TaaRey FF : WAY OF LIFE [Index- Pg:1] Part 4 Updated - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
nice concept.
character sketch is also good.
waiting for next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Very interesting concept
It is soo fresh
Love the prologue
Cs is awesome
Loved how good friends they are
Specially loved the siblings
Waiting to read further

Please do update soon and pm me too

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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
nice..
Continue n do pm me..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
PART 1

On a phone convo

"I said leave her. Tum galat kar rahi ho. U have to pay for this." he shouted on his phone. Same time he messaged someone to trace the number.

"If u want her alive then I have to get that contract" said the person on the other side of the phone.

"In ur dreams Mr.Khanna" he said with determination. He got the reply of the msg mentioning the place.

In an old building a girl is sitting and crying surrounded by 5 goons.

"Plz leave me. Why do u take me here? I want to go. Mujhe chod do."the girl said.

One of the goon came and grabbed her hair " Sorry dear... u cnt go frm here so its better if u shut ur mouth.. warna mera asli chehra thujhe dekhna padega samji?." And he throwed her on the floor. She cried a lot and she became unconcious.

Back to phone convo

"Then forget about ur precious asset Mr.Reyaansh Singhania. Now leave your head free.. thinking how to save this innocent perl. Bcz u cant." Mr.Khanna said laughing.

Yes he is the handsome, the charming Reyaansh Singhania. But now he is the most angriest person. He rushed into his car while talking in his bluetooth and drove to the destination to save her life.

Rey : Ya right, u r right Mr.Khanna, I left that thought. He said with a smirk.

Khanna : What? Don't act smart. I know she is ur life and u wil definitely back off from the contract.

Rey : yeah... I left the thought of saving her but.., Now no one can save U from me. He said in his dangerous tone. He hurridly jumped out of the car and rushed inside the building.

Khanna : What do u mean?

Rey : Exactly what I said... Ur death is behind U.He cut the call.

Khanna was shocked like hell. His phone fell from his hand. Fear of death is clearly visible in his eyes he slowly turned back. He doesnot have any idea that how he reached here. He tried to hide his fear infront of him.

Khanna : t..tu...m..tum yaha? (he was shivering with fear inside)

Rey : U invited me... tum khud apne maut ko apne paas bulaaya. I feel sorry for u... he said with a smirk.

Khanna : (inside he was dying with fear but he hide his fear) tum mujhe kuch nahi kar sakta. Tumhari vo jaan mere paas hai..

This made Rey burn with anger.. He was not less than a hungry Lion...

By the time Khanna's goons came and stood behind her. By hearing the noises she was gaining her concious. She opened her eyes, she first saw a blur image of a man and slowly she got her vision clear. She saw him. She know that now no one can hurt her. But suddenly her eyes become fearful bcz one of the goon came to hit him...

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How's the update guys...

I know its too short...

Next update I will try to Write Big...

Edited by DTaaRey3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Nice update rey was genius and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Very nyc updt loved it
Loved rey's attitude
Updt soon n PM me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Nice update!
Rey is so good!!
Update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
THANKYOU NOTE...!

Hai Guys... Thank You So much for all who supported my new story also...
I cant believe that i got mare than 60 likes... For that all thanks to Soumya (Miss_Sparkles) who PMed my story...
Bcz her my story was read by many... So a very Special THANKS to Soumya(Miss_Sparkles)...
once again Thank You So Much Every one...
Edited by DTaaRey3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Nice start
Rey has made a heroic entry...
I think that girl is ishika...
Eager to read further
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
nyc update
but it was very short

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