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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyanka.saha

fab updt

arpi is a superb planner
love the car scene
updt soon

thanx dear
hey that credit should be mine😆
will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sudipto-69

its awesome superb lovely

lovely lovely lovely
very very nice update
love it. update asap.😃

thank u meri pyaari chotu😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SWA1992

Awesome yaarrr...loved it to core

thank u dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 26

so this part is dedicated to my dear doodh[shruti]aka holysoul

hey dear i hope now i'll be forgiven😆

They were abt to enter and sanyu was feeling really secured with rd's hand

Curled around her waist but before entering he stops and drops his hands from

her waist.

Rd-u fine miss aggarwal

Sanyu-yes sir

Rd-ok so,stay calm and stay with me

Sanyu-yes sir

Rd-good

He holds her hand and steps inside the hall,it was smt like this

Sanyu was scared after watching all the celebrities and moreover she

Was attending such kinda parties for the first time in her life,she was

Feeling uncomfortable with herself

As soon as they enter karan along with his gf vidhushi comes

Karan-hey rd ma bro,finally u got time to come to my party

Atleast

Rd[hugging him]-yeah,was a bit busy for a past few months

Happy birthday vidhushi

Vidu[hugging him]-thanx rd

Karan looks at sanyu

Sanyu-hey i've seen u somewhere

Sanyu didn't say anything and looks at rd

Rd[breaking the hug with vids]-yeah u might have,she was on the sets

When u came to give the invitation

Karan-yeah right,wow u look entirely different from that day ammm...

Sanyukta right

He hugs her but sanyu just gives and awkward smile

Rd-hey aren't we invited inside

Karan breaks the hug

Karan-ofcourse,chal

Rd holds sanyu by her waist and pulls her towards him,the hold was so

Sudden and strong that a small gasp escapes her mouth only audible to rd

She looks at rd for his sudden reaction but his face was as always expressionless

Rd[wispers to her]-we have to act as a couple

Sanyu[as if coming out of dream]-huh?...hmmm ok

They walk to meet the rest of the celebrities,wherever rd was going

Sanyu was following him as his puppy

Thats when vidhushi comes

Vids-hey sanyukta,tum kya rd ke peeche peeche ghoom rahi ho

Lets have some girls time

Sanyu looks at rd

Rd-thats fine vidhushi i would prefer her staying with me

Vids-really..that sounds strange from your mouth,u know sanyukta before u

He don't even likes girls coming near him...lucky girl haan

[she hugs her and says smt in her ear for which sanyukta blushes

But also looks a bit shocked]

Vids-right?

Sanyu-amm woh...i...i

Vids-oh dear u are so innocent,rd ko tum mili is yet another shock

To me,c'mon rd u can spare her for a few hours...come

Sanyukta

She drags her from there ingnoring words of protest from sanyu and

A cold glare from rd

She takes her to another sets of chair surrounding the dance floor opposite

To rd,there another bespectacled girl was sitting in a lovely cocktail

Dress

Vids-come sanyukta,this is kaustuki,my friend and kaustu this is sanyukta

Rd's ad

At the mention of the word ad sanyu looks at vidhushi shocked

Vids-pls yaar don't look at me like that,i know...woh mein aur arpita

We were classmates and best friends,so u know[winks]

Sanyu-ohhh,thn woh apne jo thodi der pehle kaha

Vids-hey woh sach tha,rd sach mein women repellent types hai

She giggles

Kaustu-heya guys i m here too

Sanyu-oh hi,app bhi movies mein hai kya?

