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Posted: 10 years ago
Heya dear tysm fr the though i hv read it before but i couldnt read ur stry as on fanfic forum i rarely read incmplt stries
Ek hi baar me cmplt package chaahiye moiko u see 🤣
Now cmin to my cmn here it goes 😉
Ma talli soul ghoomin here n there landed on ur ff aiiiyyyooo its soo hot here
*sees title * jjjeeeksss title itslf is hot
Arnieee 😳 sooo romantic 😳
I love u arnie missin u alot 😭
Ok cmes bck frm arniewrld 😭
Plot awsum arnie totally flat on khush frm first day itslf
Every scene every movement n emotion beautifully described
I cud imagine it clearly shotti
Khush indepentent talented n beautiful gal 😊
She is also affected by arnie in same way n ho v kyu na he is ma arnie afterall 😳
The dance aiyyyooo its freaking hot here moi sweatin every movement imaginable
Ps . Moiko aur koi wrd nhi mila 🤣
N last scene arnie losin himslf 😳
Callin each othr by names n finally gave in to desires or shud i say their love
Perfection both cant live without each othr but r denyin thei
Oh jesus give thm sum brain like me yr ssly
Unse zyaada akl to anjali me h 🤣
Finally givin in to their desires they went ahead in relation with pure honesty whether its abtthei cofusion commitment or anythin else but khush knws she is in love but arnie cnfused but she is handlin it maturely
Loved their journey
N tht raj part mane i loved j arnie n the khush understands him
But tht raj hw dare he do this to khush
Dhokhebaaz dagaabaaaz i fr sure will tk him to hell
Hw can he leak thei pvt moment
Arnie maturely handled it but hurted khush
N shash perfect pic of father plus businessman u did full justice with his char
I loved arnies confession
N thn omg its freakin damn freakin hawwwt over here
They need time to realize their feeling
N finally they did separation perfect way fr this
Entire stry ws beautiful journey of arshi i loved thed plot n thnks a loads n loads fr scrap or rlse moi cmplt stry dhundhti hi reh jaati lol
U r n awsum writer
Loved the way u make us visualise the emotions scenes everythin perfect stry
😉
Edited by -chocoangel- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -chocoangel-

Heya dear tysm fr the though i hv read it before but i couldnt read ur stry as on fanfic forum i rarely read incmplt stries
Ek hi baar me cmplt package chaahiye moiko u see 🤣

OK, I will keep in mind nd u will receive PM when things will be done...Is that what you refferring to
Now cmin to my cmn here it goes 😉
Ma talli soul ghoomin here n there landed on ur ff aiiiyyyooo its soo hot here
*sees title * jjjeeeksss title itslf is hot
Arnieee 😳 sooo romantic 😳
I love u arnie missin u alot 😭

Thnx for visiting and glad you liked this hotness😳
Ok cmes bck frm arniewrld 😭
Plot awsum arnie totally flat on khush frm first day itslf
Every scene every movement n emotion beautifully described
I cud imagine it clearly shotti
Khush indepentent talented n beautiful gal 😊
She is also affected by arnie in same way n ho v kyu na he is ma arnie afterall 😳
The dance aiyyyooo its freaking hot here moi sweatin every movement imaginable

😆 You are making me laugh here with your warming words...When they are not flat being so close to each other...
Ps . Moiko aur koi wrd nhi mila 🤣
N last scene arnie losin himslf 😳
Callin each othr by names n finally gave in to desires or shud i say their love
Perfection both cant live without each othr but r denyin thei
Oh jesus give thm sum brain like me yr ssly
Unse zyaada akl to anjali me h 🤣

😆...agreed though...hot headed and without common sense...

Finally givin in to their desires they went ahead in relation with pure honesty whether its abtthei cofusion commitment or anythin else but khush knws she is in love but arnie cnfused but she is handlin it maturely
Loved their journey

Maturity was always a piece of attraction i between ARSHI

N tht raj part mane i loved j arnie n the khush understands him
But tht raj hw dare he do this to khush
Dhokhebaaz dagaabaaaz i fr sure will tk him to hell
Hw can he leak thei pvt moment
Arnie maturely handled it but hurted khush

Arnav was true ASR in his mode while saving and protecting her


N shash perfect pic of father plus businessman u did full justice with his char
I loved arnies confession

He is truly an anchor for Khushi ...a loving and caring father.


N thn omg its freakin damn freakin hawwwt over here
They need time to realize their feeling
N finally they did separation perfect way fr this
Entire stry ws beautiful journey of arshi i loved thed plot n thnks a loads n loads fr scrap or rlse moi cmplt stry dhundhti hi reh jaati lol
U r n awsum writer
Loved the way u make us visualise the emotions scenes everythin perfect stry
😉



You are very welcome angel😊

Glad you enjoyed every bit of it .I am honored if you really visualize each moment...that was my attempt and many did reel the events while reading...I am really really thankful for that..

