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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ikshu

it was soo cute

thanks fr the pm

thank u dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anuja78

loved this part...
especially cute wala scene...
hehehe...
last part was really sweet where they were indirectly speaking to each other.

thank you soo much dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: havi

Hey rd n sanyu were so cute...

It was lovely...
Update next part soon
Waiting
Geeth

thanx a lot yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi

awesome update dear.

lovely piece of writing dear.

thank u dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 29

Arpi[to parth]-arrey yeh kya ho raha tha

Parth-tumhare sadu bhai apna pyaar dikha rahe the

Arpi-hey bhai ko sadu mat bulao

Parth-ab sadu ko sadu nahi to aur kya bulaon

Arpi-just don't talk to me[pouts]

Parth-god these hormones...arey mera baby,mein to mazak kar raha tha

Come here[he hugs her]

Arpita-mmm[breaks the hug]waise bhai,sanyukta ka pair kaisa hai

Hearing that rd suddenly stops eating and thn looks at the calender

Rd-that girl is soo stupid

Parth-oey aivey kyu daant raha hai usse

Rd-she has to meet the doc today to examine her wound

Parth-ohho bada yaad hai tujhe uske appointments ke baare mien

He cups his chin with his hands placing it on the dining table followed by everyone

Sitting on the table

Arpi-waise woh apki assistant hai ya app uske [winks]

Rd-shut up u guys,mujhe koi farak nahi padta...woh jae ya na jae..i don't care

Parth-to humne kaha kya that u care

Rd-whatever

He starts eating and after some time harsh starts coughing and thats

when rd realizes That harsh was sitting right next to him,he takes

a glass of water and makes him drink And thn pats his back,soon his

coughs seizes

Harsh-thank u..bet...

Rd[cutting him off]-guys..i m going out...arpi parth aur baki sab yahi dinner

karenge aaj

He goes from there

Arpi-arpi..parth..yeh baki sab kaun hai

Parth-arrey baby..indirectly dad ko bol raha tha

Harsh was smiling since the moment rd left...as soon as rd leaves sanyu comes

from the Kitchen door

Sanyu-guys

Every turns to her with a startled look

Arpi-hein...sanyu tum to sets pe gayi thi na?

Sanyu-jake aa bhi gayi..meine raj ko bol diya hai sab sambhal lega

Lekin hame yaha pe bohot bada mission accomplish karna hai

Parth-kaunsa mission

Sanyu-aap log bhool gaye..do din baad sir ka birthday hai,hame preparations nahi

Karni hai kya

Everyone's excitement level falls to zero

Arpi-bhai apna birthday nhi manate sanyukta...he hates birthdays..unko to yeh bhi

Nahi pasand ki koi unhe wish kare and mostly uss din woh ghar par nahi aate

Sanyu's face also shows her disppointment as she thought that if he'll get busy with

His birthday party and all..he might forget abt his mother's second marriage but her

Plan was already dumped into the bin...but again her face lightens up

Sanyu-sir ko wish se problem hai na..gift se to nahi...hum unko gift denge

Arpi-lekin bhai koi gift nahi lenge

Sanyu-to unke haath mein kaun dene wala hai hum to unke room mein denge

Arpi-matlab

Sanyu-matlab...hum sir ka woh bhootiya room change karenge aur kuch accha

Human beings ke rehene layakk banaenge..what say?

Parth-plan to accha hai..par hum log karnge kya

Sanyu-sabse pehele to..woh jo kaale baadal jaisa paint hai room ka woh

change karenge

Everyone chuckles at her expression

Harsh-accha phir?

Sanyu-haan phir hum woh darawani pictures replace karenge...unn pictures ko

Dekh ke aisa lagta hai jaise koi horror movie ki cast ho

Parth-thats abstract paintings and modern art[chuckling]

Sanyu-whatever...iskeliye hume pehele sir ko yaha se bahgana hoga for 2 days

Everyone-what?

