Kaash... (NOTE: pg 26)

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 18 years ago

#131

heyy guys, i hope u all liked the introduction.. i will post the promos in a few mintues (or mayB hours...)

as u all might have already guessed from the introduction of the characters, the storyline of this second janam is going to be something like the movie Jaan-E-Mann...

I am of course, going to change some parts, and maybe end to story in my own way. Hope u all like it, and continue to read it...

AND PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ
don't forget to reply...after thelast part that i worte...i feel that u all dont liek me writing anymre, as none of u seem to reply...

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 18 years ago

#132

~PROMO 1~

The camera zooms in on someone, listening to the radio, while sitting in the car, waiting for the signal to turn green. The person is shown driving, but his face is still not shown.

RJ: Good morninggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg Mumbai. Main aapke subah ke chai ke cup ke saath aapki host aur dost Piya.....

The person's face is finally shown, and it is none other than Suhaan. After hearing the first few words of the RJ Piya that morning, Suhaan begins to think something.

Suhaan (THINKING): Mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki maine is aawaaz ko pehle kahiin suna hai??...

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brainychild92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#133

nice intro/proomo. i never saw jaaneman so i really donno but this really reminded me of kyph other than the fact that suhaan's parents die...

well anywayz continue sooon

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CrazyChatterbox

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Dazzler

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Posted: 18 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: me_iq
wow...nice intro nehuuu

thanx so much..i got the idea from the movie jaanemann, as i said earlier...i watched that movie, and kinda loved it so..i decided to use it for my ff..u watched it yet??

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 18 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel
great intro and promo

thanx..hope u continue to read my ff...

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CrazyChatterbox

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Dazzler

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Posted: 18 years ago

#136

Hey guys just to let u all know, i changed kripa's name from piya to ambar in the second janam...

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 18 years ago

#137

~PART 27~

The story starts when the camera zooms around the city of Mumbai. The sun has risen, and is spreading is light everywhere. The rays go through a window f a grand mansion, and the person who is sleeping peacefully on the bed is getting disturbed.

The alarm rings, and the person lazily lifts one arm, and switches it off. Then the person pulls the blanket off, and goes into the bathroom. The person only emerges from a steaming shower 30minutes later, with a towel wrapped around.

The person then goes to the cupboard, and selects some clothes to wear. After getting dresses, that person rushes down the stairs, kissing a middle-aged lady goodby on the way. The lady stops him.

Lady: Arre, beta, ruko toh zaraa.

Person: Kya hai mom?

The person turns around, and walks toward the lady, who is none other than Disha. And the person is none other than Suhaan.

Disha: Suhaan beta, kuch khake toh jaao.

Suhaan: No wayz Mom. Mujhe college ke liye der ho rahi hai. Main vahin canteen mein kuch loonga.

Disha: Lekin beta, tum toh pehle kabhi college jaldi hi nahin gaye, toh phir aaj kyun?

Suhaan: Oh come on Mom! Aaj college ka pehla din hai, aur main senior bankar ja raha hoon. Toh vahan main jaldi jaakar naye students ki ragging karoonga na..

Disha: Lekin Suhaan...

But before Disha can say anything else to Suhaan, he is out of the door. Suhaan sits in his red beauty..(here is the pic..)

He then turns on the radio,as he goes out into the streets.

(i changed this part from the promo also...)

RJ: Namaste, adaab, satsriakal, good morning. Main hoon cool as cucumber, spicy as sambar, aur Radio Curry mein aapki nayi dost aur host Ambar. Din mein jab aap aakaash ki or dekhte hai, toh aisa lagta hai ki suraj humpar has raha ho. Aur raat mein toh jaise taare humein yaad karke chamak rahe ho. Kaha jaata hai ki agar toote taare ko dekhkar agar kuch maanga jaaye, toh woh sapna sach ho jata jai. Koi bhi chamatkar ho jaata hai, jaisa duniya mein ek aur ajooba. Isi ajoobay aur sapne ko apne aakhon mein rakhte huye, aap suniye yeh aglaa gaana...

(this song is called Ajooba, and is from the movie jeans.)

--MALE--
Phoolon mein jo khushboo hai kaise voh aati hai
Titli kahan se yeh saare rang laati hai
Hawa ko basuri banaati hai sangeet kaise
Koyal ne sikhe hai yeh itne pyaare geet kaise
Hai yeh ajoobe lekin ek aur ajooba hai
Dharti se, ambar se, parvat se, saagar se
Humne suna pyaar ajooba hai, oh
Pehli nazar mein hi jo do dilon mein ho
Har voh qaraar ajooba hai, oh

--FEMALE--
Phoolon se jo khushboo aaye ajooba hai
Titli jo saare rang laaye ajooba hai
Basuri ka yeh sangeet ajooba hai
Koyal jo gaati hai geet ajooba hai

--MALE--
Yeh bhi hairaan hai, aisa bhi ek ajooba hai
Ta da da da da da, ta da da da da da
Ta da da da da da da da

--FEMALE--
Ooh

--MALE--
Ta da da da da da, ta da da da da da
Ta da da da da da da da

--FEMALE--
Daali mein mahek hoti hi nahin
Kaliyon mein mahek aa jaati hai
Yeh bhi ajooba hi hai
Saagar se ghata jo uthti hai
Meetha paani barsaati hai
Yeh bhi ajooba hi hai

--MALE--
Jungle mein jugnu ko, dekho to yeh socho
Yeh roshni is mein aayi kaise
Tan mein jo hai jaan, voh kis tarah hai
Mann mein hai armaan, to kis tarah hai
Keh bhi do yeh bhi to, koi ajooba hai

