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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: .chandu.parsh.

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Love your ff so much yr...
I read all the 18 parts at a stretch.
Totally unique story
U portrayed randhir as an angry but a sweet actor.. Love him..
Sanyukta tolerates a lot indeed... She is so pure and innocent!!!
Love ramu kaka too... The way she bought new suit for him, cooked food for him were so cute n touching..
Rd-arpita bond made me to wonder... Yeah, now I badly want a brother like him 😆
Sanyu-arpita bond is so lovely.. Parth <3 him too
Love rd sooo much 😳
The proposal of raj is cancelled huh??
Rd is so caring n he luves her??
Sanyu started to feel for him..
He is hiding her earring n she, his towel.. So cute n he knew it... Akdu sir...
Awesome awesome ff.. N for this a tight huggy for u...
If possible can you pm me???
Congratulations on your new thread... ⭐️👏
Continue soon yr.. Can't wait for the next <3

Love
Chandu 😳

awww thats soo nice of u
thank u soo much dear😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: aavani

congrats for ur 2nd thread...👏

part 18 was awsome...loved it...😊
please continue soon...😊

thank u soo much dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
thank u😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sweetshre

hey congratulations pari...!
for the new thread...!
May u make many such threads of this story!!!

thank u soo much yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: -Glitz-

Hearty congo pari
u deserve tis.
i want party :)

thank u soo much dear
ohho party,lekin pocket money poori khatam yaar😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Areesha566

congratz for new thread

part 18

it was amazing

thank u dear,i hope u r fine now
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: aronytas

wow!!
nice yar!!
thank yu 4 pm!

thanx a lot dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: sanyugracy27

AMAZING
randhir past was so touchy
loved it

thank u soo much yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: yashika.angel

hey u just got a new reader read the whole ff in a go
amazing story line loved ur work
update soon...😉

wow,thank u yaar,thank u soo much😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Part 19

She lifts her face only t find rd leaning on the door with hands folded in front of his chest

And smirking but now for sanyu this smirk was no more annoying...

Sanyu-woh sir woh mein wound ki dressing kar rahi thi

Rd-yeah i can see that

Saying so he goes near her,his face still emotionless his hazel eyes all cold

He takes the cotton ball which was in her hand and brings it onto her wound but

Before it could touch her wound she caught hold of his wrist and he looks at her,

Her eyes shut tight and her lips chanting something

Rd-let go miss aggarwal

Hearing that she opens her eyes and finds her hand around his wrist,her eyes

Widens in shock and she leaves his wrist at once and mutters a small sorry

Rd again brings that cotton to her wound and before placing it on her wound

He looks at her face,her eyes still closed and her murmers still on and finally

He places the cotton onto her wound and she opens her mouth to scream but

It didn't came as his one hand was holding the cotton and his other hand covering

Her mouth and he was blowing air onto her wound,she was looking at his face

And was thinking abt the things kaka told her and didn't notice when rd

Was done with dressing her wound and went to the washroom,on reaching

The washroom door he turns to her

Rd-its over,u can close ur mouth

Thats when she realizes that she was thinking with her mouth open

Sanyu-thank u sir

But he was gone,after some 15 min rd comes out of the bathroom wearing a black vest

And black track pants and drying his hair with towel,sanyu was still sitting on the bed

And on seeing rd she tries to step out of the bed to go to her room but sits back wincing

In pain

Rd-where the hell do u think u r going miss aggarwal

Sanyu-sir woh i was going to the wardrobe

Rd-i think i've told u that i don't like to repeating myself and i've told u to rest here for

The next three days

Sanyu-but sir then where u will sleep?

Rd- i will sleep in the hall or somewhere

sanyu[shouts]-nooo

Rd[covering his ears]-oh god miss aggarwal,why r u shouting

Sanyu-i mean sir no u can't sleep in hall,pls sir u can sleep in this room

I will go to the wardrobe

Rd-look miss aggarwal i don't like to repeat myself,u r sleeping here

Sanyu-fine thn u'll also sleep here only

Suddenly rd smirks and before sanyu can react rd jumps onto the bed right next to

Sanyu and she tries to get off the bed but wasn't able to because of the pain

Sanyu-si...sir...wha...what r u doing?

Rd-why,u asked me to sleep here,i m just following ur instructions[smirking]

Thn sanyu also smirks and lies on the bed comfortably

Sanyu-ok fine,lets sleep

Now it was rd's turn to look shocked and he suddenly steps out of bed

Rd-r u out of ur mind miss aggarwal

Sanyu[pouting]-haaw why?i was following my boss's order

Rd-oh just shut up

Saying so he goes out to have his dinner and sanyu giggles

Sanyu-such a cute akdu...huh "cute"? Mein kabse sir ko

Cute bolne lagi...shayad dawai ka asar hai,god,i'll go crazy

I should catch some sleep

She was abt to drift off to sleep when rd calls or should i say shouts

Rd-miss aggarwal,miss aggarwal

Sanyu sits with a jerk and rd literally brags into the room

Rd-how dare u miss aggarwal

Sanyu[mind]-ab iss bed pe lete lete meine kya kar diya[to rd]-sir?

