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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya
Hey there everyone,

The next update will be coming up on Wednesday night IST.

Have a good week :D

Cheers
Sandhya

Waiting for the update eagerly...

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#702

Buddhu budhwaar jaldi aao !!

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#703

It was great to see Akash and Khushi so happy at last, this rekindled friendship will do them the world of good!! Many thanks.

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#704

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Awww Rashmi, The girls are absolutely adorable ❤️

Kuku... I, your Akki is here ...

Its Wednesday in India...

Sandhya is not yet here...

Don't fret...We'll wait together for Sandhya...

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kaprasin

@kaprasin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#705

Few more hours to Wednesday in India. Waiting..

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sarahjac

@sarahjac

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#706

Chapter 5 and 6

Loved Madhu's stern attitude, it was so needed. Khushi is blessed with a wonderful family, people who have emerged strong after facing life's challenges head on.

Any emotion in its extremes blinds us completely...Oh Dear Arnav, if she really were the vulture kind, she would have most definitely fed on you by now, you gave her your number, remember?

Did his visit solve any purpose for him? I guess not.

Lavanya, she is officially the door keeper when any of the Raiz visit..😛waiting for Aarti to barge in next. 😆On a serious note she is another strong woman character in your story...and I don't want to generalise, but really can't help it...daughters are more sensitive towards their parents needs. There I said it, do I sound partial?

It seems to me that Aakash has grown overnight...its like he is a totally different version of himself, from a careless drunkard to a concerned friend, or may be he has always been that sensitive guy, just choosing to hide under the thick garb of indifference. Wondering if Aarti Raizada ever took any medical help for her depression? The family is in tatters.

Khushi from chapter 5 with pen, paper, markers is basically Sandhya, writing a fierce face off between the protagonists but her mind is diverted to knotted shirts riding up, pranayam and what not😛...forum janta ain't complaining, they can handle such diversions.

Khushi from chapter 6 is to be admired for curbing her curiosity and waiting for Aakash to open up...isn't that something which goes against the very core of being an investigative journalist..this alone shows how much she values their friendship and Anjali's memories.

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#707

Thanks for the note... 😊

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#708

Just read the chapters of this story now.

I am so intrigued by this...i am glafd akash hasn't judged khushi and is reaching out to her. Why would you bkame an 8 year old for what happened...it wasnt her fault! Poor khushi having to be blamed and put up with so much guilt at s7ch a young age.

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

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Posted: 10 years ago

#709

Oh i just loved this chapter so much 👏. It was not as intensed like previous parts but definitely showed your writing talent 👏!!!

Aakash and Lavanya's interaction showed different side or should I say another side of drunken Aakash from previous part. Lavanya's past was difficult but she is one strong woman, i surely want to see more of her also 😊.

At last, Aakash and khushi's conversation, the best partof the chapter! Friends for life indeed and i am so glad that he didn't come to blame her!!

lovely part as always and thanks for the PM 😊