~SAATHIYA~..A SANDHIR FF - Page 69

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shivika838

Part 81 was so romantic ..loved it😳

penned beautifully 👏
Awww sandhir bck to romance 😉

But part 82 ..Ohhh god !! Fight over renuka sanyal 😲
Hope it sorts out soon yaar ,can't see then like dis !!
Amazingly described 👏
N update soony plzzz !!!😛


ohh...thanks shivi...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi

awesome update dear.

it was yet another cracking update.



d way u hv written this story i must say d charm of this story ll never end.



dis ff has completed 82 parts but still its looks fresh. n we always eager to know what store for us on ur next update.


amazing marvelous n mindblowing piece of writting dear.



i just cant able comment here on ur every update but never miss a single update.


coz this ff is my favorite ff of this forum. n u r one of d best writer of this forum i hv ever witnessed.


do update soon.

n i didnt get d pm of ur last update.

nevertheless do pm me from next time.





thanks a lot...😳

yeah...aare i forget to pm part 82 to everyone...😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry guys...i didnt pm part 82...i forgot...😆
i'll pm part 83 ...
next part coming up...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsme update
Loved it


Rd and his anger
Gusse me kuch nhi dikhata


Heart to heart cnnction
Sanyu sensed that sum thing is troubling rd


Sandhir fighting on renuka

Cnt see them like this


Sanyu is right bt rd is also right



Precap sanyu going against rd means more problem



Wtng for next
Update asap


Love u
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 83
SANYU-randhir...suno meri baat...
(randhir turned...)

RANDHIR-not again sanyukta please...i m getting late...

SANYU-randhir...what did you say...

RANDHIR-dekho...

SANYU-tum aabhi aaisa sochte ho randhir...

RANDHIR-sanyu...i m sorry...maine galati se bol diya...i really didnt mean it...

SANYU-main unse ek din mili thi...woh bhi bohot pehle...award function main...

RANDHIR-ok...fine...

SANYU-uske baad main unse baat bhi nahi ki...muje laga ki jaise meri maa ko yeh batayi...toh unhe bhi batani chaiye...tumhe pata woh kitni khush hogayi...unke aakho main aasu aagaye...tumhe...hume inta khush dekhar...she loves you randhir...bohot pyaar karti hai woh tumse...

RANDHIR-sanyukta...i m getting late...see you in evening...
(he left for office...)

(after some time...sanyukta called renuka)

SANYU-hello mom...kaise ho aap...

RENUKA-sanyukta...my child...i m fine...how you beta??

SANYU-mom i m fine...hume pata chala...about ...i mean aapke baare main...

RENUKA-randhir...he is ok...

SANYU-yes mom...randhir thik hai...par aap hume bata toh sakti thi na...

RENUKA-beta kaise randhir...tum janti ho na woh kaise react karta...usse lagta ki ...i m expecting help from him...


SANYU-mom...aaisa kuch nahi...aap hume bata sakti thi na...dont worry mom...hume aapke saath hai...

RENUKA-no beta...please...main nahi chahti ki meri wajah se tum dono main koi problem ho...i'll see to it beta dont worry...

SANYU-mom ...aaisa kuch nahi hoga...maine randhir se baat ki hai...hum aapki help karenge...

RENUKA-no beta please...tum randhir ke gusse ko janti ho...aur mere liye randhir se baat karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai...i dont want ki tum dono meri wajah se...its better if you both stay away from this matter beta...thanks for the concern...

SANYU-mom please...aaisa mat kahiiye...ha randhir ne thoda gussa kiya...but main usse manalungi...hum aapki help karenge...aagar randhir nahi mana ..toh main aapki help karungi...

RENUKA-no beta...please...randhir ke against mat jaana...and no need to convince him...muje nahi chaiye ki meri wajah se tum dono main ladhai ho...i want your happiness beta...aur aab tumhe aapna khayal rakhna hai...beta tum insab se dur raho...you should stay happy beta...dont get involve in this...

SANYU-mom...aapka beta mera bohot aachese khayal rakhta hai...randhir takes very good care of mine...but mom...aap tension mat lejiye...hum aapki help karenge...

RENUKA-beta main nahi chahti ki...mere wajah kuch problem ho tum dono main...main aache janti hu randhir yeh baat nahi manega...i dont want history to repeat...

SANYU-mom aaisa kuch hoga...

RENUKA-bohot mushkil se mere bete ko khushiya mili hai...tumhari wajah se...main nahi chahti ke..jo humare saath hua...woh tum dono ke saath bhi...

SANYU-mom relax...aaisa kuch nahi hoga trust me...hum dono aapki help karenge...main randhir ko samajaungi...thik hai...

RENUKA-ok...but please dont force him...

SANYU-yes mom...you take care ...bye...

RENUKA-you too take care beta..bye...

(convo ended...)

SANYU-randhir ko aachese shanti se samajaungi...woh meri baat zarur manega...

(in afternoon sanyukta called him...)

RANDHIR-hmm...bolo...

SANYU-kya kar rahe ho...

