Friends, Sisters, Weirdos: S1-Falling In Love With Reyaansh Singhania - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Itna chottu
wb rey entry
when rey gonna enter
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
unres

okay dis ws amazing
new entry nisha
she is rey's cousin ryt
n wat sara n rey ek dusre ko pehale se jaante hai
vaise sara ka attitude accha tha
n yus sorry for late unres
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: devilofevil_KR

Itna chottu
wb rey entry
when rey gonna enter


Hey, that's only cuz' the font is really small. It's like three pages on Microsoft.
Next chapter. Patience child!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Hey... Very intresting concept yar...
N u kno wat this is the first ever story in which both kr & tr fans i am seeing...
Wonder with whom Rey will end up at the end...
As untill now all parts were awesome... loving all characters n their bonds... would love to see how this proceeds...

N I must this is indeed a very unique one... Never read something like this before...
Update soonish...

Waiting for my rockstar's entry n to see how his first meet with his 3 deewanis is goin to be...

N yes dont forget to pm me when u update next time😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: KAS_REY4eva

Hey... Very intresting concept yar...

N u kno wat this is the first ever story in which both kr & tr fans i am seeing...
Wonder with whom Rey will end up at the end...
As untill now all parts were awesome... loving all characters n their bonds... would love to see how this proceeds...

N I must this is indeed a very unique one... Never read something like this before...
Update soonish...

Waiting for my rockstar's entry n to see how his first meet with his 3 deewanis is goin to be...

N yes dont forget to pm me when u update next time😉


Aw, thank you!
No, I think there were two more, but they were both discontinued. One was TR/KR, and the other was based on Triya.
He's going to end up with Kriya. But there aren't going to be that many scenes of them, or w/ Taarey & Saarey. It's more friendship-based.
Omigosh, thank you! That means so much to me! I'm actually quite proud of this story.
"Update soonish?" I've seen a lot of "Update soons," but I think that thi sis the first "Update soonish" that I've ever seen. I think I'm gonna' like you.
Next chapter!!! You'll get to see how Rey's equation with each of the girls is different.
I added your name on my PM list, so no worries.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Mahabharat- um no, sorry, NOTE: I hope you liked the KR scene. It might not seem as "cute" as Taarey and Saarey scenes because KR is not a "cute" couple per say. They fight like cats and dogs, and basically hate each other, but that's where their love is. Between the face-offs and disputes, they do show a lot love and care for each other, so that's why I've written the KR scene like this.

With Taarey, Rey is Taani's protector, while Taani is his emotion. Rey will always be there to protect Taani, maybe not as a lover, but as a friend. And Taani will always be there to help him keep his emotions in check. They'll argue a little, but they'll always have each other's backs.

With Saarey, they have so much history. Best-friends till the end of time, no matter what happens. They're like Rahul-Anjali, but without the whole "falling in love" thing. One minute they'll be fighting, and the next they'll be watching horror movies together.

I'm sorry for this longass post, but I just had to explain why I didn't make KR's first meeting that cute, or that romantic. It's not just because I've never written on them before. If you guys still aren't happy or satisfied, just let me know. You guys are the readers, and if you're not enjoying what you're reading, then I'm not doing my job right. Thanks for putting up with my bak bak if you actually read this.

PS: This part is dedicated to Crazy (devilofevil_KR) who's been pestering about Rey's entry since the beginning of time. Well Crazy, you'll finally get your wish. Enjoy!

The Mean Girl

Kriya's POV

I'm currently reading my book, and I'm at really good part, when someone taps me on the shoulder. I turn around.

"Yes?"

The girls standing in front of me look like typical mean girls. Well, at least the one in the hot pink dress. The other one seems harmless enough. But the one in the dress is scowling, looking down at me. But as Taani says, it's not nice to judge a book by its cover.

"You're sitting in my seat," says the girl in the dress, as if she was the queen and I was a lowly peasant.

Well, there goes that theory.

"Excuse me?" I say, getting up.

