Tormenting Mr. Gangster #2||CHap 44 Pg104 [SanDhir] - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
res Unres. First of all I am first. Next of all.. Wow what an amazing update.. She was badly hurt.. And j too And randhir to dhakkan h bhai sahab.. Utna b ni samjta.. He feels for her too but just said sorry.. Awww.. Misunderstandings.. And parth only scowls.. Lol... And I hope they don't find a new problem.. Anyway.. Read the whole thing in metro.. It was emotional.. Hilarious as always.. Amazing.. Update soon... Now you are free gun. I know.. Ab jaldi jaldi update mangta meko.. Love u.. Bye..
Edited by samridhigoodiez - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res
unres

awesome update
love that sanyu finally let out all her emotions
rd could have cleared everything
but choose not to do anything
parth is protective over rd
bromance
lol
sanyu is defiantly going to get into trouble again
update soon
Edited by don girls - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Unres..

Amazing update..
Kya jhada re sanyukta ne
N his apology was so genuine 😊

Loved it..
Edited by daringdarlo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww... it was so emotional... poor girl... loved the update... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ress

Unress
Finally u updated

God cnt tell u how impatiently I waits for ur update

And ur update is alwz wrthwaiting

Har update me kuch new surprise hota h
This one was also superb
I so loved it

Sanyu condition was so miserable
She was a total mess
She was dying every second

She was angry on rd

Rd came to her room
Bt it only created more problem

Sanyu fuming in rage
She was trying to get out of his hold


Rd hell irritated with her behaviour
He was going bt he cnt

He cnt see her crying
He cnt leave her in such a miserable condition


He hugged her with all his might
His embrace soothed her


Finally sanyu asked her million dollar question
Which was killing her

Now rd knows the reason of this sudden change in sanyu behaviour

He was feeling happy to know dat she was jealous
He was chuckling which only added fuel to sanyu

Omg sanyu outburst
Rd was shocked to hear her



She let out her frustration n emtns
She brought previous incidents


Rd feeling bad to know dat he was responsible for her condition

He left without explaining anything to her
He didn't gave any explanation

He said sorry only n left from there


In morning sanyu was amazed bcz rd apologized to her

She was curious to know rd whereabouts
She was asking sahil bt parth interrupted

He was so rude to her
Sanyu confused why he was behaving this way with her

Sanyu also snapped at him
She's not the one who will take shit from others


Sanyu n parth fighting
Poor sahil dono k bich me phaas gya


Sanyu was going to left the den
Bt the thought of rd in danger gave a heart attack to sanyu

She wants to go with the gang to save rd
Bt they refused


Bt sanyu chup betane walo me se nhi h
She's going on her own


Pta ni ab ye kya krne wali h


Next updte is going to be a dhamakedar one


Excited for it

Update soon
Wtng


Love u
Keep smiling
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
resss...unress...
the update was flawless and emotional. ...
waiting 4 next update eagerly ...
update asap...
Edited by holysoul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aweeesommee!!!
This one is indeed a master piece... the rage of emotions were too strong maaan!!!
Loved ittt!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeayyy sanyu way to go n rescue randhir the gangster... Oops kAhen sanyu phir se to problem create nahi karegi randhir k lye...
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Posted: 10 years ago
unres. awesome update dear. unbelievable piece of writing. The way u penned down it was amazing. now story has come to a interesting phase. sanyu after shanaya was hell irritated hell annoyed with rd m d way rd taken her into his roim was d final nail in coffin she is totally broken from inside she is burning in jeolouay but still she CNT figure abt her restlessness her irritation her jeolousy was having coz she has fallen for rd unconditionally. n where as rd he is still in dilemma. he cares for sanyu he can't sees sanyu in tears. after shanaya departure he came to see her n seeing her in miserable condition. he wanted sooth her take away her pain. finally sanyu outburst come outs. now they knows they have feeling for each but dey r not realizing it. n now rd has single handed went to catch raghav n sanyu was hell angry on him. let's c what madhu ll do. do continue soon dear. n thanks for forum.
Edited by Sarim.fatmi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update ..Brilliantly penned down Sanyu's emotions.
Superb update girls..

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