RANDHIR-kuch nahi bas aab thodi der baad lunch karne jaunga...tum kya kar rahi ho...tumne khana khaya...and medicines...

SANYU-ha maine khana kha liya...aur medicines bhi le li...

RANDHIR-good...

SANYU-upset ho...

RANDHIR-nahi toh...

SANYU-ok...ghar vapas kab aaoge...

RANDHIR-time se aajaunga...dont worry...

SANYU-ok...i'll be waiting...

RANDHIR-mere babies kya kar rahe...tang toh nahi kar rahe na tumhe...

SANYU-nahi...bas ..tumhe miss kar rahe hai...

RANDHIR-main bhi miss kar raha unhe...aacha sanyu..main phone rakhta hu...i have some work...baad main baat karte hai...

SANYU-ok...bye...love you...take care...jaldi ghar aana...

RANDHIR-bye i love you...take care...

(convo ended...)

SANYU-finally...randhir ka mood thik hai...shaam ko baat karti hu randhir se...i know woh meri baat zarur manega...

(evening crept in...it was 7.30 when randhir came back...)

(he entered inside and threw himself on sofa...and getting rid of his tie...)

SANYU-randhir...
(she said settling beside him...)

SANYU-kya hua...bohot thak gaye ho?

RANDHIR-hmm...i m very tired...bohot kaam tha aaj...

SANYU-ohh...
(he rested his head on her lap...while she lovingly caressing his hair...and he closed his eyes...)

SANYU(im)-aaj nahi karti baat randhir se...dekho toh...kitna thak gaya hai...he needs rest...nahi aaj nahi baat kar sakti...kal dekhte hai...

RANDHIR-tum thik ho...
(he asked looking at her and caress her cheek with his palm...)

SANYU-ha...main thik hu...

RANDHIR-sorry...subah maine kuch zyada hi bol diya...muje aaisa nahi kehna chaiye tha..but you know...main gusse main...i sorry...muje tumhe hurt nahi karna tha...

SANYU-its ok randhir...main samajti hu...its ok...

RANDHIR-i love you...

SANYU-i love you too...

RANDHIR-muje bhook lagi hai...

SANYU-i know...tumhara favorite dish banayi hai...jao jaldi se fresh hoke aao...phir saath main khana khate hai...

RANDHIR-ok...
(saying this he got up ..kissed her left cheek...and went towards there room...)

(meanwhile sanyukta arranged dinning table for them...)

SANYU-randhir...chalo...dinner is ready...

RANDHIR-has bas aaya...

SANYU-ok...

(they had there dinner with some causal talks ...)
(after some time...randhir was standing in balcony...while sanyukta came from behind and hug him...)

RANDHIR-sanyu...kya hua...

SANYU-kuch nahi...yaha kyu khade ho...

RANDHIR-bas aaise hi...

SANYU-chalo na andar...

RANDHIR-ha chalo...
(he turned ...and lifted her and headed towards there bedroom...)

(he properly placed her on bed...and settled beside her...)

SANYU-randhir...office main sab kaise hai...??

RANDHIR-sab thik hai...kyu...

SANYU-nahi bas ...office ko miss kar rahi thi...bohot dino se office nahi aayi na...isiliye...

RANDHIR-hmmm...tumhara cabin bhi tumhe bohot miss kar raha hai...

SANYU-aur tum...

RANDHIR-main toh har pal tumhe miss karta hu...
(he kissed her forehead...)

RANDHIR-aacha sanyu...chalo aab sojate hai...muje bohot neend aarahi hai...

SANYU-hmmm...

RANDHIR-good night baacha...
(he kissed her forehead once again and settled beside her...kept his palm on her baby bump and called it a night...)

(next morning...finally no office today...it was sunday...)

(sanyu got up...quickly got ready...)
(randhir too got up...)

RANDHIR-itne jaldi uth gayi tum aaj...

SANYU-randhir...10.30 baaj gaye subah ke...utho aab...

RANDHIR-hmmm...muje aur sona hai...

SANYU-no...utho toh...itne der tak nahi sote...

RANDHIR-yaar..kya tum bhi sanyu...
(he said getting up and rubbing his eyes like a cute small baby...)

SANYU-aaw...mela baby...neend main chal raha hai...
(sanyukta giggled looking at her cute innocent husband...his puffy eyes...his ruffled hair...his red nose...)

RANDHIR-what...baby...???

SANYU-ha dekho na tum bilkul chote baby ki tarah lag rahe ho...

RANDHIR-phir cute...

SANYU-yes...my cutiee pie...
(he pulled his cheeks...)

SANYU-dekho babies...tumhare papa bohot cute hai...

RANDHIR-aare unhe aane toh do...woh bolenge...papa cute nahi...hot hai...handsome hai...

SANYU-no you cute...

RANDHIR-i m helpless...i m sorry...kitne baar prove kar chuka hu...phir bhi tumhe...

SANYU-aawww...cutiee pie ko bura laga...

RANDHIR-ha...
(he pouted...)
(and she kissed his pout...)