The girl lets out a dramatic sigh rolling her eyes as she repeats, "You're sitting in my seat."

"Your seat? Um, I'm sorry but I don't see anyone's name here." Who is this girl?

The girl rolls her eyes and points to a sticker. "That sticker means that this is my seat. The 'S' stands for Sharon. As in Sharon Rai Prakash. Now get out of my sight you bloody weakling," she says in an icy voice, smirking.

Is she serious? I take the sticker off, crumple it up, and throw it away. "Next time, you might want a sticker that matches your ego. This one was a bit small," I say snarkily, getting my things and leaving both the girl, and her friend, dumbstruck.

I'd rather have my best-friends poke at my eyes with that horrid thing that they like to call eyeliner, then ever have the displeasure of seeing Miss Sharon Rai Prakash, ever again. That's how much I hate her after our first encounter.

Narrator's POV

Sharon and Simmi sit down after Kriya leaves, the former fuming in anger as the latter tries to get her to calm down.

"Sharon, why are you giving that girl so much importance? Just chill."

"But Simmi, how can she say that to me? How - how dare she? I'll show her! I'm going to her life a living hell! Just you wait and watch," Sharon promises as she starts plotting her revenge. Simmi just prays that the poor girl's safety, and hopes that they never meet again.

Meanwhile, Kriya's walking down the corridor, cursing Sharon under her breath, when she hears a voice.

"Hello? Wait!" She turns around and sees a familiar girl running up to her.

Once the girl catches up to her, she says "Are you completely insane, or do you just have a death wish?"

Kriya gets confused by this and says,"Excuse me?"

"You pissed off Sharon freaking Rai Prakash. That's like poking a bear with a stick."

"Well, someone needs to put her in her place. And why did she call me a weakling?"

"Ah, you must be a fresher. So you see, last year, Sharon created a divide of sorts. 'Dazzler' means rich people, while 'Weakling' means us middle-class people."

"That's so bogus! Why doesn't anyone try to stop her?"

"Because her dad is Gautam Rai Prakash. Ex-choreographer, current leading businessman... and he's also a trustee."

Kriya sits down on one of the benches and asks, "Why would she do this?"

The girl sits down beside her and says, "Look, Sharon holds a lot of power. And most people are scared of her. But I've known Sharon ever since we were 10 years old. She's a sweetheart, but she's also pretty broken. I never knew that she could do something like this."

They sit there in silence for a few minutes, until Kriya unexpectedly yells, "I remember now!"

The girl looks at her, confused, prompting Kriya to ask her, "You're Neha, right? Swayam bhai's friend?"

That's when it hits Neha.

"Kriya?"

"Yup!"

"Yay! I am so happy to finally meet you!" exclaims Neha as she hugs Kriya.

Kriya and Neha met through Swayam's Facebook account and spend hours and hours chatting together. But they've never met each other in person. The two immediately start chatting. Kriya tells her about what's been going on, and Neha tells her how survive this place.

Taani's POV

"What does a girl have to do to find a nice, secluded, peaceful area, in a gigantic college like this?" I ask myself as I walk into what I'm assuming is an empty rehearsal hall.

I sit down on one of the dices that are supposedly chairs, and take a look at my swelling ankle. "Crap! Di's gonna' kill me for not taking my painkillers," I mutter. I look through my bag for my painkillers and a bottle of water. "Great. Painkillers, but no water bottle. Genius Taani, genius!" I get up so that I can go get some water. On my way out, I bump into someone.

I was about to apologize, until I heard the person say, "Are you blind?"

Um, rude much?

I look at the person who just spoke to me, and I see that it's a girl in a hot pink dress. With her, is another girl. She has really cool hair.

"You know, if I was actually blind, I would've been extremely offended by that comment." I hate it when people say things like 'Are you blind?' or 'Are you deaf?' I find it rude and obnoxious.

"Look fresher, I don't need a lecture from you, so just buzz off!" says the girl.

"Really? Because it seems to me like you could certainly use a lesson in manners."