Kaustu-no way,i don't like it,btw i m a lawyer by profession

Well me and vids are childhood friends

Vids-yeah but mom ne isse meri local gaurdian bana ke bheja hai

The trio laughs and sanyu thinks

Can these people be this friendly to a commoner

Vids-hey wanna have a drink

Sanyu-i'd prefer a soft drink

Vids-ok thn lets grab a drink

They go to the drinks counter,sanyu takes a coke whereas vids order's a cocktail

And kaustuki was sipping her own drink

When they hear a squeal,the trio looks around and finds a girl

Literally falling on rd with her arms curled around his neck

Vids-lo aa gayi,Miss neha

Sanyu recognizes her as neha desai one of the leading actresses

Vids-waise sanyukta tonight rd is urs so bacha ke rakha usse

Bohot chipakti rehti hai usse

Sanyu just smiles

Here on rd table

Neha-oh rd,where have u been,i missed u soo much,i think we should do

Another story together

Rd[breaking the hug]-sure i'll talk to parth abt that

Neha-hey i heard arpita is 3 months pregnant

Rd[smiling]-yeah

Neha-aww that might be the reason they are not here haan

Rd-yeah,she needs rest and sanyukta said that it will not be

Good for the baby if she'll come to such noisy and crowded

Places

Neha-ohh...hey is this sanyukta her doc,never heard of that name

But before rd could answer,they hear vids calling her

Vids-hey neha

Neha-hey darlo,happy birthday

Hey share a hug

Vids-oh btw this is sanyukta,rd's date,i guess u were asking abt her

Neha looks at sanyukta for a few mins and thn

Neha-oh hi,so u r a doc by profession

Sanyu-hi,and no i m not a doc,i m a mechanical engineer

Neha-oh k[turning to rd]so rd aren't we gonna get to see a grand performance

Of yours today

Rd-amm i don't...[but before he could complete]

Vids-aww pls rd yaar,pls karle na,see i the birthday girl here and its my wish

Rd-ok fine

Karan smiles and shouts

Karan-dj,lets have an amazing song worth the rocking steps of RSS

Everyone hoots and the song starts[its from the movie tum bin]

Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey...[he opens his coat buttonsand walks towards the dance floor]

Suru Ru Ru Ru Ru ....[same as that of the movie steps]

(kuchh Roop Usaka Mehaka Kuchh Main Bhi Behaka Behaka

Masti Mein Dil Ye Gaane Laga Suru Ru Ru Ru Ru...) - 2



Usape Meri Nazar Woh Mujhase Bekhabar Hai - 2

Mujhe Pyar Usape Aane Laga Hay

Kuch Roop Usaka Mehaka Kuch Main Bhi Behaka Behaka

Masti Mein Dil Ye Gane Laga Suru Ru



Pehele Na Thi Itani Bekarar Zindagi

Na Jaane Kyun Aisa Lagta Hai Kabhi Kabhi

Tanhai Raat Mein Woh Mere Baat Mein

Uska Ehasas Mere Dil Mein Jaagne Laga

Pucho Na Haal Hai Kya Jhoomen Dil Aaj Mera

Kahi Mera Hosh Kho Na Jaye

Kuchh Roop Uska Mehka Kuchh Main Bhi Behaka Behaka

Masti Mein Dil Ye Gaane Laga Suru Ru Ru Ru...

Rd was constantly looking at sanyu but it seems that he was trying hard not

to look at her as he averts his gaze to someone else

Usaki Nazar Kuchh To Kam Aisa Kar Gayi

Na Jaane Kab Mere Dil Mein Woh Utar Gayi

Aab Tak Anjaan Thaa Main Jana Hai Aaj Ye

Dil Ki Araman Use Paane Ko Machal Gaye

Dil Ne Use Jaan Liya

Maine Pehchan Liya Koi Use Aaj Ye Bataye

Kuch Roop Uska Mehaka Kuch Main Bhi Behaka Behaka

Masti Mein Dil Ye Gane Laga Suru Ru



Usape Meri Najar O Mujhase Bekhabar Hai - 2

Mujhe Pyar Usape Aane Laga Hay

(kuch Roop Usaka Mehaka Kuch Main Bhi Behaka Behaka

Masti Mein Dil Ye Gane Laga Suru Ru ) - 2

Suru Ru Ru Ru...