SANYU-jao...go and get fresh...
(saying this she left...)
(they day went like this...loving...teasing ...cuddling each other...)
(it was six in evening when sanyukta finally decided to talk with randhir ...)

SANYU(im)-aabhi randhir ka mood aacha hai...aabhi baat karti hu usse...bhagwanji please...randhir ko shant rakhna...aur meri help karna randhir ko convince karne main...

RANDHIR-sanyu...
(he called her name...to bring back her back from her trance...)
(he had kept her head on his lap...and he was watching tv...)

SANYU-randhir...

RANDHIR-hmmm...

SANYU-randhir muje tumse kuch baat karni hai...

RANDHIR-ha bolo na...

SANYU-randhir...kal meri renuka mom..i mean renuka mam se baat hui...

RANDHIR-what...she called you...i knew it...selfish woman...

SANYU-randhir meri baat toh sunlo pehle...unka phone nahi aaya tha...maine unhe call kiya tha...

RANDHIR-kyu...kya zarurat hai...maine maana kiya tha na...then...

SANYU-randhir...baat ko samajo...unhe tumhari zarurat hai aabhi...

RANDHIR-ohh...so unhe help mang li hai na...selfish self centered

SANYU-randhir dont jump to conclusion so fast...first listen to me...
(she said getting up ...)

SANYU-maine unhe call kiya tha...lekin unhone aaisa kuch nahi kaha jaisa tum soch rahe ho...infact...unhone kaha ki...dont help me..unki wajah se hum dono main problem na ho isiliye woh chahti hai ki hum unki help na kare...

RANDHIR-pehli baar unhone koi sachi baat kahi hai...better...aacha hai hum unki help nahi karenge...nahi toh hum dono main problem hojayegi...jo main bilkul nahi chahta...

SANYU-aacha toh phir hum kuch nahi kare...randhir unhone ko kiya so kiya...lekin hum aaisa nahi kar sakte...

RANDHIR-sanyu...just please start it all again...

SANYU-randhir...understand...

RANDHIR-muje nahi samajna sanyu...thats it...main koi help nahi karne wala unki...

SANYU-randhir...this not fair...

RANDHIR-why you so concern about that lady sanyukta...kyu karni hai tumhe unki help...see ...meri decision final hai...mere decision kal bhi wahi tha...aaj bhi wahi hai...no change...

SANYU-toh mera decision bhi sun lo...main unki help karungi...

RANDHIR-what...

SANYU-ha randhir...main mom ki help karungi...

RANDHIR-i said no sanyukta...

SANYU-i'll do it randhir...

RANDHIR-aacha...kaise karogi help...ha...

SANYU-yeah mat bhulo ki...humari company ki 60% holder main hu...so yeh decision zyada mera hoga...

RANDHIR-what...!!!
(randhir was shock listening to her words...)

(while sanyukta mentally slap herself for saying this...how can she say this...)

SANYU(im)-shit...maine yeh kya keh diya...ohh no...main ueh kaise keh sakti hu...60% partner and all...randhir kitna hurt hua...how can i say...

RANDHIR-wow...very good...sanyukta...very good...

SANYU-randhir...see...

RANDHIR-muje jo dekhna tha...main dekh chuka hu...jo sunna tha sun chuka hu...

SANYU-randhir see...muje aaisa kuch nahi kehna tha...woh galati se..

RANDHIR-maine tumhe kabhi kisi baat ke liye nahi roka sanyukta...sirf ek hi baat ke liye roka...renuka sanyal se dur rehna...par...

SANYU-randhir listen...

RANDHIR-no sanyukta...renuka sanyal...aaj uss aurat ne phir...phir muje...

SANYU-randhir...kya bol rahe ho tum...its just...

RANDHIR-how can you say this sanyukta...isiliye main tumhe uss aurat se dur rakhta tha...muje darr lagta uss aurat se...bachpan se sab kuch cheena hai unhone...unki wajah se maine bohot kuch khoya hai...aur aab...
(he left the place...came down sat in his car and drove away ...)


PRECAP : sandhir fight...😲

so end of part 83
hope you all like it
do share your views
with loads of love
MANALI
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsme update
Loved it


Sandhir fighting fighting
Cnt see our lovey dovey sandhir like this


Both r right on their places


Renuka she's not that bad she really loves rd
She cares for sandhir


Sanyu determined to help her


I like this quality of sandhir most
No matter how much they fight r argur they never fails to care for each other so much love



Again arguement
Unintentionally sanyu hurt rd



Precap scary


Cnt wait


One more part today plzzz plz plz


Love u
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing..
ab next thread open karo...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh god
What a chapter👏

So perfectly penned sandhir emotions

Both are right at their place

Please sandhir ko alag mat karna

Kash sab kuch jaldi se theek ho jaye..

Hope Everything goes well

Waiting eagerly for next part

Update soon

Love
Ayushi
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: thundercute

amazing..

ab next thread open karo...


next thread...150 pages toh hone de...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
ohh god di !! wat is this yaar !!😭😭
sandhir ki fight..ohh god !!😭😭
u wrote wonderfully 👏
but plz sort out everything asap...cant see them like this😭
update soony!!

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