Arshi ~ Best Laid Plans ~ (THREAD 2) - Page 65

Loved the update as usual!

Loved a jealous arnav
Archer Calhill has been given a good intro - seems to be an interesting character - will wait to know more
The more I read about ARHI, more is the need to know their past.
U always keep the thrill alive dear
Superb going - the flow is perfect
Loved La's entry - good to see a spark of jealousy in khushi

Will wait to know more - keep going - great job

Nice update, the story is getting more interesting waiting to read more. Thanks for the pm

Oh master raconteur, I bow to thee. You never cease to surprise me in every story you write. I keep trying to guess but can never truly predict the twists in your story. And you have the propensity of making readers ( ok, that's an exaggeration. It might be just me) fully support one character with your plot in chapter and then make us turn against them with a twist in the very next. I am still trying to get my head around the personalities and dynamics in this story. Looking forward to more soon :)

Wow.. Sooperb update... Arnav is so irked with khushi's "sweetheart" friend..:-P.. Hmm and i'm guessing archie is gay..[if he is straight also no problem.. Coz i liked Rishab in Mkm-2.. I know u'll do complete justice to khushi-archie equation.:-). I trust u anamika.].. Arnav.. The way he weighed gain n loss "of being in relationship with khushi"[very calculative hun].. He tried 2 stay away but He couldn't do much about "dil ka maamla".. N hehe when khushi tried 2 congratulate arnav "bhaiya" n Lavanya "bhabhi".. Haha thankgod aman came in right time.. Loved the entire chapter dear.. Now waiting for next update eagerly.. N for "firangi Sweetheat Return"..:-P..

So happy for the update as it came after my exams are over. :-D And thank you so much for sending pm. :-D
Update was awesome and I love your story banner. :-)

Nice display of Arnav's possessiveNess. I am just wondering whether they share something between them in last 10 years or passion is more from Arnav's side. Waiting to unfold the story further. Thanks.

Mindblowing update!!!

hi,
i didn't know you had started this story and hv already reached ch 3. was away from IF for along time. Read all the 3 chapters in one go.

you know in ch 1.. when she is giving aman the gift she has got and then she gets this fone call ans she starts hey sweetheart, at that pt i thot she was talking to Arnav and may they are already in love but because of Akash keeping in under the wraps, but all that got dashed in this chapter. Archer carnhill... i hope those pics that rizwan showed arnav from Fb are all photoshopped ones... :-)


Coming to the story, i feel the pace is fast, suits it well, may be beacuse there is past which is yet to be revealed and may be it will be more clear. Can we have Khushi's POV at this juncture or it a but early for that, may be you are planning for one after the past incident is revealed, dunno just guessing out here.

Thanks for this story and waiting for the next part

Rgds

Usha

so arnav is in love with khushi and khushi is in relationship with archie. But maybe there is nothing between archie and khushi. But this will be very interesting when archie comes to india. looking forward to the next update