Rd-how dare u skip ur food

Sanyu[sighing]-oh food,woh sir i was waiting for

Rd-for what?

Sanyu[confused]-huh?

Rd-i asked,why were u waiting for me

Sanyu[in mind]-huh?woh bhi sahi hai,mein kyu sir ka wait kar rahi thi[to rd]sir mein

Woh haan mein kaka se to nahi bol sakti na ki mujhe utha ke dining chair

Par rakhne ko

Rd[raising an eyebrow]-what do u think i m miss aggarwal a "porter"

Sanyu-no way sir,how can u be a porter coz i m not a luggage[she giggles at her

Own joke and rd glares at her]i m sorry

Rd goes near her and picks her up and starts walking to the dining space

Rd-waise a porter will die if he tries to pick u up,tum kitni moti ho miss aggarwal

Sanyu's mouth forms a complete "o" and rd keeps her on the chair

Sanyu-aarrrgghhh...mein moti nahi hoon...i hate u

Rd-did i asked u to love me?

Sanyu's eyes widens in shock and thn she shifts her eyes to the plate in front of her

And starts eating whatever was there on the plate,soon they were done with their

Dinner and rd again picks her up and takes her to the bedroom and places her on the bed

Sanyu[hesitantly]-ammm sir

Rd turns to her-yes miss aggarwal

Sanyu-nothing sir[she lays on the bed and rd sets his quilt on the sofa but he can

See that sanyu wasn't sleeping but was shifting on the bed]

Rd sits on the couch and then looks at sanyu

Rd-whats it miss aggarwal?

Sanyu stops shifting and sits on the bed

Sanyu-amm woh sir

Rd-c'mon miss aggarwal u don't have this whole night

Sanyu-amm sir i need to go to the washroom

Rd-to jao na,i m not ur teacher that u r asking me "sir may i go to the toilet"[mimicking her]

Sanyu-pls just stop it,u were the one who asked me not to step out of the bed

And now u r mocking me[she makes a crying face]

Rd goes to her and picks her up and walks to the washroom

Rd-actually u can try for and acting career,u make nice stupid faces

Sanyu-whatever

Rd-places her inside the washroom and thn comes out and closes the door

Rd-just call me once u r done

Sanyu[from inside]-ok

After 10 mins sanyu calls him and rd goes inside and picks her up

Sanyu-amm sir woh i need to go to the waardrobe

Rd-listen miss aggarwal i don't like to repeat myself,u r not sleeping there

Sanyu-sir i need to change

Rd-oh,ok

Then he takes her to the wardrobe and she was done in 15 mins and rd

Takes her to the bed and places her on the bed and he himself goes to the couch

And closes his eyes,sanyu was looking at him and was thinking of what kaka

Told her but her trance was broken by rd's voice

Rd-what r u looking at miss aggarwal

Hearing that she covers her face with the quilt and switches off the lights and the

Only light was the moon light coming from the window,after some time she peeps

Through her quilt to find if rd was crying but he just shifts and sanyu again covers

Face with the quilt and soon drifts off to sleep

At around 2:00 am

Sanyu wakes up with a voice of sniffing and she rubs her eyes and looks around

And then she realizes that it was rd,his eyes were closed but tears were continuously

Flowing through his cheeks and falls onto the pillow,his face was reflecting pain

And sorrow,she steps out of the bed and starts walking and was wincing in pain

But she can't stop herself and when she reaches him she could hear him mumbling

Rd-pls don't fight mom and dad,pls pls

Sanyu-sir

But he was continuously mumbling the same thing

Sanyu-sir[she keeps her hand on his forehead and shifts a few strands of hair]

Rd stops mumbling and she caresses his hair again

And suddenly rd gets up and hugs her

Rd-pls don't leave me,pls don't leave me[his arms were getting tighter with each word]

Sanyu[caressing his hair]-i will not leave u,shhh its ok,i m here,shhh,calm down

Rd-pls don't leave me

Sanyu-i m here sir,i'll not leave u

But suddenly rd jerks her off and she stumbles but balances herself

Rd-just stay away from me miss aggarwal,pls,pls stay away

Sanyu[confused]-but sir

Rd-pls miss aggarwal pls,leave me alone

Saying so he goes out of the room and here sanyu lays on the couch and

Covers herself with his quilt and tries to sleep on the couch so that when rd comes

He can sleep on the bed but when she closes her eyes,his tear stricken face comes in

Front of her

howz it guys,pls do tell me and don't forget to hit the lke button😊

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