Arshi TS: ...Yours truely :: Part 18(LAST) :: pg 153 :: 29 June

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Anna Thomas

@Annasabu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#831

Hi SD,

OH! the story has come to an end. pst!

fINE, DON'T WORRY REST FOR A WHILE, COOL YOURSELF AND PREPARE FOR YET ANOTHER CUTE STORY.

tHIS ONE WAS GGO. i HAVE A SUGGESTION. KEEPING THE NAME OF THE CHARACTERS TRY A DIFFERENT THREAD AND DEVELOP IT.

lOVE
ANNA

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Lily30

@Lily30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#832

loved the ending👏

thank you for the pm🤗

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hydsri

@hydsri

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#833

wow very nice story and concept/ Khushi is such a little fighter and protector in this.

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katj

@katj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#834

Fabulous story ends beautifully. Thanks for pm

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#835

Fantastic ending.. Aman punched Arnav and is worried for Khushi's reaction.. that was superb part.. however loved to see Happy ending.. ARSHI truly each others.. hamesha.. loved the ending..

thanks for pm 😊

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#836

beautiful ending to a beautiful story...will miss it

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mika17

@mika17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#837

Superb update

Loved Aman and Arnav scene

Beautiful ending

Thnku for the pm

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@_CrystalFlames_

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#838

Nice update...
Lovely ending SD...
Aman punching arnav and at tje same time scared of khushi... 😊

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MinocheBS

@MinocheBS

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#839

superb ending for the story loved it 👏

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Megha

@arshilicious.M

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#840

y wouldnt we get another chance to comment on ur story!😉

dont know about others but i always re-read the best of stories again and i comment on them!😃

urs is he best story...i just wanted that dhruv-raizadas face off would be much alobrated with khushi present!⭐️

i dint read ur 17th part as i feared what is it gonna be and wen i read ur pm about part 18 being ur last i dint get time so today i read both ur parts!😊

part 17 wa s very emotional...😭..i cried seeing the attempt of khushi and part 18 about bringing aman back was aweesome!👍🏼

it showed that though khushi dosent need a protector she can protect her loved ones!🥱

i say that this ss/ff of urs was women oriented...more based on khushi than their relationa ship!😳

it wasnt a lovey-dovey ff...but something which shows that women dont always need support...instead they can turn to some one's support!😃

last but not the least i demand a epilougue...about nani ko maafi mila kaise...coz i know in some way or other khushi must have maafed her!😛

aman or anju to be sttled happily ever after...but after arshi having kids!❤️