DEVIL's LOVE

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Zaysha_Khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

this is my first ever stoy,do tell me how is it?

PROLOGUE:

She was smiling to him,to a beast,to a murderer yes he is,he is a murderer,his sins are unforgiveable,he do not deserve her.

she is an angel,a beautiful angel,her beautiful hazal nut eyes evoked some strange feelings inside him,her long black hairs,her beautiful hands,foots everything belongs to her always give him peace which he never had. How could a murderer like him have a peaceful life?No,he have no rights to have peace ,he do'nt deserve this.

What is commen between her & him? nothing.

he is a beast,

she is an angel,

he killed inocent people,

she can go to any extent to save a life,

his heart is devoid of any feelings,

her heart is full of love,kindness and humblness.

There is nothing commen between them,how can he love her,LOVE,where the hell this word came in his thoughts,oh,this girl will made him crazy.

his chain of thoughts was broken by her call for him to have lunch.

CHARACTER SKETCH:

Heroin:

name:Khushi kumaar,20 year old,pretty and honest gir

Hero:Arnav aka ASR,30 years old.

Aman singh:his friend

Anjali Gupta:36 years old,her sister

Rahul gupta:her Brother in law.Anjali's husband

kriti:her best friend(khushi's friend)

She(khushi) has only one grand mother named'Aasha kumaar',a sister and a brother in law.

Arnav has two brothers Akash'and'akul'.

plzzz tell me how it is,it really matter me if you like my first

creation or not?

Edited by aashikhan120 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

seems interesting!:)

thanks for the pm and keep writing princess. xo

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Posted: 10 years ago

Seems interesting will love to read further

Keep writing !

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Posted: 10 years ago

here goes the next update

CHAPTER 1:

A beautiful girl was running behind her little nephew on the bank of canal, she stop on her tracks when she felt strange feeling. She looked here and there , her eyes were searching for someone. Her nephew came to her and said: COMEON LET's GO FROM HERE", she came back to senses and when they were about to leave , she saw a man drenched in blood.
She panicked to see the man. She was a very kind, talktative , honest girl with strong morals teach by her grandmother.
She rushed to see the person who was in very bad state , a tall young man was fighting for his life, looking tired and exhausted.
"Oh God, what happened to him" the exclaimed in panick.
"hey GOD what should we do now , we cannot leave him in this state, any body here please help, help please. but to her disappointment there was nobody to help her as it was afternoon and everybody was either resting or preparing lunch'.
She thought of a plan to save him, she with very defeculty took him to the backside of her house and take him to her room without anyone's notice, she went to call doctorji , she was so nervous all this time she was biting her nails, muttering to herself "What she should do? Should she tell to dadi or not".
After so many thoughts she went to her dadi and by holding her hand she told her
"THERE IS A GUEST DADI" she told this to her dadi with so much nervousness.
Her dadi smile and said: "WHAT'S THE PROBLEM DEAR , YOU LOOCKED PANICK".
This did work and khushi told her everything from A to Z.
Her dadi felt proud on her and ask her to call to doctor.
Aasha (khushi'dadi) saw the person , she felt as if she knew him from ages. She never felt like that, she realy want to know who is he? She has saw a sparkle in her doll's eyes and she also knew the reason.
If only she knew this devil is landed here with the will destiny to find his part of happiness and light

for PMs buddy me plz

Edited by aashikhan120 - 10 years ago