Thank You dear.❤️.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

Blue Clues people

Zoya, Roop and Aimer...I am busy ...will be here soon dear...just give me sometime


SORRY kaan pakad ke😳


No need to say sorry gal, We understand.🤗

Take your time, we will be here.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

Blue Clues people

Zoya, Roop and Aimer...I am busy ...will be here soon dear...just give me sometime


SORRY kaan pakad ke😳


We will wait.🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy

Res

Unres. Sorry for the late comment😳
👏
Mesmerising writing Faiqu, playing all the strings of the heart to perfection with a jodi par excellence. How minutely and finely you have weaved the little nuances in their journey of love and deep understanding of each other's soul. Shashi Singhania was a true guardian of his child, he applied balm on her fears. her well being was the uppermost in his mind and he had no doubt she would be the happiest with Arnav because he knew how much he craved for her. Inspite of the misunderstanding caused by Karan Mathur Khushi could not deny him or defy him. How remarkably with one sentence Arnav put Raj in his place, questioning him on the trueness of his feelings for Khushi. Inspite of his imperfections only Arnav deserved Khushi as he loved her to infinity. Ultimately, absence made the heart grow fonder, dismissing all confusions. Their oozing moments of romance and caring were a wondrous expression of their Inciting Desires in the colour of their oneness!


Thnx Ritu😊

The whole summar in that purple took my heart away...I loved it...🤗

I the pink...I am so happy if you felt that and mens a lot😊

Blue, yes I always admired Shashi as a father...he was a true guardian of this girl...knew her inside out...her true wall against all the storms and I always felt , he was the only one who gave Khushi blessings on her forced wedding night...he knew Arnav...besides all the odds and was happy for Khushi...tried to bring that here...

Thnx for being there always
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _CrazyFlames_


Woww...
Lovely update di...
Khushi's dad asked her about arnav 😊
Ohhh... So khushi is not the real daughter of Mr. Singhania...
Arnav in ASR mode...
Ohhh... Karan mathur... And i was lile is he related to aman...
Coz mostly it was aman mathur...
😆
Aweee... Khushi baby reached at wrong time...
And misinterpreted everything...
This raj gopal naa... 😡
Well khushi's dad was glad that arnav took charge of whole situation...
Not only that in his own way he tried to make khushi understand...
Hot kiss between arshi...
Glad finally they sort out their difference ...
Noo...again seperation...
But i guess it was needed...
To sort out all the differences and clear their mind...
Finally they united...
Waiting for next TS of urs...

P.S.: Hope u r fine di... Get well soon ❤️


Hey V😊

Hope exams are going well😊
😆 It seems to me u like Aman Mathur...ahem ahem...V😆
Her Dad is cool enough to let her child go for her love and they both did share their moments but separation made her realize how important he is for her...

P.S. Hope all is fine nd you'r exms are going well too...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aimer_vous

Awesome update!!!!👏

Loved it...⭐️
Beautiful ending of a BEAUTIFUL story.⭐️


Love the way you ended Raj without prolonging his character.
Proofs through Karan Mathur
feeling remorsed by Arnav's words


He lost a good friend in Khushi and an honest Rival in Arnav and got only shame and embarrassment.

Sizzling HOT moments in between ARHI😳



Thnx Aimer

Liked the underlined...means a lot der


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Wow..that was so amzng updt..
I loved it totally... Very well written...

I loved d way u described arnav's feelings and khushi's fear...
Everything in dis updt felt so really...

I loved how he thru her mobile to the wall..
How he kissed her and he was letting her know his desires...
Gggoowwwddd...
Also loved how she tuk her innocent revenge from him :
-P ;-)
Haha...

It was perfect ending for dis one..

Plz write another ff.. Eagerly waiting for it..

Get well soon.. Tc...




Hey gowtu😊

I am honored with that purple if u felt that...😊😳

Blue...yes he was burning ith nger and desire for her...he knew she misunderstood teh whole thing but he also knew how to tame her down...She was angry and hurt and he wanted her to cry and then she took her to the edge where she forgot all of her pain...but as a gentleman he let her decide...

FF ...will take some time as I have so much work...TS is coming soon

Thank you


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhu1210

beautiful update...

Arnav took a tough stand but did what he thought needed to correct the things..

Khushi's baba was awesome the way he supported her n understood Arnav...

Arnav finally came n clear all the mistake..

he respected her wish for 1 month separation but i guess it bring them more closer..

lovely ending

congratulation on completing the TS..

when are u coming up with A FF??



Hey Madhu🤗

Thank you for your loving words...

Her Baba is a true Shashi in character who always understood Arnav...He showed her a way to Arnav...Separation ,most of the time shows you a meaning towards understanding...and that is what khushi encountered with...

FF...not having time for that yet...but Next TS will be here soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SarunNArshi

Ohhh It was sooo INTENSE.

Awww how much hot it luks when Arnav and Khushi kiss with roughness.I love it wen Arnav does that.
I loved how he thru her mobil to the wall,how he kissed her and oh god he was letting her know his desires.
Also loved how she tuk her innocent revenge from him😆😆😆

And lastly they finally met.So dreamy.

Pls write another OS,TS,SS or FF sooon.
Eagerly waiting!!!!!!!!!!!👏


SaruNArshi😊

I am so happy seeing you thrilled ...and if you felt all sorts of emotions then I am honored and thrilled at the same time...

Their intense moments , either in each other's embrace and separation are always filled with incited desires...

I will be back soon 😛

Thnx

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