Sandhir ff - Was It Just A Kiss? - updated on 17th march

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nkphjfr

@nkphjfr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Nice 1

Aap dark paradise kab update karogey

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harshita singh

@oshinchaudhary

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#82

i dont know where it is heading... but m loving it...
so he is a businessmen hmmm interesting!!! very interesting!!😆
GREAT CHAPTER BTW!

LOVE
HARSHITA

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clarita

@clars

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

rd is such a charmer .am luving the story .

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Nitra

@Nitra

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Oh god awsmmmnm story cant wait for nxt part

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vidhichaudhury

@vidhichaudhury

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Superb update.
loved it
thanks for pm
& pls update soon

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Sanya Goel

@CrazyKupKakes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Sagl
Ress

I amso srry janu fr unressing so late 😭

Didn't get time yar

But u know acha hi hua

I read all the parts together

Bohot maza aaya 😆

Firstly i wanna say sanyu's mom is so damn cool

She's so similar to my moma 😳😃

Lol like i share every damn thing with her

And secondly she kissed rd

That was hot 😉

And the way he texted her ^_^

And their date 😆😉

Lol mom convinced her to go 🤣

Wonder whether my mim would ever do this or not

I guess she'll 😆

But waiting fr their date to move further

Ab update soon

And I won't be late this time

Pkka 😉

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Divya

@Dauntless_Diva

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

His signature smirk...makes him more hot!!!!

i am into the story now...mujhe iss kahani ke depth main jaana hai..hehehe

am eagerly waiting for the next update...😊😛

And sanyu works in a bakery...interesting,very interesting😛

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payal

@Payalchoudhary

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Wooow yr...
Kya likha h...
Again this story is my type..nd that why i cant tell u..
How much i loved it..
Sanyu peak rd...
Nd rd follow her...
Mazzza aane wala h..
Update soon...
As soon as possible...

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KAJAL

@foreverhers

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Woah!!! So we are getting faster and regular updates... Hmm... I'm lovin' it!😆

Nevertheless, I'm addicted to this fiction already.
Even though each of your fictions are an exquisite piece of brilliance, this one, in particular, has that charismatic aura in it making it way more appealing and one of your best works so far.
It really amazes me that even though being so young you have already captured the hearts of so many with your perfection, I can only imagine what will happen in near future when you grow up.
You have nailed it again with the two chapters.

Ah-umm! So, it seems that Randhir is all head over heels for Sanyukta and she is also attracted but doesn't wants to express it... Well, that certainly makes the plot twistedly intriguing.
I'm so doubtful about Randhir's character, confused would be a better word.
Stalking her, mysteriously getting her number, impressing her mother, intimidating her and then being the perfect gentleman... So many contrasting and ironical characters all at once in a single person is hard to digest...
Moi loving Sanyukta's mother here, forcing her daughter to go for dates...🤣🤣

Moi eagerly waiting for the next chapter soonish!
Gimme fast!!!

Regards
Keya