#2: The Alternate Universe- Retelling IPKKND (Thread 2 Complete)

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#771

oh finally some glimpse into the past... did they sleep together in there drunken state and hence arnav does not remember... he thought it was la??

oh cant wait to read more

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adyaa

@adyaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#772

RES
I AM SO LATE
HAWWWE 😲

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#773

Res.

Omg it really happened.

I got to really read this in peace to comment.

Edited by renee.bee - 10 years ago

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#774

Originally posted by: mojgan
Just one more thing. While I was reding this sentence :" realizing that the few moments of darkness had changed something between them." I thought about the first encounter between both of them. It had to be dark then and that darkness had changed something between them as this new one.

I am pretty sure or maybe I want to imagine that Arnav was not sober that first time in Lucknow. He hurt her. He damaged the new born feelings of her. He wasn't even aware of it though. I am talking nonsense I know but I don't know why I like to look at this teaser from a semantic point of view. I am trying to draw the lines between Now and Then, to compare the past and the present. :-)

PS. No PS :-)

PS. I remember something to add. I loved the Dupatta scene, her dupatta being held by him. That was very romantic and lovely:-)

Mojgan cherie...when have you been wrong...! I am so surprised by your line of thinking...yes yes and yes!

You are right...the basic idea was to draw the parallel between the two moments and am so touched and amazed...at your thoughts...we think so much alike!

PS- And I have always loved the semiotics behind everything and I like exploring it as well...I did it when I watched 'two women' as part of my college curriculum! (waise, am smiling wide right now 😃

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898361

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#775

awesome yaar
luvd this one

n there wer many sweet moments in it luvd it this time

waiting for the next update
keep it up

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#776

Nice update

I hope Arnav remembers all things soon

La knws Khushi thats something new

Lets c what will happen when they meet

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256748

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#777

Awesome update

Can't wait for next update.

When will Arnav finds the truth out ?

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KeerthiRajkumar

@KeerthiRajkumar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#778

nice update
loved it

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#779

I love the prespective of both... Their feelings, the coziness btwn two, i just love it :) thanks for pm

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enlightenme

@enlightenme

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#780

Not fair you didn't confirm who is Nikhil's biological father nor did you write about the happenings of the day when Khushi encountered Arnav for the first time. It was very different from whatever Arnav and Khushi shared in the elevator. But after reading the past in bits I can guess Khushi's drink was spiked and it's possible that she doesn't know the complete truth. Her version of the night can be far from what happened with her for better or worse that I don't know. When will Arnav remember the Khushi from Lucknow? Why does Shyam want the custody of Khushi's son when he is completely aware that Nikhil is not his biological son?Was the spiked drink meant for Khushi or was it her shear bad luck?Where does Lavanya fit into the whole thing? So many questions, no answers.

Looking forward to the next update. Hope u will update before this week ends.