~SAATHIYA~..A SANDHIR FF - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
That was quick.
It was again a little romantic and sensual.
Though I dont want Sandhir to be separated but its ok.
Waiting
Zumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Awsme update

Loved it to the core

Sanyu in her house

Her dad is still against her dream
She tried to talk to her bt he's just impossible


Sandhir on date

Rd going to Mumbai
Sanyu crying

Cnt see them in pain
Bt for their better future they have yo drift apart


Loved anju n rd bonding

Rd really her a lot


Rd surprised sanyu
Both in each other embrace


Precap

Awww sandhir gonna miss each other


Cnt wait
Update soon



Love
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Wah ji wah
What an update!!!!!!!
Luvd sandhir scenes
Anju n sanyu scenes
But mostly anju n rd sequence
It was really beatiful

Luvd it

Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
OHH MY GOD..
THANKS FOR THE AMAZING RESPONSE GUYS..
I M SO HAPPY ...
SO YOU ALL PROVED ME THAT IT WAS MY RIGHT DECISION TO START A FF...
THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN...

SO HERE YOU GO WITH PART 4...
YA I M REALLY HAPPY HAPPY TODAY..
SO MERI KHUSHI ISS FF DWARA ZAHIR KARTI HU..

PART 4..

it was 4am

(randhir was the first to wake up..he saw sanyu sleeping peacefully in his lap...he was just admiring her sleeping face...but he has to disturb her coz its now the time for his departure..yes his flight for mumbai ...11 am in morning...he has to go away from her just to be with her forever...she has to focus on her career too...she has got a fantastic job ..a job which she would always love to do and always wanted to do. he cant bound her with his love...she needs to be given her free space..free space to fly with her aspirations..free space to establish herself...he will give her what she didnt get from her family or especially her dad...SUPPORT...what can he do is to be with her always..protect her..and love her unconditionally...

soon his trance was broken when he saw sanyu rubbing her nose with her hand..)

RANDHIR-sanyukta..utho..

SANYU-hhmmm...10 mins..

RANDHIR-sanyu..subaha hogayi hai..koi aa jayega..meri 11 baaje ki flight hai...

(listening this she opened her eyes and came back to reality)

SANYU-hmm...mein directly aajaungi airport...

(with these she stood up from his lap...but she lost somewhere..lost in her own world of thoughts...

randhir understood...he caught her from her wrist and held her very close to her..)

RANDHIR-kya hogaya hai tumhe??..this is not you sanyukta...aaise upset rahogi toh mera kya hoga...aur tumhe aapne job pe bhi focus karna hai sanyukta...you cant do this...its your career aspiration right...!!! i want you to fully concentrate on your career...i want my clg wali fighter sanyukta back...kya baat hai muje batao?

sanyu hugged him tightly..

SANYU-randhir muje darr lag raha hai..

RANDHIR-kyu?? darr kis baat ka...aab toh sab aacha ho raha hai na sanyukta...

SANYU-randhir tum yaha nahi honge...and now i cant imagine me without you...i mean mein janti hu ke yeh sab hum humare aache future ke liye kar rahe hai..aur muje aapne career aur job pe focus karna chaiye..woh mein definitely karungi randhir...but muje bas tumse dur nahi jana..

RANDHIR-aare mein yahi toh hu .mumbai...2 hours mein.. waha se yaha..sanyu i really want you to become strong now..i know peechle kuch dino mein jo bhi hua..tum usse disturb ho...but you have to come out of it now and focus...aapne andar ki strong fighter sanyu bahar nikalo farzi...

(listening farzi her face was lighten up...her face welcomed a sweet smile

she immediately wiped her tears)

SANYU-ok ...mcp..i will obey all you instructions..

(and she smiled ...assuring him that she will be fine and take care of herself)

SANYU-par randhir..tum aapna khayal rakhana hoga...and i m always there for you..

RANDHIR-me too..chalo aab mein chalta hu..see you at airport..

(sanyu nodded)

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at 9.45am airport..

(randhir was waiting for her and soon she arrived in a cab randhir recieved her ..pay the driver his share...now they were heading towards the main gate..

randhir was now really happy..coz now she was smiling..she was happy..he could see the old smiling sanyukta back in her...he was now satisfied..)