--FEMALE--
Dharti se, ambar se, parvat se, saagar se
Humne suna pyaar ajooba hai, oh
Pehli nazar mein hi jo do dilon mein ho
Har voh qaraar ajooba hai, oh

--MALE--
Phoolon se jo khushboo aaye ajooba hai

--FEMALE--
Titli jo saare rang laaye ajooba hai

--MALE--
Basuri ka yeh sangeet ajooba hai

--FEMALE--
Koyal jo gaati hai geet ajooba hai

--MALE--
Yeh bhi hairaan hai, aisa bhi ek ajooba hai

Kehne ko saath ajoobe hai
Par shaayad log yeh bhoole hai
Ek aur ajooba bhi hai
Resham resham, chandan chandan
Tera maheka maheka yeh badan
Koi ajooba bhi hai
Aankhon ke neele darpan, honton ka yeh bheegapan
Yeh roop tera, ajooba yeh to hai
Baahon ki garmi, yeh bhi ajooba hai
Aankhon ki narmi, yeh bhi ajooba hai
Yeh chaman sa badan koi ajooba hai
Dharti se, ambar se, parvat se, saagar se
Humne suna pyaar ajooba hai

--FEMALE--
Pehli nazar mein hi jo do dilon mein ho
Har voh qaraar ajooba hai

--MALE--
Phoolon se jo khushboo aaye

--FEMALE--
Ajooba hai

--MALE--
Titli jo saare rang laaye

--FEMALE--
Ajooba hai

--MALE--
Basuri ka yeh sangeet

--FEMALE--
Ajooba hai

--MALE--
Koyal jo gaati hai geet

--FEMALE--
Ajooba hai

--MALE--
Yeh bhi hairaan hai jispe tum voh ajooba ho

--BOTH--
La la la la la la, la la la la la la
La la la la la la la la
La la la la la la, la la la la la la
La la la la la la la la

As the song ends, Suhaan's face is shown. He is deep in thought.

Suhaan (thinking): Mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki maine is aawaaz ko pehle kahin sunaa hai? Jaise mujhe is bolne waale see koi na koi taaluk ho.

Suhaan is waiting at a trafic signal. When the signal turns green, and Suhaan tries to start his car, he is unsuccessful.

Suhaan: Oh S***! Ab meri gaadi hi kharab ho gayi ab main kya karoon? Chalo, main college ab paidal hi chalta hoon. Waise bhi, college garage se sirf paanch minute walk hai.

Suhaan calls a number on his cell phone, to come and tow away the car, and take it to a nearby garage. He follows in the tow-truck, and gives the garage-person clear instructions, on how to handle his car when he is repairing it.

Suhaan then walks to his college, which is only five minutes away from the garage. When he enters the gate, a crowd immediately forms around him. He makes his way throught the crowd, and goes to the basketball court where his friends are waiting for him. Suhaan walks over to them, and gives them hi-fives.

The whole "gang" then makes their way over to the canteen, as they decide that the canteen is the one place where u can find a lot of newcomers. They see a girl sitting alone, reading a book, with an i-pod blaring music into her ears.

Suhaan taps that girl on her shoulders, and she gets up, staring at him with an annoyed look on her face.

(this is how she looks like... and yess, she is none other than Ambar)

Suhaan is stunned, and he keeps staring at her. He can't even get a word out of his mouth, so Ambar decides to speak up.

Ambar: Kyun Mister, darr gaye kya? Mujhe maloom hai ko tum aur tumhare gang-waale (pointing to Suhaan's friends) yahan meri ragging karne aaye the. Toh karo na...

Ambar waits for a little while longer, but when Suhaan still does not do anything, she continues.

Ambar: Tum jaise log sirf paaltu kutton ki tarah bhonkte hai, katte nahin. Main ab jaa rahi hoon, lekin tumhe ek baat yaad dilaa deti hoon. Agli baar mujhse, yaani Ambar Saigal se panga lene ki sochna bhi mat.

Saying all this, Ambar goes, but Suhaan is still staring at her. When she is not there anymore, Suhaan's friends nudge him and only then does he get out of his trance.

(lets say that one of his friends is Vivaan, played by Vivaan Bhatena or Dhruv of Kumkum)

Vivaan: Suhaan, woh ladki tumhe itna kuch kehkar gayi, aur tumne usse kuch bhi nahin kaha? Tumhe toh is apmaan ka badla lena hi hoga.

Suhaan: (finally deciding to speak up) Nahin guys. Tum us ladki se kuch nahin kahoge. Leave her alone.

Vivaan: Theek hai. Whatever you say. After all, tum hi humare gang ke leader ho.

Saying this, all part, as the bell rings and it is time for everyone to go to their respective classes. Suhaan goes into his classroom, luckily for him, the professor has not arrived yet. He sees only one seat, next to some girl who has her face burried in her book.

Just then, the professor come in, and the girl puts her book down. When she stands up to greet the professor, she turns her head to see who sat on the seat beside her, and the guy also simultaneously turns his head to see who is his partner, a look of shock is seen on both their faces.

That girl is, of course, none other then Ambar.

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 18 years ago

#138

i hope u guys liked this part...
i wrote a really long one coz i may not be able to continue until next week or so...
so until then, enjoy..

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Arra Dollie

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Posted: 18 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: iqbal_neha91

thanx so much..i got the idea from the movie jaanemann, as i said earlier...i watched that movie, and kinda loved it so..i decided to use it for my ff..u watched it yet??

sorry jaan...i dunt hav time these days...hav 2 prepare for midterm examz!!