Arhi FF 'Palace of illusions' Ch 2(9) 17th Feb

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Welcome back, a very interesting start - look forward to more .. Hope you are well :-))

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

i have 27 parts of dis story already... when will we reach there..

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Welcome back dear :-)

It's good to know that you're completing your old stories.And POI is the first one... Though we read many chapters of of this story, but as you said it's gonna be second innings, so I am super excited to read this story with new enthusiasm... And I take this story as new one and gonna fall in love with this story all over again... Prologue was delightful and pleasant...

Khushi is so cute..Loved her innocent questions and loved the way her Dadaji gave answers to her innocent questions. And who can forget an ocean. Arnav's Dadaji immense trust on him left me flabbergasted...I always love your story characters.and you are a brilliant writer. Looking forward to read more.

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Poju

@Poju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Hey vanhi.. It was wonderful to read it all over again..

Please keep updating as o missed this story as well..

Waiting..

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Hey Vani,
Welcome back
Thanks for starting POI again... I love this story sooo much
Can't wait read again

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

wecome back..nice to read the story again :)

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Welcome bck

Glad you have started posting this story again.

Tho I have read this till the last update bt its one of my fav n don't want to miss out on new changes in this reposted story.

pls pm me.

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Thank you Vanhi. I am reading and feeling as if I am reading it for the 1st time... although I know it is not the first reading for me... lol.

Little Khushi asking so many questions.

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

I loved the character sketch and the contrasting situations of the two families. While Khushi is being bought up in a protected atmosphere, Arnav is being taught to deal with the harsh realities of the world. While she is being told stories about Prince Charmings, Arnav is being taught to deal with the family business and the things that tag along with it.

"Is he an Ocean, Dadaji?"... Now only if the little girl knew how true her statement is, not just fugiritively but quite literally. The prologue sounds very interesting and I look forward to see the circumstances under which they will meet.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

Edited by sk2405 - 10 years ago

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Ishque

@Ishque

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Hello vani welcome back. I am really happy to see you are back and writing this is great news Lysendra looking forward to read. Will this story start from where you left it or will it be for the first