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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#371

You've shown Khushi's fears so well here. The fear that's mingled with the guilt of being the cause of Arnav's injury. The fear that's mingled with the sense of deja vu. Images of her dying father intermingling with those of a bloodied Arnav in her mind. It's going to need a lot of "Kuch nahi hoga, Khushi. I'm here." by Arnav to calm her. I love the way he's so gentle with her. Drawing her out. Listening to her. Getting her bangles to see the smile on her face. Teasing her. Cuddling her. Enveloping her in care.

Sakshi and Ashok are such a wonderful inspiration for Arnav and Khushi. Firm, warm, clear sighted, loving, guiding without directing. Excellently written characters. Each conversation between them speaks of the respect and love they have for the other.

"They were Khushi and Arnav's roses" - a lovely way of showing their parent's concerns over their marriage being alleviated. It was almost like a passing on of the baton.

And now waiting to see how the two of them find a path to walk on together :)

Edited by Arshi67 - 10 years ago

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SIMI

@dieforasr

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#372

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#### I forgot that I made a res here...comment is just below...

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Maham Iqbal

@candyjan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#373

Awww simply awesome yar...

Very very well written...

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SIMI

@dieforasr

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#374

Their bond is something different...out of the world... Love the way Khushi is taking care of Arnav, her world, her breath, her sanity...her power. And history is repeating itself. The way Arnav was bossy on Khushi...this time Khushi is doing the same.

PS: Is there any chance of Khushi getting pregnant?😳😆 Actually 'Yeh dil mange more'...that too fast...

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bhavis

@bhavis

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#375

Oh so the circle of life is complete now with Khushi taking care of Arnav. Her insecurities of losing loved ones is too deep and I loved Arnav here who is not making her freak out. Its time like this when the bond increases in leaps and bound. Arnav gifting bangles

I so loved the parents here. They are truly a good soul and the best parents any one can think about. She knows about Khushi not taking care just looking at her👏 and her advise to Khushi was just 😃

I truly am in awe with these two characters of yours - Mom and Dad. They are in true sense a mom and dad to their children.

So still the nagging question -Will they be in INdia or will they relocate to Britian is still lingering.

Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago

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anukap

@anukap

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#376

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lovely tender moments between khushi and arnav, skashi and khushi. you are the master of emotions, more power to you choti. so sad that the story is coming to an end. but still two chapters to go...and of course a prayer and a wish that another blockbuster is on its way soon. love and hugs.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#377

Oh chotiji, that was awesome - loving the way these two are warming up against each other - ashok and sakshi are too good - very difficult to find such characters in real life
Lovely update

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#378

beautiful update..brilliantly written...👏

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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#379

Nice update. Looking forward to know whether khushi decides to leave for London or arnav decides to settle in india

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sweety421

@sweety421

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#380

Very beautiful update dear...
Khushi is terrified. ...but I loved the way Arnav and her family is making her come out of that guilt... sakshi is amazing mother...
Very beautifully written...Waiting to read more...