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ruark_22

@ruark_22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

I loved the way you portrayed Arnav. The way his family behaves is soo real. We see this a lot in our real life quite often. I absolutely love the concept. Eagerly waiting for the story to unfold!!

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Awesome start
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glad u are allowing your pen towrite without restiction ( ss not ts)like our painter Arnav. . 👏

easily can understand what he been through dur to studious siblings n parents...

wow what a description of places ..

is he heard khushi singing?

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

It's indeed refreshing and enticing to read a lighthearted stry like this... I'm being quite inquisitive as to what happens next...the faint music that arnav heard might be khushi's..ahh! Arnav s a painter! I am an ardent lover of art and am totally in awe with this concept.cant wait for more.

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tanurocks

@tanurocks

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

wowww

reading this first chapter is like watching a beautiful art..

loved it...

cant wait to see the other colors in coming chapters..

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Awesome Start, The Artist just saw his muse...go on

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Arunima

@barsha_dash

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

what a beautiful start...i m in love with ur writing... The way u hv written this part has already created an image of the setting in my mind... Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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tanu_15

@tanu_15

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

loved d concept
beautifully described arnav n art ...
w8ng 4 more

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Awesome update...

India is known for it's art n culture , which has the Taj Mahal ,a beautiful piece of art , which the country n it's peopeople see as their pride...

bt the same Indian society frowns upon that art n artist when their children want to make it a profession rather than a hobby...

I really think that our society needs to come out of their this perception about art as a profession.

Thanks for d pm...

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

vow beautiful and entirely unique concept where the hero is a carefree bird and not a corporate magnate waiting to read how the story moves ahead

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

oh mintsy, I know this is going to be a special one for you and for all of your readers

the first part was simply marvelous. It was as if I was travelling - the indepth information of the sights visited by arnav, the distinct delicacies of the places etc were very detailed and I loved and enjoyed reading each and every bit of it - it was really awesome mintsy. thanks for this ride -

will wait to know more -

a very very knowledgeable update

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