SANYU-sab check kar liya na randhir..sab important documents and all..

RANDHIR-hmm...

SANYU-take care randhir..aur meri chinta bilkul bhi maat karna...mein yaha aachese rahungi..

RANDHIR-u too take care..aur mein bhi aachese aapna khayal rakhunga..

(soon the announcement for the passengers travelling to mumbai was echoed to there ears...

randhir hugged her tightly and she hide her face in his neck...

tears were forming in there eyes but both of them helded

the tears in there eyes..coz it will weaken there partner...)

SANYU(still in a hug)-pauchte hi call karna thik hai..happy journey...

RANDHIR-yup i'll call...and thank you...

(randhir broke the hug and a gave a soft kiss full of love on her forehead

soon the final announcement was done and now he has to go...)

RANDHIR-bye..

SANYU-bye...

(randhir went inside...sanyu was still standing there hoping he would look back..her eyes were searching for him..and yes he looked back..and gave a smile...she also smiled back...he went inside finally and she returned home...

sanyu reached home and decided that now she will be not cry and will be strong..)

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at 3 pm same day..

(sanyu was in her room ..

she was busy reading a book...and waiting for randhir's call

sanyu's phone rang..

she immeditely saw and it was randhir's call)

RANDHIR-hello...i landed safely...

(sanyu was so happy to hear his voice..)

SANYU-great...kaha ho??

RANDHIR-bas aabhi hi airport se nikala..and i m in car heading toward company's quarters..

SANYU-great...

RANDHIR-tum kya kar rahi ho?

SANYU-bas book padh rahi thi...

RANDHIR-hmmm...okay ..so monday se tumhara joining hai right...mera bhi...

SANYU-yes monday se...i m hell excited randhir...bahot khush hu mein...mera office ka first day...aur tumhara bhi...phir hum raat ko baat karenge..aapne first day experience share karenge...

RANDHIR(im)-yahi excitement chahta tha mein sanyu...me too so happy for you...

SANYU-kaha kho gaye..

RANDHIR-kahi nahi..chalo ttul...quarters aagaye...take care..love you..

SANYU-thik hai take care...love you...bye..

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(its now more than three months...

time flew away...they were hell busy with these new change in there life..new office,new enivornment,new friends..

but there was not a single day...when sandhir didnt missed each other..

every night they used to talk either on phone or on skype..

they were always connected...

they used to discuss everything...every single happening of the day..

they were missing each other badly..

sometimes used they used to cry...missing each other immensely..

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one night.. on skype..

SANYU-hii randhir...

(her face was pale and dull..)

RANDHIR-kya hua tumhe...tum ro rahi thi phir se..

(sanyu immediately blinked her eyes so the tears couldnt come out..)

SANYU-nahi toh..

RANDHIR-jhooth mat bolo sanyu..

SANYU-nahi randhir...

(now randhir was in tears

looking at her face ...he was restless

but sanyukta couldnt hold it more and she started crying)

RANDHIR(sobbing lightly)-i miss you ...

SANYU(in between her cries)-miss you..

(both were looking at each other with teary eyes through laptop screens..

damn these laptop ..

both felt like punching the screen and going on other side..and hug tightly...)

RANDHIR-i cant live without you sanyu...i love you..muje tumhari bahot yaad aarahi hai..

SANYU-randhir..muje bhi tumhari bahot yaad aati hai..please jaldi aa jao..

RANDHIR-nahi aasakta sanyu..company ka bond hai..ek saal tak kahi move nahi kar sakta..

SANYU-hmm.i understand ..mera bhi probation period chal raha hai...one year ka time span hai...

RANDHIR-hmm...

SANYU-khana thik se khate ho na...??

RANDHIR-ha..aur tum??

SANYU-hmm...ma hai na khilane ke liye..

RANDHIR-hmmm...good...

SANYU-aaj pata nahi tumhari bahot yaad aarahi hai randhir...aaisa lagta hai ..bhaag ke tumhare pass aa jau..

(randhir's eyes welled up..)

RANDHIR-mera bhi bahot maan karta hai..par bas thoda time aur..bas ek baar mein yaha aachese settle ho jau..phir saath mein hi rehna hai..

tumhe pata hai ..kal mera bahot hi important presentation hai...bahot hi bada presentation hai..mere boss ne muj par yeh responsibility de hai...and i have to live up to his expections..toh muje wish nahi karogi...?

