Just an UMBRELLA- Epilogue- Satin--Pg 135 - Page 10

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

He walked in the church to find kripa with some of her friends she smiled as he came in. Angad was surprised that kripa had reacted in such a way he had left her alone on their wedding day and she did not seem to mind, object, or as far as he could see even care. Women were dumb, he concluded, and it was going to be easy fooling kripa into believing almost anything.

1 minute with alone with Kripa in the car was probably the longest moment for angad, to spent for anyone. It was so weird sharing such a strong relationship and yet be total strangers. Angad was sure Kripa was also feeling the same way because she was the one that started the conversation, "beautiful day isn't it."

Angad was too dumbstruck to say anything, he merely nodded looking out the window, Kripa smiled at him, was that the only expression, that she knew how to portray angad though silently, she continued on talking, "It was a beautiful day when I married him, not a cloud in the sky."

She sighed slightly, her voice becoming deep, "I really miss Prithvi, he was a good companion." Angad looked at her; her big brown eyes were filled with so much sorrow that seeing them even touched his own heart.

"He was a good brother." Angad said in reply, looking at the carpet in the car, because he could not bear looking at kripa anymore.

Kripa did not take her eyes off of him, "He was murdered." Angad looked at her sharply.

"How do u know?"

"I didn't I was just guessing, but now I know." She said observing angad very closely, he did not say another word through the whole trip, she was smarter then he had thought, she had first weakened him by talking about Prithvi and then tricked him into telling her, an essential piece of information, but she would not get another piece of information out of him.

Angad showed kripa her room when they arrived at his house. Kripa had already changed and bathed by the time angad came up to the room, she was sitting at the dresser combing her hair thinking about her past life and her life to come. He came and sat on the bed with his laptop, removing and placing his coat behind the door. Kripa looked at the coat with a strange glint in her eyes.

Angad was really busy typing something on his laptop, he didn't even see when kripa came and sat beside him. "Need help with anything?"

"Er…no that's ok I think I'll manage but thanks."

She shrugged, "Ok, I am going to sleep, wake me up if u need anything." She went to sleep next to him facing the other side.

Angad looked at her slightly surprised, he was never wrong at judging anyone and Kripa he had though of as a conservative girl, He did not want to sleep next to her, one reason being that he knew he was not a "good boy" and second and the most important reason was that he didn't want to get in any type of attachment with her.

He kept working diligently until about 1:30 at night. He then slowly shut his lap top, he checked on kripa she was fast asleep, he put on an informal jacket and went out of the room opening and closing the door as quietly as possible. Walking out of the house thinking it was easier to fool kripa then he had thought.

What he did not know was that kripa had been waiting for just that opportunity, she waited about ten seconds after Angad left before she got up off the bed. She had no plans to go and follow him; she had much more important work to do. She took off the jacket hanging at the back of the door, and smiled, but it wasn't the usual sweet smile that she often gave angad, it was pure EVIL.

Flashback: Kripa "slipping" angad grabbing her, she using him as a support to get up, and slipping a small device in his pocket. Kripa took out a small microphone out of the pocket, but she did not stall, admiring her brains. She took a bag out from under the bed, and went out of the room.

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A young girl stepped into an alley way she had a bag swinging to her side. She was dressed in black and white; her ears were pierced with several silver and gold earrings. She had a black band on her arm and many rings on her fingers. She had a silver necklace with the words Aprik, on one side and Kripa on the other.

Edited by munizaaa - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92

me first aprik her name is so hard to pronounce so is she kripa continue 😊

Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow! shes soo smart lol angad has his hands full with her yet he has no idea! lol hes too overconfident- love that! lol i love the part about angad's not a "good boy" ahahaha! lol he cant keep his hands to himself lol! oh yea he went to the meeting rite omg kripa is on his tail... hes soo screwed! hmm i hope kripa doesnt want to kill angad cuz the whole evil smile thing was freaking me out lol i pictured it more psychotic than evil with the whole evil cackling mauhahaha too lol! plz continue soon! ur rite there are a lot of secretive stuff in here like her double name...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
nice part so aprik is kripa nice twist
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow great part wonder what kripa is upto and was there another clue in this update cause i did not notice any but going to check agin to make sure great part can't wait to read more u know if u were a writer I bet ur books would have been big hitss 👏 i have one question just did angad take the coat cause around the end kripa took the coat off the door plzz tell me😕
Edited by candyprincess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
omg APRIK... lol KRIPA .,, y am i not surprised...s o shes evil in thys there not gona b togather 😛
din even read da story nd started to cry lol lol

nywayz cont soon

kripa i lyke u sweet n simple not pure n evil 😕 😆 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow awesome! hmmm Kripa is smart, lol. Cont. soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lol angads such a fool to think hes fooling Kripa/aprik!! lol

continue soon!!:D:D:


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hmm.. so there is more than meets the eye.
Nice part 👏 👏. I would say the best part in the story so far. I was a bit confused with Kripa's character, her husband died a month back (assuming she is one month pregnant right?) so Angad just found out she is pregnant and decided to marry her? And, she agreed very easily ?

But, now I see the reason she agreed to this marriage. It appears like she will make Angad a total mamu 😆 at the end of this. Poor Angad. lol!
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Posted: 18 years ago
good part.. i like how kripa is the one whos fooling angad but angad thinks hes foolin her 😃 haha its hilarious 😛

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