Kaash... (NOTE: pg 26)

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Posted: 18 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: fizzypop
cool part
i wish it works

it will, and kripa will get jealous, but its just a matter of time...so i dont think u need to worry at all

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Posted: 18 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: me_iq
haiii again gr8 prt...y wont i like it jaaan agar tumnay likha hai too!!! 😉

Iqra

thanx so much...wad did u say the name of ur other ff was?? i wanna read it...

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Posted: 18 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: jyotsna13
yes now kripa will be jealous and run back to angad 😃

she definitely be jealous, but she wont run back to him..

(and plz dont kill me for this...)

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Posted: 18 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: coolwoman
i have 3 things to say
1 id that kripa r u crazy??????? ur going back with sameer for all we know is that he could be lieing sameer's not lieing (maybe he is...but even i dont know that yet..)😡 😡
2 is that angad if you hurt kripa with this plan u r soooooooo dead maybe, but if angad really does succeed in making kripa jealous, that will only make her realise how much she does love him, and is willing to do anything for his happiness
3 is that mazing job with this ff. plz cont soon thanx so much, i will continue sooon, the next part will be up in 30mins or so...👏

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Posted: 18 years ago

#95

~PART 18~

Angad and Rhea then go downstairs, and Rhea says that she has to go.

Rhea: Angad, mujhe ab jaana hai. Meri thodi der mein hi meeting hai.

Angad: Theek hai, lekin main tumhe chod deta hoon.

Rhea: Nahin iski koi zaroorat nahin hai. Mera driver bahar wait kar raha hoga. main jaati hoon.

Angad: Theek hai. Bye. Aur haan, kal yahan lunch ke liye aana.

Rhea: Ok main aaoongi.

Angad gives Rhea a peck on the cheek. Seeing this, Kripa gets jealous. She quickly turns her the face to the other side. The next day, Rhea comes right a few minutes before lunch. The food has already been set at the table.

Angad sits at his place, which is at the head of the table, and Rhea comes and sits right beside him, which is actually Kripa's place. Kripa gets kind of angry when she sees this.

Kripa: Rhea, tum meri jagah par bethi ho.

Rhea: Really? Sorry, main abhi uth jaati hoon.

Angad: No Rhea. Tum yahi bethogi. Tum itni der baad mujhse mili ho, main tumhare saath aur zyada waqt guzaarna chahta hoon.

Kripa, with a "grrr!" goes and sits somewhere else. Throughout the lunch, Angad and Rhea talk about their college days. angad does not even listen to Kripa when she wants and tries to tell him something.

After the lunch, Angad and Rhea go out to the garden, and start talking. Kripa sees that, and goes to follow them. Angad sees that Kripa is following them, so he purposely leans over to Rhea and kisses her cheek.

Angad: Rheam shayad tum nahin jaanti, lekin main tumhe college mein pyar karta tha. College khatam hone ke baad jab tum mujhse door chali gayi thi, toh main bilkul toot gaya. Aur phir mujhe Kripa mili. Main use pyar karne laga, lekin woh aaj tak mujhse pyar nahin kar payi. Meri zindagi bilkul khaali hai Rhea, meri zindagi mein mujhe woh pyaar chahiye. Kya woh pyar tum mujhe dogi? Kya tum phir se meri zindagi ka hissa banogi?

Rhea is also surprised, but then she nods her head when she sees Kripa nearby. They then hug, and a crying Kripa goes inside the house. She goes up to he bedroom, and Sameer also follows her.

Sameer: Kya hua Kripa?

Kripa; Sameer, amin tumse kuch baat karna chahti hoon.

Sameer; Theek hai. Khao, ki kya baat hai.

Kripa: Kya tum mujhse shaadi karoge?

Sameer: What!

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Posted: 18 years ago

#96

~PART 19~

Kripa: Sameer, mujhse please shaadi karo!

Sameer; Woh sab toh theek hai, lekin achanak yeh faisla?

Kripa: Haan. Sameer, main Angad se pyar karti hoon.

Sameer: WHAT! Toh tum mujhse shaadi kyun karna chahti hoon.

Kripa: Kyunki Angad Rhea se pyar karta hai. Woh mujhse pyar nahin karta. MAin use khush dekhna chahti hoon, isiliye humein shaadi karni hogi. Aur mujhe yeh pata hai ki tum mujhe pyar karte ho, aur mujhe aur is bacche ko bhi khush rakhoge. Main Angad se jald se hi divorce loongi.

Sameer: Lekin Kripa..

{now, only their faces can be seen, but the rest of their converstaion cannot be heard.}

Kripa and Sameer go down holding hands. Kripa goes up to Angad, and tells him that she ahs made he decision.

Kripa: Angad, maine apna faisla kiya hai.

Angad gets excited, because he thinks Kripa is going to choose him.

Kripa: Angad, maine yeh faisla kiya hai ki main tumse divorce karke sameer se shaadi karoongi. main Sameer se pyaar karti hoon.

Angad's face falls, and he is about to break down and cry, but he manages to control himself. Kripa and Sameer then go out, to select and decide the arrangements for their "wedding".

Angad: Woh mujhse pyaar nahin karti Rhea.