"You're going to give me, Sharon Rai Prakash, a lesson in manners?" she says, as if I was a disgusting piece of crap stuck to her shoe. "Just who the hell do you think you are?"

"A person! And there's a way to talk to a person and treat a person, and what you're doing right now, is not it. No matter what your name is, or how much power you hold, at the end of the day, you're just a regular person like everyone else here."

I shake my head in disbelief as I march out of the rehearsal hall, wondering how someone could be so... downright bitchy!

Narrator's POV

After Taani leaves, Sharon looks like she's about to explode. Simmi makes her sit down on one of the dices and says, "Sharon, calm down. This is so not worth getting angry over."

"I can't calm down Simmi! First that girl in the canteen, and now this one! I'm not going to spare them, either of them," says Sharon, as she marches out of the Rehearsal Hall, while Simmi texts the boys.

...

Outside, a very expensive car screeches into the St. Louis parking lot, and parks next to Sharon's car. The boy in the car gets out, sneakily avoiding the teacher whose class he had missed this morning, and makes his way straight to the canteen.

Once he arrives at the canteen, he sees his two best-friends. Walking over to them, he happily exclaims, "Hey guys!"

"Hey guys ke bache!" yells the taller one of the two. "Where the hell have you been?"

"Since when am I your kid?" the guy asks teasingly.

"Rey!" yells the shorter one.

"Okay fine, sorry. Now tell me what's wrong."

"Didn't you get Simmi's text?" asks the shorter one.

"No, what -" begins Rey, but the taller one cuts him off and says, "Read it right now!"

"Alright, alright. Relax Vicky," Rey says to the taller boy. He gets out his phone, and looks at the message.

"Where the hell are you guys?! Two girls (freshers/weaklings) told off Sharon and she's pissed! Come to the Rehearsal Hall right now!"

"Oh shit!" groans Rey, slapping his forehead. Rey turns around and is about to head to the rehearsal hall, when he collides with someone and gets juice spilled on him.

"Ah, crap!"

"Sorry Rey, I swear it was an accident -" begins the boy who collided with Rey, but Rey cuts him off by saying, "It's okay dude, just chill." The boy smiles as he walks away.

Rey turns back to his friends and says, "Guys, please try and go calm Sharon down. I'll be there as soon as I can." With that Rey leaves. On his way out, he bumps into Kriya, but because he was in such a hurry, he didn't even look back to apologize.

Kriya on the other hand was beyond pissed because she was carrying an armload of books which she got from the library, and they had all fallen due to Rey bumping into her.

"Neha, please wait here. I'm gonna' catch up do that idiot and teach him a lesson," says Kriya as she runs after him.

When Kriya finally catches up to Rey, she grabs him by the arm.

"What the hell?" demands Rey.

"That's what I wanted to ask you. You bumped into me, and that caused me drop all my books! And the worst part is, you didn't even stop to apologize!"

"Look, I'm in a hurry right now so -" Rey begins, but Kriya cuts him off and says, "So what? It's common courtesy that if you bump into someone, then you should apologize."

"Fine, I'm sorry!" says Rey, as he starts to leave, but Kriya grabs his arm again.

"Say it like you mean it." Now Rey's the one who's pissed!

He pushes Kriya against the wall with his free hand and growls, "I already said sorry to you! I told you that I'm in a hurry, and yet you keep interrupting me. Bloody Baatcutter."

He leaves her and starts to leave, when Kriya comes back to her senses and yells after him, "What did you just call me?!"

Rey stops, turns, and yells back, "Baatcutter!" Then he leaves to go change his shirt and make sure that his best-friend doesn't unleash hell on Earth.

...

Taani walks down the corridor after getting a water bottle from the canteen, and goes into the girl's locker room. But what she doesn't know is that she just went into the boy's locker room because Rey's best-friends, the pranksters, switched the signs as a joke. Thankfully, the locker room was empty.

