**Thrill Ride** 'Full Circle-END!!' pg 71 - Page 33

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plz update soon its been like forever since u updated any of ur ff's we're all dying to read more!!!
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prakkiii kahan ho cont soon re!
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hey when r u like postin the next part man???
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"Aww your so sweet Joshuuu", Alliyah cooed. I turned my head to look at the back of the boat and shook my head. Alliyah and Josh were the perfect couple; in love, fun, happy, and totally together. Charming? Sure. Sickening? Definitely. When I turned back, Rhonda caught my eye and smirked. We both shook our heads together. I had learned that even though Rhonda and Cole were in love, they weren't much for PDA*.

But still a cute couple, I thought, watching as Cole put his arm around Rhonda on the bench they were sitting on.

"Smells good doesn't it?" Angad asked, breaking into my thoughts.

"Hm? What does?" I asked, puzzled.

"The air. It's so clean and natural. Near the park it's always filled with smells of the food and smoke."

"True." I replied, looking up. He had on a Haiwian shirt, with the buttons open, exposing his six-pack. He worked the ship's controls like a pro.

Dam*it! I have gotta stop thinking about him. Seriously.

After meeting everyone at Angad's and Cole's summer house, Alliyah, Rhonda and I had packed the food, while the boys had done everything else. As soon as they were on the boat, Alliyah and Josh had claimed the back bench, while Rhonda and Cole had claimed the middle bench. As usual, Angad and I were left, and we got the front bench, and Angad got the job of manning the boat.

"K guys, we're here!" Angad said. Everyone clapped and jumped up. There was a stretch of white land, with rocks and a lighthouse- it looked like a cozy, little island. I immediately loved it.

*******

"Sweet place isn't it?" Angad asked me. I nodded and took a bite of the spicy buffalo wing. We were all sitting in a circle, around the fire. Angad's knee was touching mine, making me tingle. But the tingling sensation, which was once foreign and thrilling, was now comfortable and normal- yet, it was still thrilling. I suspected it would always be thrilling, no matter how long I knew Angad. I had observed over the last week, that Angad and I were always touching in some way or the other; if we were walking, we were holding hands, or he held my shoulder- if we were eating or sitting, he was always playing with my foot. When we were at parties, he was always playing with my hair- the list was never ending. Truthfully, I didn't mind; infact, I hated to admit it, but I actually liked it- a lot.

We all sat there, eating, talking, and making s'mores for a long time. Everyone laughed and everyone enjoyed. It was a wonderful time. =)

All of a sudden, Alliyah jumped up.

"Lets swim!" she exclaimed. She whipped off her shorts and tank, revealing her white bikini, and ran into the water, followed by Josh, who was wearing his trunks. Rhonda and Cole looked at each other, and shrugged their shoulder. Rhonda stripped off her clothes too, revealing a very cool looking vintage one-piece.

"Wanna go?" Angad asked, looking at me.

"Sure" I said; I already had my costume on too.

"Sweet." He grinned. He whipped of his shirt, revealing his taut muscles. Intimidated, I waited a few minutes before taking off my shirt and shorts. I had on a classic black bikini.

"Woo hoo Kripa" he winked. I blushed and smacked his arm. He grabbed it and we ran through the sand, and into the water.

Splash! Boy, was it cold! He waded ahead of me, and then turned around.

"Come on, Kripa!"

"Im coming." I replied. I took a step towards him, and felt a sharp pain in my foot. "OUCH!" I shrieked. I lost my balance, and fell into the water.

Strong arms came around me, dragging me out of the water. I opened my eyes after I was on the sand. They were all crowding around me.

"What happened?" Alliyah asked.

"I don't k-k-know" I stammered, "I was just walking and then I felt a sharp pain in my foot…."

Angad held my foot up. "You got cut- badly." I could see a lot of blood.

"By what?" Alliyah asked.

He examined. "Cant really tell…it could be anything."

"We should get her to the hospital, it could be infected." Cole said.

"No! Im fine. Really." I said.

"Now's not the time to act brave Kripa," Angad scolded. Woahh. He was scary when he was mad. I shut up.

"Ill take the boat out, and then ill send Phil to take it back. Alright?" Angad said to them. Everyone nodded. He turned to me. "Let's go."

I nodded and was about to get up, but he picked me up. I didn't object.

******

"See! I told you!" I said, three hours later. We had gone to the ER, and waited there for an hour. Finally the doctor had put some ointment on it, gave me some meds, and said it wasn't infected but I wasn't supposed to walk on my foot. For safety precautions I had to wear a cast. Ew.

"You're still wearing a cast!" he retorted smiling. His mood was finally better, after the doctor assured him that I was fine. We were now sitting in his car, outside of my dorm.

He got out of his side, and came to mine. I expected him to help me down. Apparently, he had other ideas. He once again, carried me out of the car. This time, I did object.

"ANGADDDD!!!" I shrieked.

He laughed.

"Yes?"

"PUT ME DOWN!"

"Nope."

He walked, holding me. By now it was dark out. He cracked a joke, and I laughed. The meds were taking affect now, making me giddy. He twirled around, making my head spin. We both started laughing.

"Kripa?"

We both froze. Only one person could say my name tartly and full of authority. Apparently Angad heard it too, because he whipped around. Standing there, in all her glory was my dear sister, and the reason I left Texas- Mishti Sharma.

Uh-oh.

That's the part. Pretty long, cuz I haven't cont. forever! Tomorrow is my GEPA so im being really bad by doing this! =) lol. COMMENTS! Yes I know that I haven't cont. in forever. But I need comments to show me that people are still reading this- if at least 10 people don't comment, im not continuing; why should I write if people don't read? Will cont. 7 Guys… after thurs (last day of GEPA). && im gonna end this one soon, too. Thank you those who still don't hate me for not continuing. Im sorry for not continuing in forever. (For the reasons, plz look at 7 Guys…). Grazie, ciao <3

Prakriti

Edited by prakriti - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww i m still reading... it was a great part! loved the way he just picked her up.. hope u do well..

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Posted: 18 years ago
i lovedddddddd it!!!! cant wait til ur test is over, good luck by the way!! continue soon plzzzzz!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome..good luck dear..cont soon.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow verry nice hey dear can you pleae update your dry tears ff please
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks yaar for continuing! good luck for ur GPEA. awesome part. wonder what Misthi has got to say hm.. conitnue when u can
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Posted: 18 years ago
its kewl.. but u ve not continued for a long long time...

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