SANYU-meri well wishes toh humesha tumhare sath hai...phir bhi all the best...

(now both were getting normal)

RANDHIR-aacha tumare koi dost baane ?

SANYU-ha bane na...bahot aache hai sab yaha...aur ha tumahre?

RANDHIR-ha baane...ek saurabh naam ka dost bana..mere next wala quarters mein hi rehta hai..kabhi kabhi hum sath mein hi raat ka khana khate hai..bahot aacha hai woh...

chalo sanyu bahot der hogayi hai tumhe kal office bhi jana hoga na...

SANYU-hmmm good night and all the best once again..

RANDHIR-thanks and good night...

(she smiled brightly..and was about to sign out ..

RANDHIR-ek min sanyu...)

she looked at screen..

RANDHIR-i love you...

(a brightest smile appeared on her face...)

SANYU-i love you too...

(both signed out and shut down the laptop and slept with little moisture in eyes but lots of love in hearts...)


PRECAP:SURPRISE VISIT..😳aab kiski yeh toh next part mein pata chalega..

(ps guys just two or three more parts then sandhir shaadi...these next parts are very important..to build the base for shaadi..and right now they are not settled properly...so shaadi is not something which they will think upon at these stage..hope you all understand..

is the story living upto the title SAATHIYA.ofc its just starting aage bahot kuch hai.. but still if you think its not apt tell me...i will change)

(the story is mixture of my thoughts and some of the concept from the show...but majority are my thoughts only..i have adapted few concepts from the show which i found very important..so i think all of you dont have problem with it)


thats it ..end of part 4..

hope you all liked it...

bahot load toh nahi de rahi ho na...bouncer toh nahi ja raha na??

ek saath ek din mein 3 parts...isiliye..

actually now i will be udating directly on friday or saturday...

hope you all enjoyed reading...

thank you..

with loads of love

MANALI..

🤗



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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Lovely manali
See i was stalkin u n now m first
Yyyiiipppeee...ab toh mere parnts b proud honge k beti 1st aayi😊

Khair update was awesum
Sandhir missin each odr

Bus ab inki shadi krwa do
N give us sum more sandhir romantic scenes

Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: vrinda65

Lovely manali

See i was stalkin u n now m first
Yyyiiipppeee...ab toh mere parnts b proud honge k beti 1st aayi😊

Khair update was awesum
Sandhir missin each odr

Bus ab inki shadi krwa do
N give us sum more sandhir romantic scenes

Update soon


THANKS ..
YAH SURE SHAADI KI PREPARATION HI CHAL RAHI HAI...😆
OK..ABOUT SANDHIR SCENES ROMANTIC SCENES...I WILL DEFINITELY GIVE.
.THODA SABR KARO..😳
..AND THESE THE PHASE WHICH EVERY COUPLE IN LONG DISTANCE RELATIONSHIP GO THROUGH...
THE NEXT TWO PARTS ARE REALLY IMPORTANT..😉
PHIR SHAADI KA INVITATION SEND KARTI HU...😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
How do u write so well?????
Main Bohut emotional ho jaati hoon...

They are missing each other sooo much...
Jaldi se mila do...

Mujh se inki tanhai nai dekhi jaa rahi hai ...
Precap- interesting... very interesting

Agla update jaldiii
I'm waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Awsme update

I m really loving this story

This is really amzng

Full of love n care

Feeling bad for sandhir
Both drift apart
Bt for their better future

Both trying hard to cntrl their tears they don't want other one to get weak


It has been three months sandhir missing each other


Precap exciting

I think sanyu will visit rd


Cnt wait for next
Update soon


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Read all four chapters in one go!

You're a great writer! 👏

I loved each and every part. ❤️

You're doing a great job.

And you made me cry during certain scenes. 😭

Tears of sadness and nostalgia and happiness.

You're doing a wonderful job! 😳

Continue soon!

And thanks for the PMs. :)

xoxo
Amreen 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Woah!!! That was shocking and pathetic of her father.
How did you manage to write that girls are a burnden vala thing?
It was really smart of you..
Waiting
Zumi
Edited by Zumi_Vamp - 10 years ago

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