new arshi FF: the first love of khushi - Page 2

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Wonderful story!!!! Do continue😉
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Awesome start dear please continue soon
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Please update soon n do pm Me please

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the firste love of khushi part 2




the unknown let khushi in front of home she thanks him for his help and take her at home and don't let her alone in a city foreign for her, she let him go she enters home found her sister and her aunt very worried night was falling and she was still not home her sister sees her arrived soaked runs toward her and said blaming her

-: Where were you khushi you scared us look at how you are soaked

lost in her thought khushi don't even look at payal she did not answer her and it's not sure that she heard her. payal puts her hand on her shoulder and said in calling khushi

-: Hey !! khushi !! what do you got?

-: Eh! (reacts khushi) no, nothing!! here is the medicine of buaji

-: What happens to you khushi you're lost you've got something?

-: Didi forget it go gives the medicine to buaji

khushi gives the medicine to her sister and goes to her room she thinks at everything have happened to her today she thinks at this man his face did not want to leave her she feels love but she is afraid at the same time she don't even knows who he is how he calls just a face that she keeps. a face that looked at her for a long time who stared at her with his eyes and deep in thought she wants to see again this face she wants to find this feeling to be sure that it exists but fears she will never see him again how she hope to meet him in this immense city

this unknown called Arnav Sing Raizada known by the name of ASR a wealthy businessman who owns businesses arrogant thinking that life is with money believe in his power and not that of the creator he has never known love and does not want to know it, he tries not to fall in love. Arnav goes home passes in front his sister Anjeli and goes into his room soaked Anjali is worried for him goes to see him with in her hand a towel

-: Chote !! what happens to you why you are soaked? lets me wipe you

Arnav review the scene with this girl her eyes did not want to leave him he finds a repressed feeling a feeling unknown and adverse

-: Chote !! (Said his sister seeing him lost in thought and wipes his hair) it seems that you stayed long standing in the rain go to change your clothes you're going to be sick

-: What !! (he said after realize her voice) heu yeah I'm going to change

-: What happens to you chote? you're lost

-: Nothing di! let me Please I want to change

Anjali look at her brother she finds him different usually he is sure to himself but today he is doubtful she noticed his worried look she said

-: Chote !! you have a problem? I've never seen you like this

-: No di I'm a little bit tired I want to rest

Arnav think too much about this girl he does not know who she is a girl who he insulted he belittled he regrets he wants to see her again he wants to know her name he knows nothing of her except the house where she lives he feels that he wants to approach her

-: Why I think of her like that she is a simple girl why I want to see a girl who I saw once in my life what happens to me I have never thought about a girl like that and why ? she is not the kind of girl that I like I must stop thinking about her I must withdraw her from my mind

Arnav believes he will be able to remove khushi of his mind but he really will be able to do it? is that the chance will allow him ? or maybe the destiny will confront him to the reality which he will be obliged to accept he never thought to a girl this way all girls he has known have not stayed in his mind he sees them the day enjoy with them but when he comes home at night he forgets he puts his head on the pillow and sleeps quiet but khushi she comes with him in his bed he puts his head and think about her. he has never thought that one girl awake him from his slumber after having seen her in his dream. days go by and he did not forget this face that harass him she don't leaves him in peace even in his office he thinks of her everything recall him her face if the rain falls he think about that night where he found her lost and he helped her he is tired his brain does not stop from functioning he can't, he wants to stop all that he wants to forget but her image does not allow him, and he decided to see her again he wants to talk to her again he just wants to ask her name he remembers her house it is he who left her that day he arrives in her neighborhood he approached the house and suddenly he hears her voice she is here he acknowledge her voice. the window is open he passes in front and looks through he sees her sitting on her bed hair detached payal her sister caps it he looks at her he finds that she is very beautiful he wants that these hair it's in his hands to him to feel their suppleness and manipulated it between his fingers buaji enters in the girl's room Arnav sees her he hides, he is afraid to be spotted but succeeded to get a small opening of the window to continue to watch and listen, and buaji says

-: I have to go out to buy some provision there is nothing to eat at home

-: Let buaji (khushi said) I'll do

-: No (sanka devi) you will get lost as the last time

-: No buaji I'll not be lose I'll find my way

these words led Arnav to a memory not distant some days back when he held khushi in his arms and the wires of rain fell on them buaji goes and leaves them in their talk

-: Why she will not let me go (khushi said) I could do it she is sick

-: She is right buaji (payal said) you will lose yourself the city is very large

-: The last time I was not lost I was back (said khushi)

-: Yes it is true when the night was fallen but tell me how you came back how you found your way

khushi is silent for a moment she remembers this day she has never forgotten she thinks too every day she also dream and when she would go told to her sister how she returned she feels a small wind that enters by the window and caressed her face with a smell that is not foreign to her she felt the presence of Arnav she flies into a cloud and asks her sister

-: Didi you believe at lightning strike

-: Khushi what you say (payal said shaking her and brings her back to the reality) someone could hear you

khushi is her name said arnav finally he know anything about her he puts a name on this face he wants to know more remains in front of window to continue to looks at her and hear her voice

-: Why didi what wrong I said I just want to know if it exists

payal finished braiding the hair of her sister asked her to turn to her and says

-: Khushi !! told me what there's I'm your sister don't hide anything to me

-: I don't know didi but right now I think about someone very strong whom I met lately

-: some one? it's a man? who is this man khushi where you met him (payal request worried)

-: It was he who brought me home the day when I was lost I don't know why but since that day I don't stop to think about him

-: You know who he is and where he lives how he call

-: I know nothing about him just a face I can't forget

-: stops dreaming khushi it's impossible that you will see again this man

khushi looked at her sister with regret she realized that what said payal is true she can't see him again how she will find him but at the same time she feels that she is too close to him she feels in her heart she'll see him again she does not know how but she believes this tense look did not escape to Arnav who heard everything he saw her stress he knows khushi has not forgotten him but he is not sure if he wants to get into this story he is not sure if he wants to go at the end of this story which is a first for him all these feelings all these emotion are new to him he don't know if it's a good thing for him he know nothing he throws one last look on khushi and go home


Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Great chapter
hope they meet soon again
:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing part...
so already missing each other they are...
khushi tells payal about arnav...
arnav is hearing all from outside,,,,,,,
lets see how arnav forward in this relation...
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superbb ...Wow Amazing febulous start
Thank you lot fop pm's...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update.. Waiting for both of them to meet soon..
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
A beautiful concept..
Just a suggestion...
Use punctuations correctly like full stop comma etc...
It is really difficult to read.
Ur concept is great but try to differentiate dialogues of two people.
Try to proofread...
Sorry if i hurt u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update loved it thank you for pm.

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