#2: The Alternate Universe- Retelling IPKKND (Thread 2 Complete) - Page 73

hmmm interesting update n teaser

one major thing struck me Aarav isn't Shyams son plz plz plz let it be that Arnavs the father maybe they have a one night stand in past that he doesn't remember ???didn't khushi say something about they met b4 for business??

I still think Shyam is obsessed with khushi that's why he married her even though she was pregnant

well they finally had dinner

but ohhh fooo neither made connection with the kids theyre both still clueless to how Arnavs niece n khushis son r best friends

looks like the sparks r starting to effect khushi too now

as for teaser looks like the lift got stuck n they got close maybe khushi was frightened

same time Arnavs trying to convince her to divorce Shyam

what did he mean by he didn't mean to hurt her???? by saying what he did or his past acions???

cant wait for u to continue so mystery can be solved

thanks for pm plz keep em comin my way

Originally posted by: Nilpori

so may be in the moment of weakness Khushi shared the fear with arnav that if she gets a divorce shyam will take away her son and arnav will assure her...
but my gutter mind thinking what will arnav do with her in the dark lift and why is he so hell bent on getting khushi a divorce..😉

Originally posted by: Mushfika

Okay. Here I am again.😎

What a brilliant concept you have brought in through this FF... Showing a single mother's journey, her hardships to put up with his son's wishes and needs and with the Arnav singh raizadaacting like 'super glue' with khushi and not sparing her a moment and hell bent on figuring out where they met, and then figuring out about khushi being married and that pending divorce case followed by a furious, restless Arnav barking at anything and everything, but still not cancelling that date which khushi very smartly tried to put an end to *smiles evilly, sends flying kisses to arnav for sticking to the date* .. GOSH i'm SO LOVING THIS! And now this teaser has absolutely blown me away...

as soon as I read the starting my eyes widened , "He wrapped his arms around her and pulled her close, then buried his face against her neck.." and my the time I was done reading the teaser my eyes were already as big as saucers , my heart beating 394941438973487 times per second and my mouth was hung open(ok i sound like khushi having all those weird feelings while falling in love with arnav😳)... MY OH MY... please save me from this... absolutely in love with this FF... PLEASE shalini, update as soon as possible... I read all the 10 chaps in one go after finishing with the 3 chaps of your other ff 'white rainbow', not to mention, my whole schedule is ruined due to this... yeah that was how much these this FF has got me... you write so well!! and surprisingly, The arnav you have portrayed in your FF is just the way I want him to b in any ff ... and obviously, the story is of my type, that's why I spent 3 hours reading the chapters...

Personally, I usually don't like to read FFs with khushi being a mother already and its progression. I feel like the spice between the couple lessens and so avoid reading any such FF... but Kuddos to you for your brilliant way of writing this story...

Okay enough of my blabbering.. LOL ... that was a pretty small comment I just wrote eh?😆sorry... couldn't stop myself ... happy reading😳well by now you have already read the comment so 'happy reading' doesn't go... it should be: Hope you didn't fall asleep while reading my comment

Please add me to your buddy list and send me PM whenever you update either of your FFs... will be eagerly waiting to read the next chapter...

Thank you!🤗

-Mushfika

PS: Oh sorry.. I thought I was done... but... uhh..I don't know how to say this... err.. like... how.. I mean why on EARTH do you have that picture of shyam in your banner?🤣is he crying out loud? wincing in pain? whining? asking for a barbie doll? or what?🤔

Originally posted by: Mushfika

Okay. Here I am again. 😎

What a brilliant concept you have brought in through this FF... Showing a single mother's journey, her hardships to put up with his son's wishes and needs and with the Arnav singh raizada acting like 'super glue' with khushi and not sparing her a moment and hell bent on figuring out where they met, and then figuring out about khushi being married and that pending divorce case followed by a furious, restless Arnav barking at anything and everything, but still not cancelling that date which khushi very smartly tried to put an end to *smiles evilly, sends flying kisses to arnav for sticking to the date* .. GOSH i'm SO LOVING THIS! And now this teaser has absolutely blown me away...

as soon as I read the starting my eyes widened , "He wrapped his arms around her and pulled her close, then buried his face against her neck.." and my the time I was done reading the teaser my eyes were already as big as saucers , my heart beating 394941438973487 times per second and my mouth was hung open (ok i sound like khushi having all those weird feelings while falling in love with arnav😳 ) ... MY OH MY... please save me from this... absolutely in love with this FF... PLEASE shalini, update as soon as possible... I read all the 10 chaps in one go after finishing with the 3 chaps of your other ff 'white rainbow', not to mention, my whole schedule is ruined due to this... yeah that was how much these this FF has got me... you write so well!! and surprisingly, The arnav you have portrayed in your FF is just the way I want him to b in any ff ... and obviously, the story is of my type, that's why I spent 3 hours reading the chapters...

Personally, I usually don't like to read FFs with khushi being a mother already and its progression. I feel like the spice between the couple lessens and so avoid reading any such FF... but Kuddos to you for your brilliant way of writing this story...

Okay enough of my blabbering.. LOL ... that was a pretty small comment I just wrote eh? 😆sorry... couldn't stop myself ... happy reading 😳well by now you have already read the comment so 'happy reading' doesn't go... it should be: Hope you didn't fall asleep while reading my comment

Please add me to your buddy list and send me PM whenever you update either of your FFs... will be eagerly waiting to read the next chapter...

Thank you! 🤗

-Mushfika

PS: Oh sorry.. I thought I was done... but... uhh..I don't know how to say this... err.. like... how.. I mean why on EARTH do you have that picture of shyam in your banner?🤣 is he crying out loud? wincing in pain? whining? asking for a barbie doll? or what? 🤔