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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

My heart is thudding in my chest after the update and waiting for the reply. Awesome

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Nitya

@nik1310

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Just caught up with both the parts. Interesting beginning...new for me. Waiting for the story to unfold.

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Outstanding update. .

While reading I was just wondering r u an artist n at tge rnd u gave the answer.

Your painting is superb. ..

Arnav is totally lost in khushi's dance world...the way he painther n he got so inspired..

like the way khushi accepted his offer to show him around..

wow! Tgeir passion for art bringing them together. ..

his rajasthan proposal awesome. ..

eagerly looking forward

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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Nice update. N beautiful painting

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Amazing update...

Hope Khushi agrees to be Arnav's muse???

can't wait for the next update...

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Mints, You are a God gifted person. You can paint, write and make wonderful banners and above all you have a good heart. God bless you. Ameen.

You are so talented, MaShaAllah. Happy to know that you are a graphic designer. Your painting is breathtakingly outstanding. I just love it.

And about the update, it was brilliant...I had stated in my previous comment now I'm saying this again, your this story is breathtakingly refreshing and your writing style is lyrical. Which is altogether a new thing from your side. And I am completely impressed with your narrative style.

I simply love the way you narrate Arnav-Khushi first meeting. I got lost in the world of artistic creation and beauty along with Arnav, the way you described Khushi's dance performance. Arnav and Khushi both are passionate about their work and suit each other very well. And behind this story I can see an artist who is as passionate about her work.

Khushi's entry was mesmerizing and glad to know about her. She is single, beautiful, independent, bright, and talented. Or kya chaheye... Arnav's suggestion to Khushi was quite surprising. Let's see what she'll going to react and respond.

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