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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Interesting start
Hope now Rey will realize his love for Taani
Poor Taani,
Please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
update next part plzzz na plzzz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Wow
Awesome concept
Poor Taani :(
She's pregnant...hope Rey accepts her and the baby
Waiting for next part
Update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Amzing chpter
Beautifully written
Emotions perfectly depicted
Aww Taani is pregnant but is scared whether rey will accept or not
Rey love his wife but is so confuse
Hope he realize soon
Waiting for next part
Pls update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Nice story.
Rey and taani love each other. .but rey is confused. .. beautifully written. .
thanx for pm
continue soon. ..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
nice start
one nights passion her love his lust really????
shes pregnant
he finds pregnancy test but doesn't know what it is boy will he get a shock if someone else besides her tells him what it is lol
awe he was worried about her
has to be something more there
looking forward to u continuing
thanks for pm n plz keep em comin
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
This update is written by Priya Di..

Chapter Two



Rey was returning home after the whole day, he was bit tiered though

he didn't care about Taani, his so called wife, but something was

haunting him about her. He never cared but he knew she always

cared; this was something which was making him restless, and

whatever happened between them 2 days ago, which he had named as

body need or physical need, but somewhere his heart new it was not

just a need, it was something he was not being able to resist from days

back and that particular night with the effect of alcohol it happened.

How harsh he sounded the next morning but it truly says a person

does or speaks truth, acts according to his or heart when they are

under the effect of alcohol. But today from morning he was worried by

the last one year one thing he knew, she do feels something for him,

she gets effected badly with his action or with his words, but still she

holds a soft corner for him. She is not a person who goes out for

shopping or fun just like that, but today morning when she went out

suddenly she surely have a solid reason, and that what it is was

something making him worry about. Though sensibly he doesn't agree

but he do feels a little for her, and today he really felt bad , he missed

her, missed her a lot, he missed her presence, though she kept his

coffee and sandwich ready but it was nowhere near the felling when

she stands quietly beside him when he eats, his dress was ready but

she was not there to pass him, the small touch of her soft palm when

she hands over the dress, the time when he droves his car away

showing her his arrogance yet he can see from the rear view that she

is standing still his car becomes invisible, those small things which he

always disagree the same things he had missed a lot. The whole day he

couldn't properly concentrate on his work. He left a bit early, it was

not that he wanted to spend time with her but he really wanted to find

out what had happened he wanted to ensure about her health, last 2

days he had seen her a bit pale, he made his heart believe that it was

his duty to take care of her health as a human being, but was it really

so? Was nothing else emotion related and if it was so then what he did

in the morning knowing she was out for something important how can

he justify his that act?

He was confused with his own behaviour, his emotions and thoughts,

but one thing he knew deep down he wanted to go home and meet her

soon, enquire about her health so the Reyansh Singhania who always

goes home late in the evening today left home at lunch hour. He was

on his way back home.



On the other side Taani had a sour mood; she was tensed and worried

the news which makes a girl happy which make the girl's life filled

with love and care from relatives and in-laws specially which makes a

girl being treated by her husband specially almost like a delicate

princess the same news had made her tensed, worried and insecure.

She was not sure whether it will be even accepted by her husband or

not, and how much degree of his anger will be raise hearing the news.




Sharon knew something was wrong with her, she knows her friend well, she is not a person who will easily speak out personal problems, so she decided to give her time until she opens up herself, so to change her mood she took her out for a small shopping and eating much against her denial. And when just before they were returning back, Sharon saw a panipuri stall, she knows that Taani is a big time paani puri lover, she stopped the car and even Taani to agreed and when they were having their favourite Paani-puri someone tapped their shoulder they turned and soon they were pulled in a friendly hug by their long time college friend Shivam, who was waiting there for his girlfriend Sneha. Soon they were involved in chatting with him, laughing enquiring things about other friends, having panipuri, it was a real friendly atmosphere, Shivam was cracking jokes about old college friends and the 2 girls were laughing there heart out, after a real long time Taani was laughing whole heartedly, it truly says friends sometimes becomes a real medicine in a sour worried and frustrated mood, but do happiness last for a long time, Guess the answer is no, as it was the exact time Rey was crossing, he stopped his car far away spotting his wife and Sharon but then he saw her laughing whole heartedly, that too with a guy, when a bit of food was stuck in her cheeks, he saw him rubbing it, he didn't hear what he said doing that, he didn't knew he was making fun of her calling her 5 years kid who doesn't know to eat properly, it was just a friendly action, he only saw a guy rubbing her cheeks with his thumb, Rey saw this and was fuming in anger a type of jealousy like feeling he was not able to see it, the moment he realized he felt something for her that same moment his heart filled with disgust that she is laughing with a guy, that this was her important work which made her live the house early in the morning, maybe it was the reason she was looking pale and hurt because she was missing him, and that it is the only reason she never questioned his behaviour, because even she didn't want him to come near and love her touch her, and may be reason of her red puffy eyes from the last 2 days was that he had touched her virginity, he has taken it when she wanted to gift it to her this lover. Anger and hurt was all he could feel. He came back to his car, the FM played:



milne hai mujhse aayi
phir jane kyun tanhai,
kiss modd pe hai layi aashiqui ,



He was looking at Taani blankly,




ohh khud se hai ya khuda se
iss pal meri ladai kiss modd pai hai laye ashiquii,



The whole song played and sitting in the car from far ahead he was

watching her, laughing slapping Shivam's back, smiling, eating pani-

puri even she stuffed one forcefully to Shivam's mouth, by the time the

song ended, he was shattered and tears were flowing from his eyes, but

he was Reyansh Singhania , tears are not meant to flow from his eyes

soon his hurt converted to his anger. He speeded off his car, he was

driving at full speed, he broke the red light alert, traffic police chased

him he paid a high penalty, then roaming around in some wanted

destination the whole afternoon, with the evening he straight away

headed towards the bar. He drank and kept on drinking until he was

unconscious, he didn't even remember his name, all in his

unconscious state he could blabber was "Taani". He was not in a

stable condition he slept there the hotel manager knowing his status

shifted him to a room, in his unconscious state.




On the other hand Taani came home having a nice time with Sharon and her old friend, she meet Sneha, Shivam's girl friend, but as soon as she came home she was once again engulfed with depression, but what she saw couldn't even make her day better than this. She was almost flabbergasted with what she saw and instantly what her heart felt. When she entered the bed room on the bedside table was a flask containing coffee and was a chit beside it.




" 9800040000- my number, your coffee and food was good as usual,

let me know how was the coffee, my first try in kitchen"




Taani became happy, actually happy was a small word her heart was feeling some unknown pleasure and happiness which she has never felt before. He has made coffee for her, given her his phone no and asked her to call him. She couldn't even express how happy she was feeling, clutching her stomach she felt a ray of hope, May be now she can even proudly tell everyone that she is going to be a mother.



*****

So sorry for updating this story after so long.

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Edited by -AnyDestiny- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Nyc start
taani love rey aww
nd rey too feel bt confused hmm
hope he understand his feelng soon :-)
update nxt part soon nd pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
nice update
continue soon😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

I LOVE THIS STORY...
Its fabulas...
Please update as soon as possible

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