Soon the song ends and everyone hoots as he walks back to his friends

Neha again hugs him but he distances her and closes his coat buttons

Everyone congratulates him

Karan-dekha issliye kehta hoon,he is so damn a big competition

Awesome man

Rd-thanx

Karan-[handing him a drink]here have it

Vids-thanx rd

Rd give a nod

Thats when a group a people who were looking like businessmen

Karan-hi Mr.ahuja and Mr.waliya

Men-hello

Karan-guys they are my business associates

They indulge in a talk and the girls excuse themself from there

Karan-so mr ahuja,what made u to be this late

Ahuja-nothing,its just that we were having another party,u see its

Mrs,renuka saniyal oh i mean renuka mehra's first wedding anniversary

Karan-oh yeah i just forgot that

On hearing that name rd who was taking slow sips from his drink stops and

Suddenly his eyes become blood shot red ,thn he drinks it in one go

The others continue their talks

Karan-btw,noone know who was her first husband right?

Ahuja-right,but there is a rumor that she has got two children too

Karan-hmmm,thats kinda mysterious,noone knows anything abt them

Ahuja-yeah

Not able to hear anymore,rd excuses himself from there and he goes to the bar

Here even though sanyu was with vids,kaustu and neha,her mind was

Occupied in thinking abt rd's performance,she don't know why but

She felt like it was smt related top her

Sanyu[in mind]-huh,wake up sanyukta,don't live in ur fantasies

But her trance was broken by vidhushi's talks

Vids-oh shit rd phir se drink kar raha hai

She was abt to go when karan calls her and so she asks sanyukta to

Go to rd

Sanyukta walks towards him in a hurry and keeps her hand on his shoulder

Sanyu-sir

Rd turns to her and she finds his eyes red shot and he was continuously drinking

One after the other

Sanyu-sir,come lets go home

Rd comes near her and keep his index finger on her lips

Rd-shhh,don't call me that,warna sab ko pata chal jaega that i m a looser

That i don't even have a girlfriend,huh

Sanyu-ok,come lets

Rd-ok,lets go

He stands from there but was abt to fall when sanyu catches him

And keeps his hand around her shoulder and she holds him by his waist

Thats when vids come

Vids-oh shit

Sanyu-woh,koi back door hai jaha media na ho

Vids-haan tum chalo mere saath

Sanyu-haan ek min

She takes rd's phone and calls his driver

They takes rd from the back door without anyone noticing

She makes rd sit on the back seat and thn she turns to vids

Sanyu-i m soo sorry for this and happy birthday

Vids-thats fine yaar and thanx

They share a hug and sanyu sits in the car

For a few mins rd was silent thn he again starts saying

Rd-u know sanyukta,ajj kya spl hai

Sanyu-vidhushi ka birthday

Rd-uske alawa

Sanyu-woh..i don't know sir

Rd-yeah how would u know,but wait i'll tell today is my mother's

First wedding anniversary with her new husband[he gives out a mocking laugh]

Sanyu don't know what to say

Rd-but unhone mujhe hi invite nahi kiya,yeh theek hai kya

Sanyukta...no no no miss aggarwal...haan thats

Better

Sanyu-sirrr,we reached

Rd-oh we reached

He steps out of the and stumbles towrds the door and rings the bell with

shaking hands kaka opens the door but was shocked to see rd fully drunk and

Sanyu following him with a sad face

Kaka-baba,yeh sab

Rd-dekha kaka,ajj meine promise nahi toda,ajj i took the driver with me

Saying so he goes to the mini bar in the living room takes a bottle and starts

Drinking

Kaka and sanyu goes to him

Kaka caresses his hair

Kaka-kya hua rd baba

Rd-apko pata hai ajj kya hai[kaka nods in a no]miss aggarwal app

Batao

she keep quite

Rd-theek hai main hi batata hoon,ajj na uss aurat ki anniversary hai

Jo kabhi meri maa thi,aur woh bhi 1st wedding anniversary

He laughs loudly and takes the bottle and goes inside saying

Rd-wedding anniversary...

how was it guys,do tell me and pls do hit the like button and leave ur reviews too

love

pari

Edited by pari1995 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME ONE PARIII
LOVED IT...AND THE DANCE JUST TOOK MY HEART AWAY😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it... they r slowly coming closer.. awesome writting.. Thanks for the early update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks a lot
Pari ...
U r forgiven long back re .
.coming to update.
It was amazing yaaar ...
Poor rd ...
Update asap
Love
Doodh
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Posted: 10 years ago
what a cracking update dear.

lovely piece of writing dear.

do update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it
awesome update
thanks for the pm

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