Sanyu looks at them confused

Sanyu-yeah

Arpi-no chance..bhai ko unke solace se door rakhna is impossible

Sanyu-ohho arpi..everything is possible...coz impossible is itself saying

I-m-possible

Parth-accha maate..zara bataogi ki kaise karenge

Sanyu-listen...then she murmers smt to everyone

Afetr listening to her harsh falls back to his chair

Harsh-are u sure this will work

Sanyu-ofcourse,sir dikhate nahi hai...but he do cares

Parth-accha tujhe bada pata hai

Sanyu-haan woh...to...aisa hai ki...i...i

Arpi-kya baby..chodo

Parth-ok ok,so whats our first step

Sanyu-first step is fainting[smiles widely]

Everyone-okie

Here rd was driving through the highway going to the same old age home he use to

Visit every Sunday to escape his own worries and lack of peace

Rd's pov

Why the hell am i this worried for that stupid girl...she's making me

Crazy...rd save urself before things go out of ur hands...just

Be the one u were before she came to ur life...no wait she is not

Into my life...she is noone important to me...yes

Just be that cold,arrogant person that u are

End of pov

He stops his car in front of a huge gate with a board "jamunadas old age home"

The watchman opens the gate and he drives it into the car porch and

Steps out of it...a lady in her late 50s welcomes him

Lady-hello sir...

Rd-hello nirupama ji...how are you

Lady-i m fine sir...app last week nahi aae...all fine na

Rd-yes...maa ji kaisi hai?

Lady-bas sir...koi improvement nahi hai...waise hi hai unki condition

Rd-hmm

They were walking through the corridor

Nirupama-sir...thank you soo much for sponsoring her...or else she could...

Rd[cutting in between]-nirupama ji...i do things which i believe is necessary

I don't do things for anyone's sake

They reach in front of a door

Nirupama-yes sir

She leaves from there and rd opens the door

It was a room with minimal furniture...it consist of a double bed...with white

Bed covers and duvet...a side table with a lamp...a table just opposite

To the bed...on the wall was a painting and a window with white blinds on

It..a lady in her late 40s was sitting on the wheel chair in front of the window

Looking at the garden

Rd-maa

The lady just turns for a fraction of min and thn resumes her old position

Rd walks towards her and sits on the floor near her leg and thn rests his head

On her lap and that lady keeps her hand on his head...it was their routine

Rd-maa...apko pata hai woh aurat jisne mujhe paida kia...usne dusri shaadi

Karli...mere dad ko dhoka dene ke baad bhi unko thodi si bhi

Sharam nahi aae[a tear falls from his eyes and the lady strokes

His hair]

It was a routine for rd...at the end of every week he would drive to the outskirts

of Mumbai to this old age home to meet this particular person whom he feels

Much more connected than anyone else...even though that person had

Never replied to any of his words but he finds his solace in that lap and

That caress

Rd-maa...app kab mujhse baat karoge...mein mann se

Chahta hoon ki app mujhse baat karein magar darta hoon

Ki kahi app bhi mujhe chod to nahi chali jaengi na...

Maa,woh meine bataya tha na ek sanyukta ke baare mein jo uss

Din meri wajah se uske pair mein chot aa gayi thi...mujhe

Na aaj kal uski bohot fikar hoti hai...mujhe bohot

Darr lag raha hai maa kyuki woh bhi to ek mahine baad chali

Jaegi aur fir mera kya hoga maa...meri life kya kabhi normal

Nahi ho paegi...

He talks all his worries to her and sleeps in the same position

But was interruped by a knock on the door...he goes and opens the door

On the door there was a nurse

Nurse-sir unka khana aur dawai

Rd-give it to me

Nurse-ok sir

Rd takes the food and medicine and closes the door door

Rd-chalo maa...lets eat the food

He feeds her and thn feeds her the medicine and thn wipes her mouth with towel

Rd-chalo maa lets go out for a walk

He takes her out and they had a walk in the garden...soon it was

Evening and rd's time to leave

He takes her back to her room and makes her lay on the bed after feeding her

The dinner

Rd-maa mujhe jana hoga [he kisses her forehead] next week aaonga

He steps out of the room and wises nirupama

Rd-agar koi urgency aae to call me...no matter what time it is

Nirupama-yes sir

Rd takes his cheque book and writes an amount and tears it off and gives

it to nirupama

Nirupama-thank you sir

Rd just nods,sits in his car and goes from there...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vo toh sanyu ki mom hai na?? Agar meri guess galat hai toh ... will try nxt time
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Posted: 10 years ago
he do cares for sanyukta alot.. Otherwise why would he share the fear of her going away from him from that lady..
why do I feel that the lady has connection with sanyukta..
And sanyuktas description of his room was apt..
So funny..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yr I really Waits for the updates

It was lovely as alwz
Rd worried for sanyu
Everybody teasing him

He's still confused with his feelings

Sanyu k plan mission b'day

I just hope kuch ulata na ho jye


Awww rd is so sensitive and pure
Who's that Lady
He's very hurt bcz of her mom


Update soon

Cnt wait

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update pari di🤗
plz update asap:))

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