asked Tani and Nikki to take Riddhima to Armaan room which would be her rooms as well from now...
Room description is superbbb... Nice decoration I must say ehhehe...
Nikki teasing Riddhima and tani giving some advice and making her feel less nervous telling how much nice guy Armaan is...
When Armaan came, Tani left giving them their chance to be with each other for the night wishing them good luck hahaha, yes they would really need it ;)

OMGGG...
Did Armaan just confess on their first night...
Riddhima ke saat saat mein bhi surprise hoon...
Mujhe ek minute ke liyeh laga Riddhima kuch nehi kahenge aur dono aise hi kapde badhal ke sojaenge hehehe...
But I was wrong, Riddhima also confess, bravooo...
Accha hai dono ne itna zyada time nehi liya aur confess kardi hehehe...

Then after the confession, they both change and settle down...
Armaan searching his name in Riddhima mehendi...
How he ask for his gift and their first kiss, wohooo... hahahha...
Love AR small moment...
I m waiting for their super hot moment as u say urs would be more hot then mine :P
Ya yah, I know I have to wait for till next part hehehe...
The gift Arman gave to Riddhima was beautifulll... Love ittt...

Wow, this is super cool part Megsss...
Sab kuch itni jaldi jaldi ho rahi hai but seriously I m loving it so muchhh...
When in a story, things happen this fast, mujhe bohot pasand aati hai heheheh..
Specially when it comes to hero and heroine hehehe...
I love ittt so muchhh...
Continue super sooon...
Muwaahhh Love you...

Ayye hayye...
Pleasure is all mine darling megsss...
Heheheh, U know I love to help anyone how much I can right...
Love u tooo... Muwaahhh :*
Issi baat pe jaldi next part update karo darlinggg hehehe...
Cuaaa...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: megha_kajen


kar diya post...
chalo ab comment karo
samjhe nnaaa...
bbhhhuuppp...


Bohot acche se samajh gayiii...
issiliyeh dekho dekho, comment bhi kardi maine hehehe...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
such a beautiful story based on arranged marriage!!!
armaan is so understanding and ridz too shy but loved their chemistry...
AR confessed on the wedding night...with a sweet kiss...
waiting to read the next update ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Okkk megsss finallyyy i read ittt
awesummm re
i just luvd it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
really nice story so far, thanks for the PM.
look forward to the next part, update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: HR-DMG4life

Sweet start I can't wait to read the rest


thanx dear...
m glad u liked it :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: karankajen

Very veru nic part...
ar relation is so understanding...
continue soonnn...
Thanks 4 d pm...


thanx karan for comenting...

yaa i'll continue soon...bye
tc :)

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