After Taani's done taking her painkillers, she's about to leave the locker room, when a hard masculine chest stops her. When she looks up at the owner of the hard muscular chest, the first thing that comes to her mind is, "Oh shit! He looks exactly like Aarav!"

But the first thing she says is, "Are you mad? What the hell do you think you're doing in the girl's locker room?"

To this, Rey retorts, "This is the boy's locker room. What the hell do you think you're doing here?"

Taani furrows her eyebrows in confusion. "Boy's locker room? This is the girl's locker room, the boy's locker room is over there."

She points to the sign, and Rey realizes that this was his friends' idea of a joke. "Look, there's been a misunderstanding. This is the boy's locker room. Someone switched the signs as a joke And by the way, do you have any common sense or what? This room is blue, and the other one is pink."

"That is the most stereotypical thing I have ever heard! And not all girls like the color pink okay? I for one find pink to be the most repulsive color in the whole universe and beyond."

"Well for your information, this place was built like seventy years ago, so obviously they're going to use pink and blue!"

"Well excuse me for not knowing that! And you know what, maybe it's time for a change."

"Then why are you picking my brain over it? Go take it up with the board or something."

Taani stomps out of the locker room while cursing Rey under her breath. Then she says to herself, "Maybe I should change the signs back." She takes her bobby pin out of her hair, and her bangs fall in front of her face.

She puts them behind her ear and says, "Seriously bangs, I love you, but you irritate me." She goes off and finds a random stool, which is quite wobbly, but she gets on it anyway. She takes her bobby pin, and starts unscrewing the bolts.

Once she's done, she screams as she's about to fall off the stool due to its wobbliness, and due to the weight of the sign. But Rey hears her scream, so he rushes out of the locker room and puts his hands on either side of her waist in order to break her fall.

He takes the sign from Taani, and puts it on the ground. Taani carefully steps off the stool and picks up the screws. She goes over to where Rey is, and puts the screws on top of the sign.

Rey looks at Taani and says, "Come on, I'll help you."

Taani smiles. "Thanks. But could you maybe put on a shirt first?" Rey bites his tongue and remembers that he took his shirt with juice on it off, and was about to put on a new one, when he heard Taani scream.

"Um, yeah, I'll be right back," Rey says awkwardly as he goes back into the locker room to put on a new shirt.

Taani gets on the stool, and starts unscrewing the bolts for the other sign. Rey comes out of the locker room, while Taani unscrews the last bolt. Rey quickly takes the sign from her, so that she doesn't fall like before. Like this, they work together in putting the right signs back on.

Once they're done, the bell rings and Rey slaps his forehead.

"What happened?" asks a slightly concerned Taani.

"Well, my friend is angry, and I'm literally the only person who can calm her down. And now my other friends are going to kill me."

"Does your friend like chocolates by any chance?"

"She lives and breathes chocolate and treats it like the holy grail. But where -" begins Rey, stopping mid-sentence when Taani hands him a chocolate bar.

"You're late because of me, and we kind of got off on the wrong foot. By the way, I'm Taani."

"Thank you so much, you're lifesaver! I'm Reyaansh, but you can call me Rey," says Rey, smiling as he takes the chocolate bar from her.

"Nice to meet you Rey! Now, I gotta' get to class, so I'll see you around." With that, Taani leaves, with Rey waving back at her before he heads to class as well.

Edited by foreverlazy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Awesome story.loved it
pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: vidhichaudhury

Awesome story.loved it
pls update soon


Thanks!
Will do.
I added you to my PM list.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I don't have patience... aadat se majboor...
jaldi only half done ergh...
jaldi fast update this full chappy...
otherwise u r gone...
I don't mind u boiling u in oil... huh...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: devilofevil_KR

I don't have patience... aadat se majboor...
jaldi only half done ergh...
jaldi fast update this full chappy...
otherwise u r gone...
I don't mind u boiling u in oil... huh...


Dang, you are impatient.
And scary.
And slightly insane.
I'm gonna' call you crazy.
Sorry I'm taking so long. I'm applying for a job.

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