Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD II)

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#801

very intriguing and interesting update...keep it up..👍🏼

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Manishi1

@Manishi1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#802

Hi Dear,
I love this FF. One of the best FF i have read on India Forum. Keep posting. Thanks

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#803

So, a bit of ice is broken..Kushi is quick to realize that Arnav is in fact helping her in the guise of Divyesh, as always. She is relieved and thankful to him. Now, he admits that he WAS attracted to her. Now, he respects her and wants to be friends with her..yeah..FRIENDS with her...😆 And i am excited about the turn of events.

Terrified too..Poonam Raizada will soon pounce on Kushi..will she trace that it was Arnav behind the consolidating the shop owners against Anandrams. ..I am eager to know if Arnav will stand up against his mother this time..Will she really disappoint him?

I loved the "Couch." The scene was hilarious. It made me rofl along with Arnav. And the simmering chemistry for once blazed and Aman ruined it. Talking about Aman, if not for Kushi, who is he in love with? I am banging my head. Is it Payal...hmmm..Then what about Payal and Akash..and why did they fight? Well..is Akash putting his feet down and saying enough is enough. You Ought to Make a Decision to Payal?

And Shyam is back in Kushi's life. It was giving me creeps when you mentioned that someone was following or watching her. May be that someone may be Anandram's people. Or is it really Shyam? Renu bhabhi is hiding something for sure. And Akash does know something about her and I am eager to know what he does know abt her. Little children speak out the truth. But it is sad if she is playing against Kushi living under her roof. Will she stoop so low?

Why did Payal call Kushi to the holi? To plot against her? Payal is turning to be a shrewd than her father. Lobbying the minorities and then playing the game..But how could Akash fall for her then..I am mistaken?

Waiting eagerly for Holi party..it will be a dhamakedar event..

Edited by Onlooker - 10 years ago

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rosaline

@rosalinesibs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#804

now cant wait to read d next update...

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AsA333

@AsA333

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Posted: 10 years ago

#805

Superb update once again!!!!

Love Aarav; so reminded me of when I was young and did not want to change my school uniform after school especially when there was a holiday next day...

To your credit you have made us love each and every character in this story... You are amazing, fabulous, fantastic, realistic, sensitive, beautiful, great social awareness and on and on and on writer... Attention to detail in unbelievable...

Hopefully khushi will figure out this whole Renu bhabhi being mysterious deal soon; she sure is acting shady...

End of the day Raizada ladies have a heart and reached out to Arnav for not making it to the fashion show.

Really waiting for the notes from past that will shed more light what really went down between Poonam and Khushi that makes Arnav so confident that she will never come close to anyone in Raizada fmaily

Poonam acting strange - Arnav has been noticing for a while now and now Anjali noticed it too... Feel like there is a big news coming from there... wonder what??

Dialogue of the chapter - "I look forward to you and Payal faking it then."

LOL

That was some conversation Arnav Khushi had... Read it so many times over again... There are so in-sync every way you see... Gosh I cant wait for them to be married and around each other all the time; their understanding level is just amazing (wishful thinking - too early maybe)

Why did Arnav say that Payal's father told him about Khushi's troubles... It was in fact Anand Raizada who told him... Payal's father had told Payal but she had not said anything to Arnav... Confused here...

So endearing Arnav&Anjali also Arnav&Aman also Arnav&JunJiju conversation...

Arnav's reaction every-time they spoke about marrying Khushi was so cute...

First - cannot take Anjali mentioning that Aakash may marry Khushi

Second - he thinks Aman likes Khushi and is going to propose to her; must be so relieved when he said no.

Third - he admitted to jun jiju that he is attracted to Khushi

What coincidence that Poonam saw the log where Khushi had signed... Wonder what all she will presume especially when she misunderstood Aman for Khushi when Arnav said that he is happy because he met an old friend... Also wonder what she made him sign...

Payal Aakash arguing and arnav knows about it - really curious

Payal invited Khushi, definitely because of the idea she mentioned to her dad - she is up to something

Cant wait for the Holi update; have a feeling lots of revelations are going to happen there

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#806

Loved it as always! You are weaving such an intricate web with all the characters. The best part is that each of these characters have an important part to play in the story... Many things happened in the update, the most important one being that Khushi has figured out Arnav's involvement in all this. But of equal importance is the fact that Payal invited Khushi for her party - of course it was for an ulterior motive, but still... I had the same feeling/expression as Khushi after she talked with Payal.

Also Aman finally did come to meet Arnav. Wondering how the Renu bhabhi angle is going to pan out though... But definitely worried about the impending storm that Arnav's mom will bring about knowing that Khushi is in touch with her son. She really is evil! Also won't Arnav's mom go for the holi party? Oh, I hope there is no showdown at the party!

I hope you update sooner next time. 😛😊

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#807

Awesome ... Payal calling Khushi??!! What the!!

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#808

awe awesome awesome update...loved it...u have written it brilliant...so khushi and arnav really on good terms now...its so cool of khushi to understand that its arnav behind the shop thing...lovely...awesome meet up in office :)...every one entry awesome ...but arnav's mom ...i don't know seeing arnav believe in his mom that she not bad...for a sec i so wanted her to play the most positive role in bringing khushi arnav together...hehe...its a wild wish...but arnav's mom the only terror factor throughout...:)...payal is really going political in inviting khushi on holi or its really friendly gesture...time will tell...y she and akash arguing thats interesting point to know :)...so much in one chapter ...its amazing

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#809

I feel like I'm in a James Bond movie and Khushi is Bond James Bond😉

She figured out who's behind by just gazing at the photo frame.. That's why she is 007 😆

That sofa incident is really funny and congrats for the first ever rabba vey moment😉 Hopefully it escalates in the right direction😳

Poonam Raizada had to be there on the same day?🤢 That was weird for her to accept the receptionist demand to sign in. If she had told her the relation, would she still demand it😕

Yeh Renu bhabhi bahoot complicated ban rahi hain.. Time for Khushi to wear her Bond hat and act on her instincts!!

Arnav didn't explain What Samir Singh meant; Khushi assumed the total opposite of Samir's intention; Now Payal is onto something; eventually she will figure out, Arnav is behind the rescue of all those shops??

Yeah Arnav, you said the total opposite to Aman & Jun jiju on same day!! Why are you so confused?

Wow Payal said please to Khushi twice 👏

The minor accident has worked out its charms!!

You throw in tidbits that grow significantly later, for ex, what's up with Aakash arguing with Payal??

The mystery continues⭐️⭐️

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#810

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! So excited about the holi party! Also, my heartbeat quickened during the scene of arnav and khushi in the office! This story needs to be published someday as a book! I can never have enough of the Delhi local colour that the story is so generously sprinkled with.

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