Rhea: Angad, tum bilkul galat soch rahe ho. Kripa tumse definiely pyaar karti hai. Aur agar Kripa tumse pyaar karti hai, toh woh definitely palategi.

As Kripa is going out the door, Angad stares at her back, waiting for her to turn. She finally goes out the door, and out of Angad's sight, but not once does she turn back.

Angad: Dekha! Kripa nahin palati!

Rhea: Angad, tum ilkul naasamajh ho. Agar woh palati, toh woh tumse pyaar karti hai, aur agar nahin, toh woh tumse pyaar karti hai, lekin woh tumhe batana nahin chahti.

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Posted: 18 years ago

#97

hey guyys, do u all like the part??

i will post another one soon...

Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

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~PART 20~

One month passes by. It is now near Kripa's delivery date. Angad has been selected by his company to compete in "World's Top Companies Championship Soccer Match" 😆 😆

Angad is there in the locker room tieing his shorlaces, and Rhea is there, just to wish him good luck. Angad and Kripa did go to the court to try and get their divorce, but the judge there said that they will have to wait for six more months.

Anagd had tried very much to forget Kripa, but he cannot do so. He still loves Kripa. So, he and Rhea have decided to put on a "natak" so that Kripa can remain happy with Sameer. Rhea kisses Angad and goes out, just as Kripa and Sameer come in. Angad decides to continue make Kripa jealous, for he somewhat has some hopes left, so he shouts "I love U" to Rhea as she walks out.

Kripa does get jealous, but she does not really show it.

Kripa: Angad, don't worry. Maine Koi Aap Sa mein dekha tha.. 😆 😆 😆 Agar woh bhi tumse pyaar karti hai, toh woh palategi.

They watch Rhea go out,and turn back while doing so, but she doesn't.

Angad: Lekin woh nahin palati. 😆

Kripa: Toh...Woh tumse pyaar karti hai, lekin dikhana nahin chahti. 😆 😆 😆

Angad, Kripa and sameer go out. Angad goes to the field, while Kripa and Sameer find a place beside Dadi, to sit, somewhere in the stands.

Sameer: Dekho Kripa, main tumse apne bhai ki galati ke liye already tumse maafi maang chuka hoon. Lekin kya hum ab bhi ek nahin ho sakte?

Kripa: Nahin Sameer. Main abhi bhi Angad se pyaar karti hoon. Aur ek baar Angad aur mera divorce ho jaaye, aur Anagd ki shaadi Rhea se ho jaaye toh humara yeh pyaar ka natak khatam. {ah hah...so she and Sameer are just putting up s show...i hope now u all are happy}

Rhea comes to near where Kripa is sitting, and says that she needs to talk to her. Sameer moves out of the way, and Rhea sits in his place.

Rhea: Kripa, amin tumse kuch baat karna chahti hoon.

Kripa: Theek hai, kaho.

Rhea: Kripa, Angad sirf tumse, mujhse nahin, sirf tumse pyaar karta hai. Use laga ki tum Sameer se pyaar karti ho, isiliye woh divorce ke liye taiyaar ho gaya. Woh jo us din tumne garden mein dekha, woh sab ek natak tha, umhe jealous karne ke liye. Pleas kripa, tum Angad se divorce mat lo, woh tumse bohot pyaar karta hai.

Kripa: Really?? Lekin tum?

Rhea: Kripa, meri chinta mat karo. Mujhe koi na koi mil hi jaayega. Aur mere mummy-papa meri shaadi kisi Sujal Kapoor, jo ki doosre team ka captain jai, se fix kar rahe. Woh ek bohot hi accha ladka hai.

Kripa gets tears in her eyes when she listens to this. She is just about to say something more to Rhea, but then suddenly, Angad's team scores a goal, and everyone in the stands gets up to clap, also at the same time, kripa starts getting her contractions.

Kripa screams in pain, and Rhea holds her. Sameer who is also nearby, rushes to Kripa, and carries her. Prithvi, wo has comes to watch Angad's game, rushes near to the filed to tell him the news.

Angad hears this, and gets worried for Kripa. He doesn't know how he will get out of the game. Nearby, teh captain of the other team, Sujal Kapoor (played by our dera Rajeev Khandelwal), tells Anagd to hit him hard. Angad does so, and is given a red card. So, Angad runs off the field, pack his clothes fats, and rushes to the hospital.

Angad and Sameer both are running along with the stretcher carrying Kripa. Kripa reaches out her hand to touch Angad's hand, but she is unsuccessful. The doctors follow Kripa into the emergency operation theater.

A few hours later, they wheel Kripa into the normal maternity ward and bring the baby, and keep it in the crib next to her. The nurse inside is just checking Kripa's and the baby's health.

Kripa: Nurse, kya tum bacche ke pita ko andar bhej sakti ho?

Nurse: Haan zaroor.

The nurse goes inside, and she sees two people hugging each other, that they are so happy...Angad and Sameer. The nurse being confused, goes back inside.

Nurse: Mam, bahar do log hai, usmein se kaun bacche ka baap hai?

*****WHAT WILL KRIPA SAY?????*****

Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 18 years ago