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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 10 years ago

#611

Waiting writer ji...

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-Mistletoe-

@-Mistletoe-

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#612

Where art thou, Meera?

Waiting... :)

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#613

Main jagoon ya so jaoon ? 😊

I do hope your work load has eased off a bit..

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#614

I really did mean late night, Apr 8 :)

Chapter Six: Cold Feet, Warm Heart

Thank you, as always for waiting and for reading!

Love

Meera

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

Navigator

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Posted: 10 years ago

#615

no way man.. I made it to the first Res?

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Oh! You brought that tension to its very peak and left us hanging YET AGAIN.

Here are my two favorite lines in this update today.. "This was the trouble with sisters. They knew you too well." I guess I know a variation of this as I have no sisters...I do have a few of those and yes, they do know me more than I know myself sometimes.

Here is the second one.. along with Khushi's heart, mine went for a small dive as well.. "Arjun shrugged again and leaned back in his chair, picking up his cup of tea and taking a slow slip as the teasing light in eyes flickered. "You..." He looked away and ..." Right here is your mastery at story telling. You bring these magical moments to those in your story who aren't protagonists. I can see how much you like your Arjun (just like how much you adored your Amans :)) - I see it in the way you are carving him for us, your readers.

I realize that you are revealing your story layer by layer. I love that you pay such close attention to your characters. I love that your story is not *just* about Arnav and Khushi. That it is about Arjun, it is about Krishna... and all those lovely characters you create that I simply cannot help but fall in love with.

Meera30... I went back to say hi to your The Emerald Isle Tales... and I want to say that your magic is in the stories you weave... So.. thank you for creating one more and thank you for sharing.

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#616

mineee

OMG..Meera u r fantastic... the first time i read this update i was smiling like crazy... everytime i read ur updates im on cloud nine... n my husband gets some extra love and caring from me 😉...haha n he is in favor of me reading ur updates 😛

oh krishna is an awesome sister and understands khushi better than khushi herself 😊

Initially khushi thought arjun to be handsome but not anymore,... may be if there was no AV sir there was a chance that they could be together???

oh n does Arjun have feelings for khushi?? oh arjun is a sweetheart... for some reason i so want him to be aman 😛

oh n the song...omg it was so apt...khushi the sharmilie kali and arnav the manchala bhavra 😳

nadi (khushi) sagar (arnav) se milne chali...omg.. how do u do this...it is pure magic 😃

but where did AV sir go 😲... i thought u mentioned he was appreciating her and so him smiling through his eyes when she sang the bhavra part??

is he standing behind he and thts y she is not able to see him??

oh n she owes this discovery to arjun... oh i love all the characters so far...

how am i going to wait 10 more days?? 😭

chalo i guess will go read the chap fourth time...wat to do cant stop myself 😳

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bhavis

@bhavis

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#617

Pyaar hua chupke se😳

OR IS IT?😛

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2H4uIuuBEzQ[/YOUTUBE]

Arjun is such a sweetheart along with Tripti. Khushi is really lucky to have these two.

And your update was more just like the song itself. Fell in love with your update again and that too chupke se😃.

Loved both your song.

Khushi wants HIS recognization- why why?? Tell tell😆

PS- How can i read your other stories??

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#618

Dekha na tune mudkhe bhi peeche, kuch der to mein khada tha...

Meera, the above lines was for AV sir. Where did he disappear suddenly?😲

What a wonderful update this was. The beauty of your writing, your story and it's characters are so real that as a reader I have already started rooting for them.

I love Arjun, love his nature of making people smile, his easy go attitude, his ability to make friends and last but not the least, the best friend a girl would want.

Tripti, typical sister who just by looking at her sibling gets to know what is happening within her sister's mind.

Khushi Tripti bonding reminds me so much of my sister and my bonding.

Loved the song selection in this update. How apt was the song from Khushi's POV.

Kaveri meeting her Arnav, a river meeting and merging in the ocean.

Now I am just too scared to even think of the reasons Arnav walked out.

Why oh why, you had to stop there!!!!

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Jay

@jduke

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#619

Simply superb update and song selection. Enjoyed reading the update. Where did AV sir go?. Did he go to bring a flower bouquet to congratulate her 😉

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#620

Hayeee what a superb song selection..loved it..

Meera, I am loving the flashback but would love transformed present Arnav Kushi meet again.. I have a feeling you will give us flashbacks of Kushi falling deeply for AV sir but stop it there and come back to present and then we will be craving for the reason they separated

I am loving this journey of Kaveri and Varun ..unless Varun is happy, Kaveri will not flow smoothly