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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: parshlover
Awesome update👏👏

Thanks

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: shivika838
I loved it😃
ohho rd scared sanyukta!!
diary??
Eagerly waiting😛
lovely work👏

Thank you

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: gargpurvi85
Hey.. Not fair..😭
Ittu sa update??😕
Hope that next update is longer..
Do update next part soon.. m excited..

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

~Chapter 15~

after reading the diary... randhir calls sanyukta.. bt because of dat elivator wala incident sanyukta decided to not to recicve call...he calls 7-8 times.. bt still no responser andhir sends her a msg.. please tolk to me once sanyukta... sanyukta calls him

s- hello

r- hello... mera phone Kyun nhi utha rhi thi??

s- call Kyun ki h tumne

R- pehle ye batao k meri call Kyun nhi recive ki

s- pta nhi chla mje tumhare calls ka.. study kr rhi thi

r- han wo to pata hi chal raha h calls ka tumhein pta nhi chla aur msg ka pata chal gya

s- randhir koi kam tha tumhein??

r- haan wo sahmne wale park mein aao

s- Kyun

r- har bat p sawal poochna zruri h?? tum aao bas

s- randhir i cant come.. itni raat ko

r- sanyukta u have to come otherwise...

s- otherwise wat randhir?? blackmail kr rhe ho mje??

r- sanyukta tum aao bas

s- mein nhi aane wali tumhein jo karna h kro..

sanyukta can easily see the park from her window.. she was looking at randhir... randhir's anger was on highest level

R- dammit u r coming or not??

s- jo karna h krlo mein nhi ane wali...randhir angrily disconnects
call

The time was 11 p.m...sanyukta tried to sleep but she was just unable to sleep due to two reasons,first she slept alot in evening And second she was thinking about randhir..

s(in mind)- itne gusse mein gya h... kuch ulta sidha na karle.. god ab mein kya krun.. use call krun?? par raat k 2 bje?? kya ye shi tym h?? par call to karni hi pdegi na warna neend nhi ayegi...

sanyukta dails randhir's no... but it was switched off... she was tensed... she thought to call parth or jiggy but she decided not to wake them in middle of night...after 40-45 min she gets call from randhir' s no..

s- hello randhir kaha the tum... itne time se tumhare phone try kr rhi hoon

person- dekhiye hum city hospital se bol rhe h.. apne jise call kia h... wo buri tarah se zakhmi halat mein hospital laya gaya h.. ap ajayie

sanyukta went to the hospital... in hospital she asks the receptionist about randhir.. then
she tells dat he is in operation theater..she runs very fastly and reached near the operation theater... she saw doc coming out of operation theater...

s- doc.. hws randhir??

doc- ap???

s- mein uski friend

doc- dekhiye m sory par apke friend ko hospital lane mein deri hogyi... hum use nhi bacha paye... u can now take his body to home... we are sorry
sanyukta was totally broken after hearing this.. but somehow she managed to ask

S- doc kya hua tha randhir ko???

D- actually apke friend ko ye lkar aye the hospital mein(Doc said refering to a boy standing at a little distance)

D(to person)- ye hai us patient ki friend jinhein ap lekar aye the

Sanyukta was confused to see that person because she doesn't know him... he was a guy which was about 1 or 2 yr elder from her...

Person- m Raghav... wo meri car kharab hogyi thi aur mein jab bahar aya to dekha k randhir ji behosh pade huye the,2 bje k as pas ki bat h,to mein unhein hospital le aaya,apko call ki phir bcoz last dailed no apka hi tha... else u know

D- actually ye patient k brain mein kuch problem hogyi thi... kuch depression mein the wo... may be iski wajah se heart mein kuch problm hogyi aur heart ne pump karna band kardia aur 3-4 hrs wo unconcious pde rhe jiski vajah se ye sab hua.. so hum unhein nhi bacha paye

sanyukta's eyes were moist now..

S- doc can i go inside.

D- yea sure

Raghav- ap chaliye mein formalities complete krdeta hoon sari

S- no its ok.u may leave now. Thank u for ur help

Raghav- nhi ap jayie apne friend k pas mein ata hoon thodi der mein

sanyukta went inside the room.. randhir's body was covered with white cloth
She sat near him and ,she started to cry and then started speaking-Maine tumhein kaha tha na k mujhse door raho phir Kyun itna pyar karte the mujhse itni koshish ki k tum mujhse hate kro par phir bhi tum mujhe chahte the... mujhe pata h na k jo insan meri lyf mein ata h wo is dunia se boht door chla jata h.. phle maa,phir kannu aur ab
tum... randhir i cant live without u.. mujhe tumhare bina ab kuch acha nhi lgega ... please wapis ajao mere joker.. i knw its not possible now... but i need u bcoz tum hi ek aise insan ho jo mujhe samajhte ho,mujhe ache se jante ho,sabse badi baat mujhe tolerate kar sakte ho... randhir u r the best... i need u because i love u please come back na ( then she started crying loudly)
But randhir was laying on hospital bed lifeless. As when anyone's soul leaves his/her body,that person can never come back ... Not even if someone cries for him/her or even anyone will die for the oerson

Dil jude bina hi tut gye
haath mile bina hi chut gye
ki likhe ne lek kismat ne
Bar bar ron akhian tainu jo na dekh sakian
Ki likhe ne lekh kismat ne

So this was it ...
now time for commemts
I hope it was long enough to get longer comments

Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago

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Zoya

@sandhir_rd

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Posted: 10 years ago

#475

omg what was that. rd is dead or what?? I know its a prank by rd. waise it was an awesome update. rd was hell bent to make sanyu confessed her feelings but d path he has chosen I don't think its a good. let it b waiting for next update. do update soon